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Yvonne 09-27-05 07:45 AM

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Yvonne 09-28-05 02:10 AM

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Ysdat 09-28-05 04:39 AM

Voted For: Yvonne

listen,even if you called urself god u still wunt get respect
cos nobody herre 2 act dramas,its all about lyrical effect

vs

your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose


this is one fucking weak battle. I seriously shouldnt vote fo reither of you due to it being so close with weakness.

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Yvonne 09-28-05 07:40 AM

^lol..i share ur opinion but u voted atleast unlike many...



ok peeps...one more to go...

E.C 09-28-05 09:10 AM

Voted For: Robert De Niro

nothing

vs.

she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are


andf even that punch wasn't good

this was a pretty weak battle. yvonne you didnt have anty punches that stood out to me.. thats why im ginivng this to rob.

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Yvonne 09-29-05 05:59 AM

okie dokie...


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GKillaz05 09-30-05 02:30 PM

Voted For: Yvonne

Yvonne - iight spit, not your best but you had a good flow and a decent vocab.

Best Line - listen,even if you called urself god u still wunt get respect
cos nobody herre 2 act dramas,its all about lyrical effect

Worst Line - my punches make a hole between ur legs to make ut tigh dangle
watch him moan like triny when i knock him off 2 d state of mental

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS - iight spit, it flowed well you had some good punches.

Best Line - Yvonne's at a fork in the road, which way will she choose?
i'd say she'd go right........but she went left just to loose

Worst Line - she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are

OVERALL - This was an ok battle, I think that Yvonne took it though. She had a better flow, vocab and punches. What Ever you should use more creativity, and harder punches in your verses. - no hate.

Vote - Yvonne

OrEo da cookie 10-22-05 04:13 PM

Voted For: Robert De Niro

vote for whatever...his punches made sence and hers where not even hittin..i dont think i need to explain

.:Mike Check:. 10-24-05 09:42 AM

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 
checkin pollz...nice job both...keep at it...HOLLA!!!...1

Yvonne 04-24-06 06:14 PM

for fux sake i am tired of seeing this old shit up.....

M&rk 05-06-06 12:29 AM

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 
wish i coulda voted for eitha of ya but neither of ya had one worthy line

dazy 05-09-06 09:38 PM

Voted For: Robert De Niro

i voted 4 what ever it takes he had a better flow going with his stuff and the rymes were just a lil' better
best lines:
she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are
your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose


yvonne i didnt vote 4 u cus ur flow wasnt as nice and ur structure wasnt presented in a really great way and some of ur lines were not really much ryming
worst line:
my punches make a hole between ur legs to make ut tigh dangle
watch him moan like triny when i knock him off 2 d state of mental

vote what ever it takes


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