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Voted For: 1ndeph

Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis
If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness
^^
Opening line made no sense, 2nd was kinda played.

Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It
CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation
^
Nope, weak attempt at a punch, another played concept.

Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless
Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks
^
Easily your best bar.

Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless
Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest
^
Nope, shit was worded horribly and had no impact.

Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On
Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On
^
Just another played concept that you worded in ya own way, it was okay compared to some of your other bars tho.

I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth
Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self^
Thats laughable, I'm sure he doesnt care for an internet ''jackin'' and the second line seemed forced as fuck with the nameplay

Not a good verse Troop, lacked alot of creativity an the ideas for your verse was a little basic an forced upon.


I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win.
so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent.
^
nah, wasnt feelin the opener, shit was weak indeph lol.

you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em.
damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album.
^
lol basic, but made me laugh.

You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it.
I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics.
^
I like this bar, nice flow as you read it, good personal on the jay shit too

king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes.
Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme.
^
Everythin was good up until the ''noone can rhyme'' part, could of used that idea on the punch a lil more creatively lol

You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope.
You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero.
^
the fuck? lol...Doesnt make sense to me.

slang these days,the only way your skills benifit.
cause to you bad and good must be a synonym
^
nah....dunno what you was thinkin

Not a good verse either Indeph

matter fact, I thought y'all would of dropped DOPE, kinda dissapointed, but Indeph had a little more consistancy with like 2 ok bars where as troop only had 1 ok bar....

Vote=indeph for being less played and less whack.

u a dumb fuck if i eva seen 1........................

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This was feedback posted for (Jimmy Pocketz)
 

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Voted For: 1ndeph

1ndeph verse

I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win.
so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent.
^ rhyme is off...punch aight but rhyme harmed the bar

you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em.
damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album.
^ ok bar reminded me of couldn't sell 2 copies if you pressed a double album bar by Em...nice flip

You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it.
I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics.
^ ok diss personal there

king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes.
Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme.
^ lol felt that good diss

You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope.
You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero.
^ na not feelin this rhyme again was weak

slang these days,the only way your skills benifit.
cause to you bad and good must be a synonym
^ ok closer ok diss

one love
^ lol

Overall
Ok verse 1 or 2 bars wasn't really feelin the bars that didn't rhyme in my opinion woulda worked better in audio but text...na...some aight disses lol @ the midwest bar...ok verse...

T.r.oo.P verse

Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis
If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness
^ ok opener on Nuns lol

Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It
CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation
^ na not feelin it again rhyme was pssh

Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless
Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks
^ basicks? i know it says basics...jus type that i hate the slang bar was aight though

Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless
Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest
^ meh ok diss...coulda been better though

Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On
Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On
^ good bar diss there lol @ narcoleptics

I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth
Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self
^ closer ok...not amazing though

Overall
1 bar stood out for me to be honest that was the narcoleptics everything else was jus average @ best...creativness wasn't really there...i think the nuns bar was aight but we all know bout thong punches though nowadays...avy personal was there...lose the slang as well..if thats how you write when you spittin...fine but text you gotta be considerate...

Vote
-1ndeph-

More consistant despite the weak rhymes in a few bars...lose that for ya next text battle...RTF in my sig vs EC (audio battle A.I vs L.L)

an RTF would be nice plz...and i jus upped the battle too

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless
Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest
Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On
Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On
I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth
Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self

VS

I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win.
so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent.
You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it.
I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics.
king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes.
Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme.


Tied on key punches,

deph's was easier to read and flowed a lot better imo,
although troop had one ill nameplay...

ima have to go with deph 2 cause his was just plain a better read, nothing more to it.

V 1ndeph.


Vote switched

again i voted...i'd expect an RTF...it's audio so no reading needed