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This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

aiight i cant vote but buck.shot

dont switch up your structure and flow to this..its fuckin ugly and its gonna make you lose LOL..just stick to

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cause this looks ugly

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u know...lol...

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Yeah Kon i feel you....
i prolly am gon lose this battle.....

i didnt get my point across as well i should of in the openin like 6 lines, the rest was alright, but the openin few bars let me down..

^ yeah, no hate or nothing, but the first line especially, its like 5 words? yeah, but the eyes in the rear, i actually laughed at then when i read it, haha, uppin

Yeah u had some aight stuff too
the crew line tho? lol we both i left them crews, lol...

but its straight no hate, your decent an down ta earth, propps too ya, we gotta have round 2 after this tho, i went rthru a faze of trynna fix my structure, an i eventually have now, an this battle was evidence that tryin new things just dont work lol

Uppin tho

yeah, i hear ya....haha, the crew, just seem to fit, yes, and round 2 will come, some day...........haha.............uppin

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