yo, why is this even 3-2? The fuck, it should be 3-0, =/

I want some fucking votes, fuck...................

oooooooommmmmmmffffffffgggggggg, whats a guy got to do to get a vote/win on this site

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this cezar guy aint even active, just gimme my fucking win allready

-Cezar-
Who the fuck Theory?...the kid is weak...Watch me snatch the victory
My wack is at your peak...so me droppin dope vs you is unnecessary
Simple
Fukk outta here bitch...go in T's house...act like his toilet and run shit
I'd put nades in ya mouth
be onlytime ya lips open up explosive
weak, didn't hit
Shit kid,hoppin on myside of the fence...you should ducked like mexicans
Make ya jaw clinch...put a straw in...and drain out all of your organs
Not a punch just a statement
Face it faggot...ya aint bout shit...getting no pussy just like a muslim
I know this...Cuz in school T was the type 2 attend dances with his cousin
it wasn't hard but it made me laugh
Fuckin prick...had to hop on all of LL's dicks...just to get picked
There for im have to get rid of ya quick..10lines to prove theory aint shit
worst part is this was your best line

Overall: You really didn't throw any punches, nothing was aimed at him, you just stated what you would do to him, didn't even use metaphors at the least. And you had a lot of filler. Your stuff was really simple. I guess your still just elevvating. Iunno, try to find some personals on the dude son, and then work on that I guess.

Theory:
Quick to rip a bitch, & he can get it spittin' sub par
Cuz i'll eat Caesar quicker then vegans at salad bars
Ok
Fuck The Legacy, bitch, these punches'll make ya face swell
& I aint talking ya wack crew when I say you'll be reppin' The L
haha, this was dope but played son
Theory'll break ya chest, hard enough to give ya cardiac arrest
So i'll take a stab at Cezar, followed by Cassius, Brutus, and the rest
kinda played but you flipped it originally, dope fucking line!
Go back to school, try to learn some shit
And by the way, it's spelt "Caeser" YOU DUMB BITCH!
no, simple, wack
Now get ripped, respect you kid? That's degrading dude
How you expect us to like ya
...when even your closest advisors assinated you
again simple, didn't connect
Fuck this girl yo, i'll put a hole in ya head & make it cave
Plus i'll caeser win so quick Julius'll start turnin' in his grave
oh shit, dope name/word play son
Faggot prick, suck a dick, i'll whore this poor head
Cuz the only Empire Cezar commands
...is C.A.L.I in his bed
ahahaha, this was funny

Overall: You had a dope verse, it first part and ending or cool, but in the middle, the spelling the name wrong, and assinated by his advisors line were pretty wack, and you put them in a row, I found it really took away from the beggining of the verse by hurting the consistancy of it all, I still think you dropped harder and got this though. LOL @ the cali line, dope son.[/QUOTE]

Supposed to be a vote but yeah posted it wrong... will re-post with my other name

Voted For: Theory

RE POSTING BECAUSE IT DIDNT WORK LAST TIME

-Cezar-
Who the fuck Theory?...the kid is weak...Watch me snatch the victory
My wack is at your peak...so me droppin dope vs you is unnecessary
Simple
Fukk outta here bitch...go in T's house...act like his toilet and run shit
I'd put nades in ya mouth
be onlytime ya lips open up explosive
weak, didn't hit
Shit kid,hoppin on myside of the fence...you should ducked like mexicans
Make ya jaw clinch...put a straw in...and drain out all of your organs
Not a punch just a statement
Face it faggot...ya aint bout shit...getting no pussy just like a muslim
I know this...Cuz in school T was the type 2 attend dances with his cousin
it wasn't hard but it made me laugh
Fuckin prick...had to hop on all of LL's dicks...just to get picked
There for im have to get rid of ya quick..10lines to prove theory aint shit
worst part is this was your best line

Overall: You really didn't throw any punches, nothing was aimed at him, you just stated what you would do to him, didn't even use metaphors at the least. And you had a lot of filler. Your stuff was really simple. I guess your still just elevvating. Iunno, try to find some personals on the dude son, and then work on that I guess.

