spucca lucca.............aint we won yet yo.............damn

This was feedback posted for Sin`cere
 

Polls in the bizzich......wtf whas with Dr. and E's roleplaying verse lol...this aint fuckin 8 Mile bruh lol But it is creative...UPGRADE!

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vvvvvvvooooooooooottttttttttteeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

Voted For: Dr. Punchlines



Sin`cere:

Yo u aint a Dr. u a Dick Rider so stop wasting everyones time
Cuz ill just forget the DR. and matta fact ill drop the Punchlines
blah...no

And ur partna cant even shed some light no wonder he’s an eclipse
And come to the think of it yall both crap so that makes yall a big shit
wack, shit lines are played as SHIT

So yall can feel embarrassed together so it wouldn’t seem lonely alone
But like they say kill two birds wit one stone..................
.................................................. ..so these two bitches got owned
bad closer...ok concept but the follow up was terrible..

DoContinue:

Trust me my lines will knock u out and leave u cold & for dead
Cuz it seems when u were born the birth doctor dropped u on ur head
blah opener.

Like lost facts of history theres no risks in battles... so go and dare me
Cuz they only time yall win is if theres an eclipse and that happens rarely
decent

It seems that the Doctor’s Punchlines aint workin cuz it needs surgery
So jus shut the fuck up cuz neither u or the E-Clipse can even murder me
no...

Dr Punchlines:

fucka hustla if life was an "exit hole" you'd be pushin tha "shit"
sayin you "gully" as hell, yea, only after your body arrives in a ditch
hell no..shit lines ARE FUCKING PLAYED

kids a wanksta thought reciepts for dildos was taggin
claims he gangsta?..stop spittin "period"..tha only time you "raggin"(blood)
too bad period lines are played too..

Kid, pray to me, I'm god, you begin to fear
It's like RV's a church, the way I'm killin' sinc-ere (Sins here)
decent closer

E-Clipse:

Kid is all over fake, the shit’s somewhat symbolic
Cuz it’d really be a ‘Marvel’ if I bought a ‘DC’ comic
good nameplay..

Bitch tryin to take off, watch as I crash ya jets
Cuz yo I’m bombin’ DC, and I don’t mean terrorist threats
ok

I throw blows at this bitch till he can’t stand up straight
Cuz he’d take it on the chin,
But he already struggles to support the weight *
alright...

Vote: E and Dr...way better punchlines even tho a lot of em were played...blah battle.