Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Solo

RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin…
I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin…
7/10.. niice opener.
Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell…
Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”…
5/10 told me my line was played?.. this is to then.
I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat…
Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet…
7.5/10 pretty creative.
Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring…
Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King…
8/10 good personal.
This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin…
Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… *
7/10 dont explain.. no one likes that.
Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High…
Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die…
8/10 Good closer.

42.5/60


MaRVJay1009

in a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still.
solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill".
9/10 Good opener.
u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK.
but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K!
7/10 pretty nice wordplay.
wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats.
solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak".
9/10 lol, nice punch
ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's.
not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".*
6/10 alright personal
u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist".
i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat".
5/10 played.
fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne.
y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own".
8/10 good punch, threw flow off a little.

44/60

OVERALL - very good battle, and very close, but Marv had the better punches, and a pretty solid flow. Good wordplay and creativity. Good battle!

Vote - Marv

................................*bump*............ ....................

yeah ya guessed it.................still uppin this bizatch................

This was feedback posted for SoLo
 

wow. not a single quotable from either verse......

wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats.
solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak".
^^^
best line in battle... i'd go with marv on this but im not votin cuz i dont wanna take the time

lol okay fam............................................... .....

Voted For: SoLo

This was a pretty good battle but ima have to hand this one to solo

marv
In a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still.
solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill".
Okay opener , could have been alot better
u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK.
but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K!
Nice
wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats.
solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak".
Nice meta , could have been better
ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's.
not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".*
Nice! , really feelin it
u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist".
i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat".
LOL! dopeness
fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne.
y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own".
Nice closer , could have been better

solo
RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin…
I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin…
nice creativity, decent punch , okay opener
Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell…
Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”…
Ha , nice , hard punch
I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat…
Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet…
Word, lol!
Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring…
Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King…
Self glorious huh?
This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin…
Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… *
Nice ..
Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High…
Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die
Nice closer... really good verse

Overall this was a pretty close battle but ima have to give this one to solo, very close battle if marv came just alittle harder he would have won ...keep it up

....................bumpin this.................WAT WAT!!!!!

battle is still open so i guess i am still uppin this fuckin shit

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

hmm, cool battle

>in a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still.
solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill".
meh, first line played 4/10
>u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK.
but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K!
-terribly worded, self glor 2/10
>wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats.
solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak".
haha, nice 7/10
>ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's.
not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".*
-haha, funny 7/10
>u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist".
i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat".
-another good one 7/10
>fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne.
y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own".
-meh, not bad, 6/10

overall: 33/60 good verse, started off really weak, or else you could takin this for sure, keep up man



>RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin…
I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin…
-meh, not bad 5/10
>Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell…
Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”…
-haha, creative...6/10
>I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat…
Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet…
haha, funny 7/10
>Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring…
Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King…
-set-up coulda been better, but personal was hot 7/10
>This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin…
Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… *
-haha, quality streets are dope, so is this bar 7/10
>Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High…
Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die…
haha, seen the concept of the second line alot, but it was flipped nicely....7.5/10

overall: 39.5/60....nice verse man, stayed way more consistent and had more personals and creative punches, which ended up hitting harder, fun verse to read

good battle both, solo came with harder punches though

v/solo

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