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Voted For: SoLo

Solo- Your verse was nice...you had some good punches...very good punches actually...you had alot of better and good personals...also wordplay was good too...structure was aight..easy to read n all...overall- 8.9/10 For Better punches & personals..

Mike Lowery(Spul Whoever)- Your verse was nice...your punches were good too but some were weak or they just didnt hit hard or whatever...you had some aight personals also..but overall- 7.1/10..Because your punches werent better then Solo's...But overall good battle guys..

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Voted For: SoLo

Aight Check It..

.::SpuL::.

I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
This Was Aight..4/10
His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
Ugh..Really Has No Meaning Here..4/10
This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
Good Bar, but I've Used That Concept A Lot 5/10
If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
Fake Personal...Yes. 3/10
You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
Your Best Bar..8/10 Decent
This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L
Decent Closer...6/10

Spuls Overall Verse: 30/60

.::King Solo::.

Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
Nice Personal..6/10
As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)
Ugh...Wack. 3/10
The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…
Decent...Good Personal 7/10
^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…
Blah...5/10
Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…
Nice...7/10
Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…
Closer=Weak..4/10

Solo's Overall Verse: 32/60

Vote = King Solo For Better Personals and Punches.

~R~

............................*humpin ya mama again*....................................

This was feedback posted for SoLo
 

checkin the polls and solo if your in livin legendz you spelled it wrong but i doubt you are

Voted For: Mike Lowery

I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
5/10...want feelin it
His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
7/10...liked this punch, plus the link was useful
This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
8/10...nice punch-leading line, real good personal too
If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
7/10...nice but the first line cood have been a lil improved
You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
7/10...didnt like the filler but the personal in 2nd line was nice
This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L
9/10...nice punch leader and dope fucking closer


Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
7/10...pretty nice but you had a filler
As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)
7/10...nice but not really effective
The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…
7/10...nice personal here
^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…
6/10...wasnt feeling this
Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…
5/10...nah
Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…
6/10...didnt like this closer

overall:
opener-s
closer-m
multies-s
punches-m
persinals-m

this battle was dope, solo you had a good verse but jsut had hard competition so no hate...mike you brought fucking heat...
nice battle yall

v/mike lowery