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Nynth Degree 07-08-05 08:07 PM

I used the same concept ages ago.

King Solo 07-08-05 08:08 PM

^^ werd, these wack kids be recyclin shit

come with sum originality........

Sixth Sense 07-08-05 08:08 PM

yea tha king of rv 2 is here nd he knos bout it y not vote on that battle if u have a chance........plz 1

Nynth Degree 07-08-05 08:09 PM

Word, the King of RV knows what's hot/not. So do his gangsta disciples :shoot:

Sixth Sense 07-08-05 08:18 PM

yea mna so did u vote or not??????.........plz

Maximus 07-08-05 08:20 PM

This guy reminds me of K-Trini.

Sixth Sense 07-08-05 08:23 PM

prolly is udercover......lol or u talkin to me.......

Maximus 07-08-05 08:55 PM

YOU! Nah man, PNP is like PCP, so you're cool. Talkin about verse190 or whatever

M&rk 07-08-05 10:02 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Doomsday
A: yes, this is why RV is the toiler of rap boards.
B: they go all 'wanna-be superior" because they have no actual power over their real life, so they want power of your net life. Specially here on RV.

word, and it this cats doin this to elevate... thats why people go to this site, not for cock bangers to think they're better than them.

and the line is decent because u used wordplay correctly but its not so good just because it wasn't good... i mean it wasn't very creative or hard hitting and didn't make complete sense.... good idea askin for advice from others though, i think more threads like this should exist

WICKEDCLOVVN 07-08-05 10:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Verse190
sorry if this is the wrong place to post this. some faggot named Gongshow voted on my battle saying this line made no sense. i wanna hear the opinons of some real hip hop heads.


this cock raps without punchlines like slapboxing roosters

let me know what ya think


its dumb...... 2/10

Gongshow. 07-08-05 10:30 PM

rate this one.

Verse must be Rudy... "Word-he-play a little too hard."
You force con-'steps' more than guards at scotland yard

haw haw haw.


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