Theory:
Quick to rip a bitch, & he can get it spittin' sub par
Cuz i'll eat Caesar quicker then vegans at salad bars
Ok
Fuck The Legacy, bitch, these punches'll make ya face swell
& I aint talking ya wack crew when I say you'll be reppin' The L
haha, this was dope but played son
Theory'll break ya chest, hard enough to give ya cardiac arrest
So i'll take a stab at Cezar, followed by Cassius, Brutus, and the rest
kinda played but you flipped it originally, dope fucking line!
Go back to school, try to learn some shit
And by the way, it's spelt "Caeser" YOU DUMB BITCH!
no, simple, wack
Now get ripped, respect you kid? That's degrading dude
How you expect us to like ya
...when even your closest advisors assinated you
again simple, didn't connect
Fuck this girl yo, i'll put a hole in ya head & make it cave
Plus i'll caeser win so quick Julius'll start turnin' in his grave
oh shit, dope name/word play son
Faggot prick, suck a dick, i'll whore this poor head
Cuz the only Empire Cezar commands
...is C.A.L.I in his bed
ahahaha, this was funny

Overall: You had a dope verse, it first part and ending or cool, but in the middle, the spelling the name wrong, and assinated by his advisors line were pretty wack, and you put them in a row, I found it really took away from the beggining of the verse by hurting the consistancy of it all, I still think you dropped harder and got this though. LOL @ the cali line, dope son.

Voted For: Theory

Who the fuck Theory?...the kid is weak...Watch me snatch the victory
My wack is at your peak...so me droppin dope vs you is unnecessary
^^^No to much self glory...weak opener
Fukk outta here bitch...go in T's house...act like his toilet and run shit
I'd put nades in ya mouth
be onlytime ya lips open up explosive
^^^Good punch
Shit kid,hoppin on myside of the fence...you should ducked like mexicans
Make ya jaw clinch...put a straw in...and drain out all of your organs
^^^Ight nuthin to special
Face it faggot...ya aint bout shit...getting no pussy just like a muslim
I know this...Cuz in school T was the type 2 attend dances with his cousin
^^^Naw this was weak
Fuckin prick...had to hop on all of LL's dicks...just to get picked
There for im have to get rid of ya quick..10lines to prove theory aint shit
^^^ight closer....

Quick to rip a bitch, & he can get it spittin' sub par
Cuz i'll eat Caesar quicker then vegans at salad bars
^^^Nice opener mixed wit the personal
Fuck The Legacy, bitch, these punches'll make ya face swell
& I aint talking ya wack crew when I say you'll be reppin' The L
^^^Nice personal
Theory'll break ya chest, hard enough to give ya cardiac arrest
So i'll take a stab at Cezar, followed by Cassius, Brutus, and the rest
^^^this was good....i liked this one
Go back to school, try to learn some shit
And by the way, it's spelt "Caeser" YOU DUMB BITCH!
^^^ight....nuthin to special
Now get ripped, respect you kid? That's degrading dude
How you expect us to like ya
...when even your closest advisors assinated you
^^^Lol....this was hot
Fuck this girl yo, i'll put a hole in ya head & make it cave
Plus i'll caeser win so quick Julius'll start turnin' in his grave
^^^werd this was fire.....
Faggot prick, suck a dick, i'll whore this poor head
Cuz the only Empire Cezar commands
...is C.A.L.I in his bed
^^^Nice closer....some ppl wont kno cali is empire but good punch

V/Theory.....this was a onesided battle....cezar u had a basic verse nuthin to special....werk on ur punchs an personals....Theory u came wit a hot verse ur punchs were on point...an personals were sick...u really came for the win...in this one......V/theory