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B.I.G. 06-17-05 12:00 AM

.........................................uppin.... .............................

Dizzee Rascal 06-17-05 07:22 AM

Voted For: Babble.On

I’m really disturbed, Like blind people reading braile you’ll be feeling my verbs.
He’s the weedman? Okay, now I know in this battle I’m just “dealing with herbs”

Ok nameplay

No one peeps your tracks without me, this kid must study being whack devoutly.
I ditch losers like you, peeps know I’m a hustler, so I don’t need an “Ax about me”

Nice

Puts folks to sleep wit his raps, like I’m hungry for weapons, I’m eatin this ax.
Looks like all your lyrics are worse than shit, you already got beaten by A$(s)

Too forced

I’m rough with more tools, like puncturing virgins I’ll bust this whore through.
You still a nobody homie, even this sites living legends tend to just ignore you!

Ok

I win my fights with superior vocab, fuck your punches I’m chucking mandibles.
What kind of homo would start a club for people who get off on fucking animals?

Lmao

I’m a lyrical genius, I teach MC’s and get payed to tutor. Babble slays computers.
You in a bad place dogg. I’m RV’s Bob Barker reminding vets to spay and neuter.

Ok

VS

didn't understood why u posted back for me to murk you
baby don't cry, even if it was my intention to hurt you

Weak

new to RV, this nigga challengin me, ur post counts is 3
u be readin my battles to try to kill me by postin like me

Again weak

whats Babble.On?, a wack nigga thinkin wack niggaz just can post around
and didin't made dat alone, was made by sum other wack nigga u found

k

this is just to much for u, u won't be controlin ur stability
ur impatient waitin for the due, cuz you think you got the ability

Ok

if you ain't really jokin and want to stay in the game
Lemme tell u, I ain't fuckin.... nigga change ur name

WACK

Punches = B
Personals = B
Flow = A
Complexity = B
Amusement = B

Overall = B

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Dizzee Rascal 06-17-05 10:31 AM

U are aware thats not a hate vote right and i didnt delete ur vote in my battle??

B.I.G. 06-20-05 01:11 PM

...............................uppin.............. ............................

B.I.G. 06-21-05 10:38 PM

..................uppin........................... ...

Control Freq 06-21-05 10:42 PM

Voted For: Ax Dogg

FAHZA...............what.................FAZHA.... ...........WHAT?????.................Father....ooh ok

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

PrahJect 06-25-05 02:51 PM

Voted For: Babble.On

Lets break it down:

didn't understood why u posted back for me to murk you
baby don't cry, even if it was my intention to hurt you

^^^
mehhhh.....not great..it was a punch but didnt come hard 3/5

new to RV, this nigga challengin me, ur post counts is 3
u be readin my battles to try to kill me by postin like me

^^^
Another weak punch but good try...2/5

whats Babble.On?, a wack nigga thinkin wack niggaz just can post around
and didin't made dat alone, was made by sum other wack nigga u found
^^^
Man Another weak one man....aint feelin this attall...2/5

this is just to much for u, u won't be controlin ur stability
ur impatient waitin for the due, cuz you think you got the ability
^^
Finally summin good...well semi-good...3/5..good rhyme

if you ain't really jokin and want to stay in the game
Lemme tell u, I ain't fuckin.... nigga change ur name

^^^
Iite this was ok...3/5....a really bad diss IMO...punches were too weal sorry dude:

I’m really disturbed, Like blind people reading braile you’ll be feeling my verbs.
He’s the weedman? Okay, now I know in this battle I’m just “dealing with herbs”
^^^
HAHA....good opene...great wordplay..cracked me up 4/5

no-one peeps your tracks without me, this kid must study being whack devoutly.
I ditch losers like you, peeps know I’m a hustler, so I don’t need an “Ax about me”

^^^
Kind of self glory..not feelin that...aiite punch..3/5

Puts folks to sleep wit his raps, like I’m hungry for weapons, I’m eatin this ax.
Looks like all your lyrics are worse than shit, you already got beaten by A$(s)
^^^
HAHA this jus shows if u research on ure opponent you going to win.4/5

I’m rough with more tools, like puncturing virgins I’ll bust this whore through.
You still a nobody homie, even this sites living legends tend to just ignore you!

