Wow at what this thread turned into
The only reason my structure could seem bad is cus i play on words like
add-a-lesson/adolecent - obviously the 1 word seems like 2 throwing the structure off but if u read it correctly the flow is their
Also i dont have generic flow that shits wack

a ................................a
a.................................a


No i experiment adding it up a bit try perhaps


a.........a..........a.............b
b...........c........c.............b

Try and play around with the multi's abit no what i mean people

Appreciate constructive critisim but being called im wack!! no way u fucking dyke my punches are far more developed than ur mind can understand


Paper cut ur eyes to show im winning by a margin

Im sorry if u neglect to see the simple metaphor of me winning by a margin and also the sides of papers having margins on thm
But im sure to ur pre-pubecent mind that just seems like mindless filler to u right?right?

fucking immortal tech could come in and say burn an orphanage to bring heat to u bastards
I imagine he would get the same fucking repsonse because ur simple mind is so fucking korrupted with retardness as u neglect to see past the genericness of ur un-developed mind
Fucking bitch

Don't get mad 'cuz your verse was crap, just elevate.

It wasnt fucking crap though did u even read it no?
It was probably just above average at worse
And no flow that just bullshit
myb my structure alil streched that it tho

This thread was based on the fact that your punches were wack...I was simply agreeing with that, so go elevate. That's what I did.

yo yung nigga i see wurr aristica cumin from there

see your punches are weak and structure is shit

now normally i dont bitch bout structure but its big on rv so get used to it

up your punches and shit

^^ Thank you....so dizz your whack.....................word.

See i dont need to up my punches because im already elevated 2 levels above u arist
Even topically u look up at me
Structure wise
that critism is fine if this is just some wack generic site not open to creativity
Bottom line is half of u dont understand metaphors and i wouldnt expect ur un-sophisticated minds to either