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Why DR, why would he dr, he got cut from LL and fucked us over in a battle.

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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

Daubs a real emcee?...HA! ....only time you 'Kick Game' is playin soccer*
couldnt even 'Bang-Heads' if you Tried passin yourself off as a punk-rocker
^^set-up bad,the set-up shoulda been a punch...3/10
You's a Nerd, kid....look what 3 Words did...got you thinkin your 'Dope'**
Ya 'Letters' only ever got shit sealed........when you lickin the envelope!
^^horrible set-up....good punch....5/10
You can 'liv-in' hope, maybe one day you'll Throw a punch an last the 'Rounds'***
Ya'd think Daubs is wearin a skirt, cause i got this fastened like a wRaparound****
^^^OK......5/10
Dog, i got your Face on the Ground, eyes down.....like ya playin Bingo****
Legendary status?...shit, your just a ''Day dream believein'' starr like Ringo
^^flowed good...punch lacked....4/10
Fuck your Lingo, bitch..........stop thinkin you mingle in the best of circules
you always typin : shoot : ...so i'll just stick the shells too ya back like Turtles
^^not much of a punch here....2/10
Fuck gunplay tho..'Cause we all know british kats got no street-smarts
Daubs winnin is unlikely as .........his idol makin it in the U.S Charts!
^^Best bar so far.....7/10
eat at ya heart like colesterol, sucker.....i stay slicker than afro-Gel
Multiply ya verse....you still aint winnin, 'cause all ya duties associate with L's!
^^I hear this L/legend thing too much....3/10

Ok...good verse here.Your best bar was the Us. charts one.A problem I saw with your verse was that you set-up your shit badly...make the set-up's relevant to the punchline somehow so it makes it harder.As for your personals..mediocre.I heard too much L's/legend in your verse.Kinda redundant.OK verse overall.Coulda been better if you put more time into it.

Whats that on your face, could be a smile, but's looks more like a frown..
Hate on whites? But on ya head, you rockin christmas cracker crowns!!
^^punch was shit man......2/10
From the pics posted above, im sure that your location is so correct..
Only time tephs a criminal, when he get confused with a clone suspect!!
^^shouldn't the punch be about his location based on the set-up?...2/10
Wanna be james bond, but cant even get that right,its 00 not just 07 teph..
And lookin at ya pics, i cant judge the ugliest one, the right or the left!!
^^Nice......7/10
My rhymes are like impossible percentages, outa ten i get eleven..
And your verse is like your jerzey............both are zero outa seven!!
^^Good.....but i think you overused his picture..4/10
We all know the only reason ya crews RAW, coz ya they spit raw sewage..
I could hand the win over to you...and you'd still manage to loose it!!
^^Played as fuck.....3/10
Battling me is like faulty ' B ' squads, Your diffusing the wrong bomb..
Shoot a Verb? al just shoot a herb So no wonder tephs long gone!!
^^Horrible nameplay...2/10
This murderer SHoTT a BoY, but the sword ain't mighty like a word..
So instead he adopted bad grammaticks, and went to shoota verb!!
^^again...horrible nameplay...2/10

OK...Saw a lotta flaws in your verse.First....your set-ups.Make your set-ups relevant to the punch somehow.It showed how bad you were at it in that criminal line.The set-up looked like it was gonna rip his location...then outta nowhere...you came with a "he ain't no criminal unless...".line.And the picture...once bar is enough...you overused it.That's a bitch move to base a verse around it.And the nameplay at end...shit.Just cause the some letters in his verse spell his name doesn't make it nameplay.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203538

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You had the battle re-opened after like a month of it being closed and you dont even up the battle either, what the fucks the point Daubs?

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Your an idiot Daubs.......

Clearly i beat you, but yet you wont see past your internet pride

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We'll see, if you do props...

ima get people voting on it.

Voted For: Daubs

Daubs

Stop putting those '!!' after every punch. That shit is getting annoying.

Whats that on your face, could be a smile, but's looks more like a frown..
Hate on whites? But on ya head, you rockin christmas cracker crowns!!
4.. Decent attempt.. wording wasn't quite there though..
From the pics posted above, im sure that your location is so correct..
Only time tephs a criminal, when he get confused with a clone suspect!!
4.. Once again, your concepts are pretty decent, but the wording takes away from how hard they hit..
Wanna be james bond, but cant even get that right,its 00 not just 07 teph..
And lookin at ya pics, i cant judge the ugliest one, the right or the left!!
7.. Assuming that I'm getting it right.. I think it's good..
My rhymes are like impossible percentages, outa ten i get eleven..
And your verse is like your jerzey............both are zero outa seven!!
6.. Coolness..
We all know the only reason ya crews RAW, coz ya they spit raw sewage..
I could hand the win over to you...and you'd still manage to loose it!!
4.. Pretty played..
Battling me is like faulty ' B ' squads, Your diffusing the wrong bomb..
Shoot a Verb? al just shoot a herb So no wonder tephs long gone!!
2.. Not feeling this..
This murderer SHoTT a BoY, but the sword ain't mighty like a word..
So instead he adopted bad grammaticks, and went to shoota verb!!
2.. Could have been worded in to a punch.. but this is just more of a statement.

Overall - 29

MeTaFo'

Drop the fucking explanations. If you can't word your punch to where we'll get it when we read your verse, then you shouldn't include the punchline.

Daubs a real emce?...HA! ....only time you 'Kick Game' is playin soccer
couldnt even 'Bang-Heads' if you Tried passin yourself off as a punk-rocker
3.. Both are played..
You's a Nerd, kid....look what 3 Words did...got you thinkin your 'Dope'
Ya 'Letters' only ever got shit sealed........when you lickin the envelope!
3.. Once again.. Played..
You can 'liv-in' hope, maybe one day you'll Throw a punch an last the 'Rounds'
Ya'd think Daubs is wearin a skirt, cause i got this fastened like a wRaparound
2.. Fucking Jesus.. ANY wordplay that includes a rap/wrap combo just sucks, as they are all played.
Dog, i got your Face on the Ground, eyes down.....like ya playin Bingo
Legendary status?...shit, your just a ''Day dream believein'' starr like Ringo
4.. I guess..
Fuck your Lingo, bitch..........stop thinkin you mingle in the best of circules
you always typin : shoot : ...so i'll just stick the shells too ya back like Turtles
2.. Played to shit..
Fuck gunplay tho..'Cause we all know british kats got no street-smarts
Daubs winnin is unlikely as .........his idol makin it in the U.S Charts!
4.. Could have been better, but your wording killed it.
eat at ya heart like colesterol, sucker.....i stay slicker than afro-Gel
Multiply ya verse....you still aint winnin, 'cause all ya duties associate with L's!
8.. this one was nice.

Overall - 26

This battle was not as close as the scores seem to say.. Daubs won this one quite easily I thought. Metafo had 1 bar I liked, and a bunch of garbage.. Daubs had a pretty consistently average verse, with 2 bars I thought were pretty good. Daubs easily won this.

Vote - Daubs

Hit up my battle with UNF if you feel like it.. or something.