this mutherfucker hatin me when he dont even got battle stats/
yea cus hes scared, cus wit cyphers like that, hes bound to get layed flat/
he was asian till he died, which would be right now/
swearin hot shit is his fame, but his skill is unfound/
and tilleyedie is mad, cus he tried out for my crew and got denied/
i seen your battles, o wait my bad you dont post on frontlines/
wit your blunt lines, and no punchlines, nursery school rhymes/

ho-ho listen to IceMan obsessed wid battle-stats
when he should be writing rhymes instead of smokin dude's bats
(that's fellatio, y'all, and it really ain't cool)
on the ratio, Ice, it's you belongs in nursry skool
what was dat about asians? you got a problem, bro?
coz it's you dat works in sales and has a sister who's a ho

look at this wanna bee rapper, fuckin aussie/
it was very bad thing to try and cross me/
talkin bout fellatio and gay shit like that/
and yea im upseesed wit battle stats/
and the funny thing is wheres yours at/
wit my mic, i rip emcees when i attak/
and i dont smoke bats, i use him to peel ya cap/
sergeant barwark, battle him, cus its where competitions at/ (SIKE)

yo this bitch thinks he big and bad, i know im 0-0
ive been in bout 4 battles but still got majority votes
bitch how could u get in a fuckin crew i couldn't
u got into 2 battles so wen i called u out u can say "i wouldnt"
soo yeah bitch u definally "tore" me up in this thread
haha bitch every1 that looks at it says iceman is dead..

Um hun, Zero doesnt ryme with Vote...
Just for that, Leme bitch slap you till ya Choke...
Like Ali, when you talk shit, Im provoked...
And in the end, I've found my mark -Ive already woke...
This is just till you die, Carry ya lies...
Keep belive you tear up mc'z - Make them despise...

wow that whack please don't post again or ima have to untuck the toast again jixi put down the pen stop tryin you rap a being good but you just lying im the reason you'll wann stop rhymin you posted b4 me wow that bad timin


OK first of all, you did not meet the line requirement. Second that verse was plain wack. If you ever post in here again, please make sure to meet the line requirements and work on elevating your drops. W.E.C. should help you out, I suggest you go spend some time in that forum.

~Bounce~

please.. i'd love for this kid to be hatin
was that a verse? or a conversation?
be real son, n' im too bored to kill
This kat needs to get a keyboard wit skills
Accord to thrills, you get tossed departed
you never had a chance nor skills to start with..

Auspicious maybe, but your not successful at all..
Just an Auspicious time for you to take a big fall..
Kick your ass and then call your self prosperous..
You think your style glows, yet it's not phosphorus..
You can keep the auspicious but put an In to start..
Cause your careers going down hill, fast in a cart..

who are you to talk about no success?
you're 0-0 where do you get respect?
I shouldn't talk, i'm 0-1 from being DQ'd
but if you look at my verse that was only a preview
of things to come so basically my record should be abolished
it seriously says something about you...your avatar's an alcholic

what the hell talkin shit like u da man
if i beat the man i am the man soo thats the plan
0-1 hell you would have lost without the d'q
bitch i cant hear ya now is your mic in que
bitch running his mouth, pull somthin slick
and ill bust ya back a couple years back, "Ya moms on my dick"

holy shit, this cats as wack as his avy an sig,
you cant merk with played lines, "Ya moms on my dick"
if i understood his name, id probs 'adress' him,
an i dont mean noffin to with womens dressin!!
perperate you more, than you lil JAP picture,
6 lines slated, an mini little scripture!!!

You're basic... its straight unfortunate I'm faced with this
Merking a contender whos tryna decide.. which race he is
You've solid status for real depth.. ya 'sub-standard' son
Like seasoned Nam vets.. I'm simply merking this Jap for fun
Ya words do more damage to yaself.. its Kamikaze realisation
Tillz an easy target.. he put the red dot in place as preparation

To 007..

Double's truanting... the lack of education shines through
Ya whole verse is mis-spelt.. ya heading for the dole queue!
Tryed to diss Till Eye.. but failed.. so you I've gotta clown
If I showed ya record to the law.. even they'd feel let down!
Ya verse's in Front Lines are embarrasing to say the least
This herb don't fold in battles... he's permanantly creased!

vocabularys to you seem to win the war of lyrics,
i burn this guys 'soul' like im the white spirit!!!!
lyrical solider, me first you second, that an order,
you couldnt keep me away, if you was a cordon < or however you spell it
it you wanna step to me, get an higher ladder,
i only attack in the dark, im a black adder!!!!

Spyboy lurkin round Cypher, tryin ta creep on rhymes...
When his ass should really be in school during daytime.
He admits to truancy, guess he's proud ta be dumb...
But that don't surprise me, look where this idiot's from.
Fuckin England, worthless Britan, such a stank place...
Dank, wet & just plain ugly, but hey, it matches ya face!

Slightly better son... but still it hardly comes close
Next time make it decent... or don't bother to post
Ya brittle.. straight weak.. yet we share the same ethnicity
I'm putting pale spots on this herb.. like I was calcium deficiancy
Those ladders you speak of.. kid.. they're called steps
Walking over you repeatedly is boring.. its as tiresome as it gets

Yea checked out your unawakened prodigy not a tru prophecy
Comin from harlem got the harlem shake it's ur hand on the gun shaky
Flow is so slow your under water, crawlin my way to the top ill get farther
You think your harder but you and the other wack emcs barter
Constantly back and forth like an escaped slave makn his way north
Checked your teeth and gums not worth as much as ur ancestors at birth
If your the slave im the chain and forever in wackness u remain
Like the blood stain from the whip on the forgotten slave ship
Go ahead and give me lip and your script ill quick flip
You make no sense like retards that speak in slurs and blurs
Your punches have the aim of a crosseyed monkey with to much fur
So from here on out listen before you start to scream n shout
PZ