This is so great I jizzed my shorts..
nah...nice verse overall but you getta 3/100 for not praising BC 45/50

BC is dope... there now you know I'm godly. thanks for the feed.

word you had a nice hook there. some good use of metaphores, nice flow good syllable count. decent stucutre. yep this could be a OM of the month again word to what In Vision said. the imagery was very well done. im feeling this. i was flowin wit this to some ozone beat i found and it worked well. word.
rtf on a vote:) links in the sig.
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iight man... thanks for the feed back.

man this was cool, like yur usuage of vocab, structure was cool, flow was cool...different from most which is cool, like the originality...overal 8.98/10... I got a OM comin later tonight...rtf it'll be called Meanine Pants... Secretary of State signing out this bitch....

damn man some good shit here nice metas wordplay was tight ya verses were very vivid...nice shit 8.5/10

thanks all three of you... either I've already left feed on your oM or I'll rtf... thanks for taking the time to read...

This is one of the dopest OM's i have ever read on here, EVER. Period. Emotions was good, crazy imagery, as soon as i started readin' this, only one thing came to mind, OM of the month, possibly the year. This shit was crazy nice, keep up that shit.

-CJ-

Wow village...best shit Ive read from you...

The vocab was insane...Imagery in the hook was ill....the flow was good throught out...the structure was cool...u had some typo's but i dont blame yah, it was a long piece....very hot topic forreal...every thing was on point and in depth...9.9/10...fix the typos and oyu get a 10/10 ;)

Amazing piece man

yo nice shit man. im mad i put off readin this till today. some of the best shit i read in a min. me you and the real indeph gotta collab sometimes. you had so much raw emotion in this shit man. this drop right here definately deserves a nomination for om of the month. you got my vote man. SHit was beautiful. keep it up son.

RTF... when i get my om up

thanks y'all... I'll rtf on monday when I can get on a good computer.

ahhhh, VP with another dope drop... you just keep em coming huh? lol nice shit, keep it up, this was sick, great meta's, nice flow, structure, good drop, didnt stretch your lines, I liked this a lot, 9/10

I'll tell the truth.. that was one of your weak open mics....
i just wasnt feeling it.. what happened man.. i luved all your other open mics...
7.8/10

I aint saying your shiit was horrible. it just.. i didn't like it that much..
but no doubt you are the best om writer in the site...