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King Solo 10-11-05 02:20 PM

Voted For: MeTaFo'

I'll have Kon in a body bag, while the ambulance rushes the spot..
Lifes a hardly a Loss tho, look at ya battle stats, Your experienced ALOT..
Lol...decent and fairly original punch on his rec..
I'll get ya 'shot-boy'.......... an I dont mean handin you my Alias
The way i'm ''spittin'' at kon, ya'd think i was retarded 'Sprayin-this'
LMAO!! retard lines are coo..
I say-a-diss....... an your Punch game must be Made-to-miss
I come at you from every angle, shit its like i Fade-my-fist
kinda weak, not really fellin it..
Like a bottle of Cris...I'll leave this kid left to chill on Ice
Handin me this win...Is the only time you'll ever be Nice
played concept, too basic..
An i appreiate the jesture, But i'ma Test-ya, then lyrically arrest-ya
Now your stuck behind my bars chasin a bird, Like tweety n Sylvester*
meh, its ok..
I'm the best-too...Ever drop, regardless of the weather.....
Kon thinks he so slick...He actually rocks latex an leather!
Lol, second line was nice..
I'm the better-man, your no veteran, But we'll let the voters decide
Ya idea of ''swayin'' is..........Drinkin a 5th then trynna Drive!
Lol, nice concept, good flip on it..
It wont make you hit 5, So i suggest you just slap the winners hand...
If only i was Strobe, I'd enforce a new rule...'BEGINNERS BANNED''
ok, this was average..
Then you wont know where you stand...Like blind men in a Que..
All you ever spit is BULLSHIT, an i'm allergic, do you got a Tissue?
corny, but funny..
achoo, sorry, I just sneezed, hand me a gun an i'll have trigger town Squeezed..
Ya crew is shaming RV!...You can call me...the reprosseser, I got your forum Seized!
i think u meant "repossesser" so gud..


ok, ure verse was kind of inconsistent, u had a couple of played lines in the middle, a few average bars with weak delivery. but then you had some real hard punches, the opening two bars had me rollin straight away, the swayin line was nice, u had a fair amount of multies which made shit flow better, a good verse, not ure best but nice. 7/10



dopeman, Imma pop a few, to show the chrome's no rumor
n have this cat eating slugs like timon and pumba
cheesy concept, but ok..
metafo has a face only a mother could love... a shame we saw it
he's father still carries a picture of the kid who came with the wallet
lol, nice punch..
buck.shot keep talkin bout guns, we know you ain't seen gats
bitch, u couldn't be 'fresh' if ya verse came in listerine packs!
meh, not the best delivery on the concept..
u cant beat me, cuz u'll be 'coming off the top', like fat-bitches on ya nut-sack
cuz this battle ain't fair, my flow sparks like a lighters.. no need for a match!
weak lines in this bar..
this pest's getting slaughtered up against a prizefighter
bitch is walking a thin line and it was drawn with his eyeliner
LMAO!! nice punch, i like it..
Ya shits lonely not a decent Damn Line,one trick pony
Got props? niggas was just being Man-Kind and I aint talkin Mick Foley * the wrestler hes name was mankind*
lol, decent wordplay
Half the time ya shit is asinine...the other half u no-show
its better for u not to be seen, like Blackmail photos
average closer..


ure still using a newb structure, ure delivery is weak in a lot of bars, u had a couple of nice bars, about ONE that i thought really stood out, u just need to use a more complex rhyme scheme cuz ure's is too basic, throw in multies to for better flow, cuz ure's was a bit choppy in places. 5/10



V/ - MeTaFo'


plz plz plz RTF on my NK battle.....its getting mad slept on and its dope :thumbup: the links in my siggy as always. pz.

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Dickard. 10-13-05 08:59 PM

Voted For: MeTaFo'

Kon-Your verse was iight, you had some iight punches in there that landed and were present...a bit was played/i just wasnt fealing it......ur structure is annoying and just plain un original...up on that...overall 5/10

metafo-now this was a good verse...u incorporated good mulits...ur structure was stretched at times but flowed better...u had good personals and tight punches...everything molded together overall 8/10

v/metafo'

rtf links in sig...1


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