Thank You Kid.............Uppin This Battle.............Niggaz Vote Up..........

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Damn Damn Damn!!!......Can We Get Some Votes?? This My 2nd Battle.....I Got 4 Wins Yet This Ones Still Open

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Voted For: AckRite

This was a close ass battle but Ackrite's verse was a lil betta. Big city had more punches but ackrite's punches was harda. Also like the creativity from ackrite. Overall Ackrite won this. Favorite line: You Less Likely To 'Beat Me'…Then A Prostitute With No Hands!

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ummm ok lol...uppin for more votes, holla at me

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Voted For: AckRite

AckRite - iight spit, flowed well and you had some decent punches.

Best Line - Citys Strategies Flawed..So Ill Punch Ya Til Ur Inner Cavity Falls
& Uppercut You So High..You'll Be Defying ALL Of Gravity's Laws!

Worst Line - Stupid All Ya Records Say Zero...Can't Even Master As Editer
Super Hero From Maryland?....Nigga Your No 'Captain America'

Big City - iight flow, punches were kind of weak, nothin to creative.

Best Line - this bitch is kinda moody yall, he gay he's prolly scoopin balls
Sittin on ya cellphone, is the only time u got a "booty call"

Worst Line - What u want wit me, fool? ,man ...this dude can get it
cuz all ya punches is "fallin short" like abusive midgets

OVERALL - iight battle, Act won this tho. He had the better flow and his punches were hitten harder. Big your punches were played, you flowed well, work on more creative punches.

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big city took this yo...good battle though...

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Voted For: AckRite

Bigcity Lacks Wins, Guess Battlin A Newbie Will Obtain U Glory
His 'Definition Of Hard' Is Illiterate, He Only 'Reads When Horny'
—5…decent punch
Stupid All Ya Records Say Zero...Can't Even Master As Editer
Super Hero From Maryland?....Nigga Your No 'Captain America'
—5…this one was aight
Your Votes Form More Rings Than Froot Loops And Tucan Sam
You Less Likely To 'Beat Me'…Then A Prostitute With No Hands!
—6…1st line was weak, but u got it in the 2nd line
Citys Strategies Flawed..So Ill Punch Ya Til Ur Inner Cavity Falls
& Uppercut You So High..You'll Be Defying ALL Of Gravity's Laws!
—7…ur best line here
Son Ya Raps Are Worthless, 'Purple & White' Avy? Da Worse Mix
Cuz Ur Verse Is Only 'On Point' If Ur Tryin To Be Wack On Purpose
—5…decent



What u want wit me, fool? ,man ...this dude can get it
cuz all ya punches is "fallin short" like abusive midgets
—3…played line, used this 1 b4
this fat dyke named ackrite, betta keep his yap tight,
or get both "cheeks" slashed twice, like he got an ass bite
—5…decent punch
dog, pitch ya trash mic, n save all that cash, that you prolly spent
or them slugs,will hum n will stick ya gums like its poly- dent
—5…an okay punch
this bitch is kinda moody yall, he gay he's prolly scoopin balls
Sittin on ya cellphone, is the only time u got a "booty call"
—7…a lil played, but it was aight
smoke this clown's wig, you small, you just a pound kid
and you aint Guerilla Black, so stop trynna sound "B.i.g"
—4…weak
this five-0 snictch, will find it "tuff ta hide" like a Rhino pic
im finding ya verse "hard to swallow" like the Schivo chick...its nothing
—5…aight

overall.. this battle was more of a one-sided vote here..
cuz Ack took this one.. just came harder w/ the punches..
both flowed pretty decent.. structures were okay.. &
hardly any personas used.. but Ack had a couple of them

but really.. Ack took this one.. no hate though.. he just
came harder

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