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wow..... anyways, 4-2 now.........................

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Voted For: Stanza

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
aight start

Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
nice word-play

That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
aight ending...

2 bar was ya witty's hit/wordplay the other was aight decent flow and all not a bad drop 7/10



Yo

Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
decent start

Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
could of been worded better but decent

Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet

nice ending good punch...

u had a witty punch and a decent punch decent wordplay, flow was proper and all i felt u had a edge on punches and wordplay which edge u out on the win good close battle 8/10


can ya return the favor of a vote i have the links in my sig....

* or i will have my vote removed *

can someone get silk flo vote removed that shit aint explained.....

Voted For: Stanza

yo, this is my honest opinion, stanza took this, i aint jus' sayin that cuz he voted my battle, thats my honest opinion.
JTR/darth to be honest i wasnt really feelin your verse that much at all, the rhymes were simple in my eyes and basic.

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath

it didnt seem like there was much thought gone into it, no metaphors or anythin. i've seen you do a lot better than this though. just put a lbit more depth into your punches and you'll be alright. it was alright verse though.your flow was alright though, didnt have too much of a problem witht that. 4/10. no hate btw, jus sayin it like i see it.

Stanza- your verse had sum nice punches in it man, especiall your closer,
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
LOL, nice! 2nd line was a bit of self glorification, but it was still hot.
your flow and structure was on point for most of it, fell off in a couple of places but it wasn't bad.
yer it was just a nice verse overall, the onli thing i didnt like about it was the second line in the 1st bar,
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
that woz kinda played. overall it was a solid verse. 7/10

stanza gets my vote because he put a bit more depth and thought into his punches.
darth, you had a nice flow, but the punches were just a bit basic. no hate, but stanza got this

Voted For: Stanza

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
coo opener
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
boo..
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
weak closer


Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
weak opener
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
average
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
coo closer

this battle was aight here, not really hard punches from
both opponents, both had decent structures, vocab needs
some help, and the flow were pretty decent.. but since
both of u had weak punches.. Stanza barely took this one
for comin less-weak here..

RTF Stanza on my battle against Criminal or this vote
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Voted For: Darth Vader

cool

stanza, only good punch you had, was the closer, and it was still pretty weak...first two punches, nothing man....too basic, and not effective....calling yourself spider man? stupid....and the 'hanging' concept was pretty dumd...whats a rope going to do anyways? meta was really weak, and you had poor wordplay....elevate dude, no hate, but jack takes this one easily

jack, nice shit man, i like the opener....creative, witty shit, and easily took this one....wasn't really fond of the closer though, didn't really go well with your two other punches, cause they were great, then you just had a okay punch, nah saying.....but overall, you took this with harder, more creative, effective punches....good opening personal off his name with wordplay....good, short verse man, keep up

v/darth vader....RTF


Possible crew vote removed. Blisss = Drakel, who is in The Establishment
-strobe

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Voted For: Darth Vader

this was an ok battle
Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
nice word play ok opener 7/10
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
another good wordplay, but no real punchline
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
weak closing, i wasnt really feeling that, really a played out line
basically an a ok verrse. no punchlines here. the wordplay was better than stanza's though. had a personal or two in there but nothin impressive
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Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
i like that first line, but the second one was played out
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
that aint a diss....
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
weak wordplay, and that self hype shit dont make for good battling
no punchlines, weaker personals and you really wasted yuor closing on a self hype line.
much respect, keep elevating