^^^
HAHA RESEARCH AGAIN 5/5

I win my fights with superior vocab, fuck your punches I’m chucking mandibles.
What kind of homo would start a club for people who get off on fucking animals?

^^^^
GOOD SHIT....MAN HE DUN MERKED U ALREADY NO HATE JUS TRUTH...4/5

I’m a lyrical genius, I teach MC’s and get payed to tutor. Babble slays computers.
You in a bad place dogg. I’m RV’s Bob Barker reminding vets to spay and neuter.

^^
Great knowledge, some people dont know who Bob Barker is .....4/5...

Overall: Good punches babble.on...really feelin this easily merked him......ax dogg...you came weak..

RTF IN MY SIG VS. DAUBS

B.I.G. 06-25-05 02:55 PM

aight...... honest vote.......uppin................

Sixth Sense 06-25-05 03:06 PM

Voted For: Ax Dogg

ok an aight battle good job to both but B ur verse was ok but it was too stretched out and it took of the creaitivity and of course the flow u can have lines that are stretched but kno how to keep ur flow and creative side of it ok, AX ur verse was good not too long and thats ok good wit sum words of vocab and ur flow wasnt on as well but u had some lines that were good and a few punches so try to work on delivery so u can pack more damage to them ok so good job on it aight man1
v/ax dogg

K-Trini 06-26-05 08:38 PM

Voted For: Babble.On

didn't understood why u posted back for me to murk you
baby don't cry, even if it was my intention to hurt you
^^^baby's dun cry?what the hell u talkin bout
new to RV, this nigga challengin me, ur post counts is 3
u be readin my battles to try to kill me by postin like me
^^^OK..flowed good
whats Babble.On?, a wack nigga thinkin wack niggaz just can post around
and didin't made dat alone, was made by sum other wack nigga u found
^^stop sayin whack nigga
this is just to much for u, u won't be controlin ur stability
ur impatient waitin for the due, cuz you think you got the ability
^^^a weak punch
if you ain't really jokin and want to stay in the game
Lemme tell u, I ain't fuckin.... nigga change ur name
^^u ain't fuckin?where dat come from

Well at times....you had nice flow.Didn't stay so consistant though.There was a line where you just kept sayin whack nigga too much.Gotta brin the werdplay and metas.U were too basic.

I’m really disturbed, Like blind people reading braile you’ll be feeling my verbs.
He’s the weedman? Okay, now I know in this battle I’m just “dealing with herbs”
^^1st line played...2nd line was DOPE
No one peeps your tracks without me, this kid must study being whack devoutly.
I ditch losers like you, peeps know I’m a hustler, so I don’t need an “Ax about me”
^^^ain't feelin this one,wasn't really a punch
Puts folks to sleep wit his raps, like I’m hungry for weapons, I’m eatin this ax.
Looks like all your lyrics are worse than shit, you already got beaten by A$(s)
^^OK.....mediocre actually
I’m rough with more tools, like puncturing virgins I’ll bust this whore through.
You still a nobody homie, even this sites living legends tend to just ignore you!
^^Nice personal
I win my fights with superior vocab, fuck your punches I’m chucking mandibles.
What kind of homo would start a club for people who get off on fucking animals?
^^Sheep club dun mean he fuck sheep
I’m a lyrical genius, I teach MC’s and get payed to tutor. Babble slays computers.
You in a bad place dogg. I’m RV’s Bob Barker reminding vets to spay and neuter
^^OK

The 1st bar was Dope.Weedman/dealin with herbs..LOL..that shit made me laugh.I dun like that hustller line cause it glorified.U had a lotta personals and the explanations proved it...speccially that LL one.Price is Right punches are played.But ya still got this for complexity in ur punches and hard htiin peronals

Vote-Babble(please vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

B.I.G. 06-26-05 08:42 PM

you mutha......
whatever.......................................... ...........

K-Trini 06-26-05 08:43 PM

^^hey....I dropped an honest vote....just cause ya voted for me doesn't mean I'ma vote for u.If you expectin me to d/r you dead wrong.


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