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Christmas it shall be then!

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Voted For: Jack Da Rizzle

Daz
um your rhyme scheme was pretty good, but your verse seemed quite simple and childish in it. some of your wordplay came out some what almost forced, but it was doin pretty good. your closer was your best I thought it had a dope flow n multiple twist wiht a simple personal but nothin else really connected and made me think it was great. but it's some what pretty good man.

Jack
your verse wasn't much better, like this was a pretty close battle. But I thought that you were twisting shit up more and connecting your wordplay into decent personals. your rhyme scheme was good and your closer was also my favorite of your verse. so overall i thought you got this by a little bit.

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Voted For: Jack Da Rizzle

You suck on this acount & the others, so step back dick
Ya Jack Rackam acount is a pirate
...so I know you arrrrrr mitey! wack bitch
...Good
Talk smack kid? You PM Spek for votes, you're gay and it's true
So fucka PM! Since I can whore you in the AM too
....Nice
'Honeycomb' your hair, get a new dew, befo' I make ya plea n' cry
He's rusty as fuck, so even if this fake 'Posts' his verse
...we won't cereal lines
..Nope,kinda forced
I feel fine killing my friend, came to RV again? Go back and hide
& when I peeped your alias I could see ya DV8, towards RV's wack side!
...Good
You lack pride, get craked & die, win this battle and own the polls
Daz can't hold his own
...i'll beat Austin 316 times and leave his body stone cold
...OK

Dog really, we never battled before...? so just ask Y,
i mean thats the only thing that comes between how ya b(y)e,
...No,Wtf is this?
n yes, i party without you, thats why im missing the joke,
think you speak with a golden flow... ?
.................. naw, thats just me pissin down ya throat,
....Good
Josh's thinkin Austin's a tex-as, tryin to discredit my heat now,
but everyone seizure wacked...
..........................like an epileptic gettin a beatdown,
...Too technical
yo, this wimps crap with ryhmes: i'll leave'm gaspin for days,
cuz he imp-acts with lines... but only by casting fairies in plays,
..Forced
so ya jack'd-a rizzle.? see, theives get smacked back a little..
get mixed in the middle,
......................you wont reign cuz now jacks-a-drizzle,....
..Good

Ok,JTR got this,Daz was too technical and had forced shit.His best line was the Jacks-A-Drizzle line,the rest was shit.Some had potential,like the seizure line.But wtf @ eptidemic beatdown shit?Too technical.

Vote-Jack the Ripper

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I'll vote tonight, wordilly word word...............

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tonight has gone....................................... :nono:

lmfaoooooooooo, OH YA

my bad man, alright i'm voting right now man

This was feedback posted for Jack Da Rizzle
 

I vote for myself. cause i :love: you two too much.

fag, :)...........................................