Voted For: ~Luciano~

aight so this battle was pretty damn decent

luciano first things first
the godfather intro was dope but uhh a lil long

ANYWAYS...
this verse was hot as fuck
flow was bananaz, i mean fa real....
but obviously, what really got you this battle was the punchlines
"losses stretchin out longer than shaq legs"
lmao @ that
outro was a lil long but w/e

tony
first things first this beat is a lil bit killed for me
i think cause i once saw a porno where it was used
lmao but ANYWAYS....
if it means anything i thought your verse was a hell of a lot more catchy, but this battle is bout the punches and luciano had you there
dont get me wrong, you had some nice ones
but some were a lil off, some not even true
"how he got a puerto rican name when he blacker than me?"
^^luciano the gangster was actually italian, not puerto rican
but w/e

dont get me wrong
this battle was madd solid on both ends
luciano just came with the punches
and thats what wins things

Voted For: ~Luciano~

aiight

Tony Green:

what's hot:
nice delivery

what's coo:
flow, emotion could be upped a bit
had coo lyrics
beat was coo

what's not:
quality was a lil ehh

Luciano:

what's hot:
delivery and emotion was nice
beat is dope
had some hard hitting punches good shit

what's coo:
flow could be upped a bit

what's not:
quality lol

overall, this was coo battle. nothing too great. just decent. nboth came coo. had some nice punches. But I think Luciano edged it out in the end with a slighty better drop

so

v/Luciano

EZ

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This was feedback posted for Tony Green
 

checkin polls mayne.....nice drops to both of em..

What the fuck I merked Luciano even he said it himself whaddup with all the d/r votes

Voted For: ~Luciano~

Tony Green: the concept for the hook was good but damn it didn't seem to be on beat smooth. God damn your mic is crusty as fuck, i can't tell if that's a sound effect you got or just static. The first verse sounds liek it only had one real punch the puertorican name one and it wasn't killer diller, just okay. In the second verse the troop punch was pretty good, some of the other stuff was just aight. went on the defensive shoulda stayed on the attack and went for the juggular man. don't worry about trying to predict his moves cuz if you run em into the ground it won't even matter. damn even the sound effects on your shit sound crusty lmao. track was okay.

Troopa: I don't see what the skit at the intro had to do with jack. The robbed for you green line was nice lol. I'm sure you know your mic is hurtin. Your flow is pushed some spaces. pumpin the gas was pretty cool, it was nice to see some punches. but all that blabber at the end is extra unneccessary, i woulda rather heard more lyrics, shit son, talked more than rapped. i dunno what's up with that reppin a net crew till you die shit, but what ever.


battle was okay, luciano had more humor in his shit which in 2006 is what's gonna win battles so with a yawn i gotta give it to luciano. if troop spit as long as green did this woulda been a blow out.


vote: Troop.

Aint No Dr votes...certain Cats felt u won...Certain catz felt i Won

Uppin for the W

lol @ this ni99a takein away an explained votes

this ni99a den turned bitch

but wha eva im still gone win

cause of your dick riders and A.I groupies

This was feedback posted for Tony Green
 

allright
flow luciano was prdetty cool here but a few parts were a little shakey tony on for the most part too bout the same really tony might have came a little better
quality i could really cazre less but luciano got that no question tony how you not gonna re record your hook lol?

lyrics i dotn know i think luciano probably took this yall were pretty close though

I go over everything in my tracks I just had the overlay down to low

Voted For: Tony Green

umm...mayne,



luciano..intro took too long which gave a minus..beat was okay...yeah u had punches decent ones...and u had a cool flow but i must say u hopped off flow in several spots and ur breathe force on the mic kinna made ur verse forced..and its like u rushed this too much cos u didnt have a chorus and well planned track like TG...

tony green..i am feeling ur beat! i was feeling the attitude on this confident and stuff...yeah u had decent punches too...you had a better flow..u neva slipped off tempo @ any spot...u planned u track well which is a plus...



this was a tie IMO,both had cool lyrics yeah...but tg takes this cos he had a better flow,he was smooth on his track and he made this a track not like a half way done homework..luciano yeah u were iight too but urs was more like an ALMOST finished homework..

i aint even gonna talk on quality..cos my mic dosent have a gd one therefore i dont know much about qualyties...what else?...nothing


keep repin u two

Tony shut yo bitch ass up

everybody that voted 4 u i could merk on the Mic

End of story...

This was feedback posted for ~Luciano~
 

yea sooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnsssssssssssss niggassssssssssssssssssssssss

Voted For: ~Luciano~

Luciano - Intro's alright...Godfather right? It started to bore me after a little bit though. You should have maybe put some music behind it. Aight, your verse kicks in. Your quality needs to come up a little bit. This is one of my favorite beats....lol. Your flow's on, but at the beginning your delivery was way weak, then you came in hard as you progressed. You had some good punches in this shit. I liked the Dirk punch and the Had to make 2 SCs shit. You had some nice shit and finished it off well. You should have cut it off a couple seconds after the verse....cause it just sounded like you were rambling on. Good shit though....

Tony Green - Not really feeling the hook shit at the beginning man. The quality was pretty bad on it. You shouldn't use slow beats like this on a diss track unless you're gonna come really hype on it cause it takes away from your whole delivery, which was kinda monotone....once again, the hook wasn't really feeling much. Your flow was alright, but a little shakey at points. You kinda mumbled through some lines too. Punches were alright, but I honestly didn't remember any after the battle verse was over.....

Vote - Luciano

Just had a better rounded track....

Voted For: ~Luciano~

tony - aight. hook was a good idea, but you fucked the flow up a lil bit. if it was on beat, shit woula been nice.

verses - first verse was aiiiight. only stand out line in either verse to me was puerto rican name when he look black and shit. that was a decent line. but if you were banking on that winning you the battle.... =/. flow was aiiight on the track. lyrics was like i said, aiiight. beat was aiiight also.

summin it all up, i didnt start vibin/bobbin my head at all ya know ? i'd definately study some good heads on some other sites when it comes to battlin man. not a bad rack, but it was lackin.. no hate, just real talk man. get at me



Luciano - aight. clip at the front is aight. im impatient so i just fast forwarded to the verse yah'mean ? aight beat is straight, not the best battle beat tho. gun play ehhh no points for that. aight robbin ya green, feelin that. rappin since 05 aight feel that. lmao at two sc to get noticed. aight thas wassup. flow was ALOT better than tonys. could still be polished, but thats neither here nor there. lyrics was decent. Flow was decent. talkin at the end. could have just stopped the track. ehhhhh a.i. till you die and shit. net crew lmao. but i mean do you, yah'mean.

overall - both ya'll could have upped ya track game up a bit, but i think luciano took this pretty easily. better flow, better lyrics, better quality. just a better track

Vote - Luc