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This was feedback posted for Wes City
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Voted For: Wes City
first off this was a reasonable battle from both.but only one cat can take the win and thats wes, firstly his structure & flow were more on point, but more importantly his punches were a lot more creative & original. both cudve cum harder and tried sum personals etc, but still, the winner is wes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Wes City
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wow @ at Kord dqin like 7 of Wes's Votes..... prolly the only Kords vote dq'ed is because the mods saw it while they were there on one of ur dq missions
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Voted For: Wes City
You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons concept played...ok for an opener - 5/10 Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods? decent personal, flows aiight - 7/10 You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle not worded right, gd concept tho -6/10 I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts wackness...wordplay doesnt work.. - 5/10[B] Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain [B]hahaha dope bar, i aint seen that shit on Tv in tiime tho - 9/10 Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises -_- doesnt really work fam....- 6/10[B] Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note [B]meh @ a yo mama type bar - 6.5/1- Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne lol, gave me a chuckle decent..-7/10 Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister wackness...teister bars r played as a mofo -5/10 I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum ……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb decent, nuttin spectacular, flows well - 7/10 ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials decent concept...decent nameplay - 7.5/10 a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek you may need those^^ …… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep solid closer....not original in concept bu well worked = 8/10 vote - new meth |
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Voted For: Kordozar
You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons ^^OK.......5/10 Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods? ^^Ok....coulda been better....4/10 You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle ^^Good....6/10 I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts ^^meh...weak....3/10 Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain ^^OK......4/10 Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises ^^no punch...horrible closer...1/10 OK...kinda boring verse man.1st punch was creative and hit well...and so did the 5-0 candle one.But the rest were just some mediocre punches.The closer was the worst...as it wasn't a punch.Work on your flow and set-ups. Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note ^^weak punch.....2/10 Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne ^^Uncreative....2/10 Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister ^^set-up was bad and punch sucked....1/10 I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum ……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb ^^terrible......1/10 ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials ^^Finally a good line....5/10 a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek you may need those^^ …… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep ^^c'mon.....1/10 OK...too simplistic.You need better concepts.Look at that last bar....he puts you to sleep?...terrible concept..the only decent line in your verse was probably the kors-light one.The others were basic and weak.Work on your complexity and using more personals. Vote-kordozar RTF BELOW PLEASE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203538 |
Voted For: Wes City
Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum ……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek you may need those^^ …… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep 6/10 You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods? You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises 5/10 v/Wes City... this was a very close battle, Wes had good punches that edged Kord out, both need to elevate, no hate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Wes City
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