uppin............................................. ......

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

Actually maggies been a baby since they started the show.....and dats more den 5 years.....

Overall both of yall had a good verse.

^^ you cud've at least voted.......................uppin

Voted For: NOS-482

this dude got it mayne..he had more punches which ere quite decent...hs verse kept on flowin from the beginin 2 d end and his closer was tight...he had gd mets on therre whice were entatainin personals were also an additional aind to the coolness of his verse...he focused more on his opponent and that kept him quite stable on the structural part...mayv instead was kinna focusin on him winin and he seemed to be thinkin more of what peeps could think about the whole battle...dawg u r 2 diss ur opponent...u had nice points but just didnt cook 'em up well...ur verse was flowin initially but towards the end it went off and to finish ur verse up the closer was kinna wack and to me it didnt really make sense...so that is that....this guy takes this hands down

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