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~Luciano~ 07-15-05 08:35 PM

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Kawn Flixx 07-15-05 08:42 PM

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill
Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will
Decent opener
Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair
They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air
Okay
Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass
Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class
could have been better
Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones
U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones
Pretty decent closer


[v]Carlton Banks[/b]
talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal!
Ahh..could have been better
your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring.
cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things.
Pretty good
i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared...
cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there.
Decent
got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions..
so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions!
Ahh...naw

Overall vote: Jimmy Pocketz to me he came alittle harder..and had better punchlines..and acouple good play offs your names..

~Luciano~ 07-16-05 10:59 PM

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Willa 07-17-05 12:01 AM

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

ur punches were better alobng with ur personals and structure id say put in a few more metaphores and up ur vocap nice verse this was a one sided battle
carl ur ounches were wack the only thing that looked nice was ur structure lol up ur vocab and creativity work on personals u lack in em
good battle to both though


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