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Formation 07-23-05 05:44 AM

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless


Punches
Okay Both Came Good With Punches Verbal A Little Was Played Though No Hate Spizz So Was Yours Dawg, You Both Need To COme More Creative With This Shit No Hate To None. But I've Seen Better From Both.

Personals
I Would Have To Say Spul Came Better With The Personals His Opener Was Pretty Good, But Then Again Verbal's Personals Hit Pretty Good Which Came Back On It, But Still That Opener From Spul Was Good

Structure
Spul You Suck At It Lmao! Verbal Got The Structure Part, Ppl Think Structure Is Not A Big Deal But It Is It Sets Up The Syllable Count Man So Fix That Up Both Of You.

Wordplay
Meh Verbal You Had Some Creative Shit Man Not Really Special Along With Spul Had Some Funny Shit Here Lols Other Then That Nothin Special By Both

Vocabulary
Spul Very Good Man Had Some Nice Vocabulary In Your Verse Which Was Good, Verbal You Had Some Okay Vocabulary Man Nothing Really That Stuck Out.

Rhyme Scheme
None Really Yall Should Try It Man It'll Help Out The Flow Alot, Also Throw On Some Punches Reworded Yo, Any Way Get That Going

Flow
Meh Spul Verbal Was Good Close Shit Here Both Came Nice With The Flow But I Felt Spul Came A Little Better Due To The Count Of Syllables. Good Shits Here Man

Over All Spul Came Pretty Good In These Categories So I Pick Spul To Vote.
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