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Voted For: Gongshow.

ok battle.
straight up, gongshow had way better punchlines and better personals. plus his closer was made sense. trini's didn't. vocab and flow was pretty much even.
alot of trini' lines were played out, like that menopause simile. oh yeah, and not only does sovereign not rhyme with near, but a sovereign is a leader, so that line with it in there didnt make any sense.
much respect, return the favor or i will remove my vote

Voted For: Gongshow.



Go ahead, mention cock to this little phone sex fanatic
And he'll be on the line longer than cocaine addicts!
Now i'm not an advocate for bad habits but shit happens
Like just last week I saw Trini's girl leave him for...
*Points to the O.Gs* ................ Pure Knowledge.
You couldn't burn faggots with newspaper and matches
The only clips you bustin are on
............................................Email attachments.
Spirograph's my passion so I got you in a stencil...
And yeah you reload lead... In my mechanical pencil!
Get vocal in your sig, you're too antisocial for my innuendos
This kid 'DucKHunt' like he's at home playin super nintendo!

the punchlines were crazy

the structure good, K-trini, I've seen better

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