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Voted For: Kesse
kesse: you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums ^^^okay opener...COULD OF MADE DIS BETTA your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease ^^^LOL..GOOD PERSONAL still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name ^^^NAH WASN'T FEELIN i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth ^^^LOL...HOTT glock: I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup... "Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]... ^^^UMM I C NOTHIN BUT A MULTI Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick... Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It... ^^?????WHUT Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static... "Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It... ^^^U JUST TALKIN ABOUT YASELF FAM..U SUPPOSE DA BE BATTLIN I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped... Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped... ^^^OKAY CLOSER...DA BEST LINE OUT YA WHOLE VERSE.. VOTE/KESSE......RETURN DA FAVOR MY BATTLE VERSE ORION For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips... You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips... |
oh and return da favor ya'll.....links in da sig or i will send a virus 2 ur computer
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This was feedback posted for Kesse
Checkin my the polls.
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Kesse got his,
you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums Nice punch quite funny. 7/10 your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease another good punch 7/10 still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name Probably could have been worded differently but still hit 6/10 i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth Wasnt as good as your others, but good for a finisher 6.5/10 Glock, yours was just multies which was good for flow and shit, but didnt have any proper personals kesse got it overall for harder hitting punches and personals. No hate glock. RTF Link in sig. |
couldnt vote coz i dont have enough posts, so theres feed^
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Voted For: Kesse
meh.... one sided to me... you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums ^funny line right there 7/10 your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease ^not that much of a punch but decent 5/10 still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name ^niceness 7/10 i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth ^good ass closer.. 8/10 I feel like you switched up your style for this battle, but i liked what you did to it, structure was off but i don't care about structure, good verse I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup... "Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]... ^Meh... gangsterism is a no no.. word 4/10 Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick... Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It... ^same thing as the last ryhme 4/10 Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static... "Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It... ^still same thing, its very repititive, i honestly don't even wanna read this anymore 4/10 I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped... Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped... ^that was a little better but still the same thing 5/10 For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips... You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips... ^same same same 4/10 you got potentiol but you said the same thing over and over and over again.. kesse made you look bad.. and all i can say about kesse is hes probably dead cause thats all your verse was sayin... mix it up homie... |
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