because your pathetic.

atleast im not on here all day every day, im not even on here everyday, this will be the first night ive actually been on in like 3-4 days.... so well done skippy on lookin retarded.

im bored, your a bitch and talkin mad shit, so why not just go round sonnin you?? yea exactly.

now quit bein a pussy and admit u suck, and quit crying cos u got busted cheating.

LOL Bikini retarded... setting up text call-outs when I said hit me up in the audio call-outs. Leady forget him, he just want some attention let him play in his corner with his legos.

Wtf @ u not being on everyday have to do with anything.Did I ever say you were on everyday?

*reads my previous post to see if I ever mentioned that*

Nope...doesn't appear that I mentioned that.

And I talk shit...yea,I do....maybe cos I realize that this net shit means nothing.Is someone's fist gonna pop out the screen 'n attack you?NO.

So fuck behaving and showing respect for others on the net.That's for fags like you to do.
Sonning people?Ha...couldn't son me with a full-moon...bitch,

And I'm soooooooo offended that some English white boy with no social life decides to call me a pussy on AOL 'n shit.

LMFAO i read upto where u started tryna act all manly n stopped reading... my sides are hurtin from laughter now

word I told u I wouldn't forget you so..heres my breakdown...yo your improvement is undeniable...the flow is alot smoother now....u had a few spots were it lost sum of its fluidity however...during the second half where u was flowing at top speed it was nice...lyrically is was kinda eh but it was for club purposes so I'll give u a pass.....a hook an one more verse woulda been nice but u told me story but dat so its all good....def keeping moving in the direction you are...much props from me

Word i can see elevation from what i last heard flow was there for tha most part lyrically as trip said its jus a club track so its suited ok (but i know you much better lyrically lmao illy wit tha punches)
overall it was a solid drop ma..=1=

Heck yeah this is tight. Not very long but it was still good. Better than some guys I hear on RV probly me too. I didn't know there were any good females on this site other than Chief. Oh yeah and thanks for helping me when I ask for help on AIM.

Flow is nice. The syle is different from what I remember you doing, but you hae gotten alot better. dubs are good on this too. Why come it's not longer? I'd like to hear you hold down a hold track like this. But you transition well with the beat shift. Nice return.

It's a collab, with 2 other people... they being slow-pokes. And guess who's supposed to do the chorus? Them two. *tempted to finish it myself* lol.

Lol, sometimes you just gotta do it yourself you know?

Yeah. I think I'mma do a full solo version while I'm waiting on the rest of peeps to hustle.

Listening while typing-

Intro beat- I love the Multi Drums...and the piano following it up
Flow- Alright Nice, Multi flow's with wordplays, The "fax' Lines is good creative.
Voice- Damn!.....Your voice has changed...Before it sounded like some micky-mouse shit...but now...it's all gangstah and stuff lol.
Lyrics- Good shit, Like I said I'm liking the Wordplays and the ending part was Nice Loving the Multi'z...
Approach- It was Nice...


This was a decent Lil 1:00 Minute track, I wanted more your flow has improved, the lyrics are dope with wordplays...and your Voice gotten a upgrade lol :)...Keep it up, it looks like you found your style...and I'm lovin it...peace.

cudn't find the WELCOME back song...where's the link?

so I left feed on the "club" song


ur voice is decent...my issue with female rappers is that they all sound the same

but ur flow was good...not Foxy Brown like, but good


I like ur delivery


not a bad track

o wait...can u do a fast flow...I heard some tongue twistin at the end


haaa

not bad


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^that was the right song... it's called Tip The Bottle Up, haha :) Thanx fa the feed nigga. :thumbup: