RapVerse.com Community - flow verse vs Defined

Voted For: flow verse

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205506

Like a football linebacker no matter how much he works out he can’t be defined
So don’t worry about elevation this win is already mine
cool bar

He thinks he’s funny? . . . yea like jokers in a deck of cards . . .just throw them out
He can’t spit unless you mean the cum dripping out his mouth
thats just sick int he head wasnt that good

Bitch has to “recycle” his lines. . . cause the ‘trash pickers” don’t want his “garbage”
Lacks creativity cause he gives his head but receives no knowledge
ha i found this to be funny

To him “Pun” was just a rapper . . . which explains why he doesn’t get “wordplay”
Bitch couldn’t drop decent “bar” if he spit from “Pelican Bay”
i like this bar as-well good verse u had a direct hit towards him and nice bars hard hitting and all good job

recross to the mosh im untouchable like randy 'moss'
........rewind this verse so ull eazily get to ur 100th 'loss'
this was ok

be ready to forfiet ur prize undisputed rhymes disguise my 'size'
........realize ur 'deadwieght' like a turtle turtle in 'Master of Disguise'*
u could of word this better but this right here isnt that good

prepare for this to be ur final battle beware 'flow verse'
........u couldnt spit 'Loud' and 'Clear' if u were a 'Crow Sperse'**
cool bar but no real effect towards the battler

distorted to rubble destroy u like a 'Finger' to a 'Bubble'
........commense to a pray cuz uve been retorted to a 'Struggle'
now this was good nice flow but a little to late for a come-back sorry i didnt think u tryed hard enough for this or if u did try hard sorry but u need to re-think ya tactics u had him just come straight at him and word ya bars better