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Jo-JO 02-11-04 02:21 PM

Outcome i told you before and I say it again
Your place is in Open mic where you can write what u sayin
Now you didn't get a chance to take a second glance
At the shit you said before you picked up your lyrical lance
Now your untrained and confused leaving me plenty amused
Your structure is wack and skill is lack tell me wich ryming dic. you used
Your blind to any type of forthright topic
And your tears droping fast like a forest in the tropic
I know I know it's metaphors and bull shit
But homie piece of advice you have to learn how to use it

DAARK 02-11-04 02:49 PM

JoJo? nigga ur name soundz so gay~u should be branded "poster-boy" faggot
I have no luv fa weak "text-rappers"~round em up and "knee" em up like ma nigga Sagat / (Street Fighter)
Who da fuck gave U power to tell nigz where dey belong~bitch U wrong
U a 1 hit wonder like dat bitch who did tha "my neck my back" song but
don't get confused bout me callin U a "1 hit wonder" ur shytz totally wack
infact I was meanin how U go dat x-tra mile fa ur fagz~breakin ur back
str8 up...down and muthafuckin across this boy "Jo" iz @ a friggin loss
this fucker let his french poodle "cummed" on his fish burger fa tatar sauce :shocked: :laugh:

Evil_SoLo 02-11-04 02:52 PM

huh?
 
Daark...what the hell were you thinkin when u wrote that? damn

Aite,
Im gunna show you a lil sumthin//
give ya a head start to ya runnin//
by stickin my dick ya ear so ya know when Im cummin//
take a trip to da whackness emergency center and heal quick//
theyll take a dump in ya mouth n maybe then ul spit some real Shit//
my bad...I aint feelin it today. Oh well...
LaTeR

OutCome 02-11-04 03:01 PM

Can some one please help this poor man of of my penis???
I love it how this cats needs to to act like he's the king shit
But your just drowning in your own watered down rain
in accuality im in control, its got you pounding with pain
I see you spit biblical, or at least well... your sig does
So dont lie to yourself, hell i mean birds dont buzz
Quit the fronts, its somthing you really need to do
Cuz like how water runs, this aint froma dic to.......
I mean does it Look like it was SPitten by you?
Man i MUST be hungrey, I mean man you got me feeding
Im to Old for this.. Well sonny, good luck with the meaning
Now if you need some help, have your mommy read it
After all you education looks Stealth, what did you eat it?

DAARK 02-11-04 03:18 PM

^^^^^yea evil I did'nt put much thought into that one :laugh:


Wackness center nigga? plz~I drop "hot" shytz dat "freeze"
and leave "solo" dick suckerz who think their "evil" to dey kneez
yea I'll be tha bigger man and admit I slip up fo a quick minute
so wat!! that'z my worse verse~if we battled U still can't win it


P.S. damn I think am losin ma flow mayne gotta go re-charge :banghead:

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 04:03 PM

yo bro, rhymin against me is a no no///
its impossible to win like sword fightin Zorro///
so dont go "solo"///
how can you say Outcome sucks dick, when u snow blow?
ill rip your arms off like Goro, then have him fuck you, for being a homo///
tape it, then make your mom watch it in slowmo///
keep it on the low low, cause my flow glows like a jordaon promo///
i slap hoes though, kill anything that moves, and foes know///
spit at me and ill wipe out your species like the Doe-Doe

Chase 02-11-04 04:18 PM

Unwritten how anout un heard of
I would touch this kid with OJ's glove
Drop you at the bottom of the atlantic
And you know I'll do it thats you looking so frantic
Majic could even bring you back
If Hova was ya gost writer you'ld still be wack
Back up and breath easy
Cuz it takes more than a boy to please me
Do yu like my 9 and squeeze the

lilrenegade89 02-11-04 04:21 PM

damn rite ur losin ur flow u gotta recharge
everyone here noes ur a fuckin lyrical retard
ur flow is ill i mean sick like a dizise
ur so dum u think u hear the birds en da bee's
dis whore is a hoe en a fuckin sleeze
she'll do it in the car with ne pimp she see's
i blow this slut up even in darkness
wanna fite c'mon b lets fuckin start this
with a glock to ya head my ass u wanna kiss
hit or miss i drop u down in the ditch with this diss

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 04:28 PM

OMG.......... posting again and again doesnt make you faggots nicer///
scroll back a couple of pages, i served you both at the start of this cypher
im the mic slicer, cutting your lines///
yours aint nothing to mine///
im flooding you rhym'as////
chopping off dicks and butt plugging vaginas///
im sicker than a white kid starved, aids infested livin in China///
i dont show gun or renegade love, or gothic forgivness///
both u stop posting, P.S. this TOPIC IS FINISHED

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 04:29 PM

Lilrenagade89 ur ass needs to calm down
U avy looks like a high white boy who dressed up as a clown
In ur sig it has pics of gunz but u took young to use them
Stick to ur waterguns but please dont abuse dem
U say u rising up da ranks but u still aint go no wins
Ur ass is just like a shark in water but without any fins

Chase 02-11-04 04:35 PM

Oliverclohsoff Jump off the nearest cliff
We don't need another weak kid with rymes so stiff
I couldn't even smoke a spliff, and laugh at that fact that
your weak ass got riped
Here's a tip just simply back up
cuz every time you open your mouth you get fucked up
So sick I'm trowen up somethin tight every verse
And sticken fags like you in a hurst

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 04:43 PM

First of all chase u needs to stop bitin off 8mile
Slap u all da way back to egypt and have u swimming da nile
Ill slit open ur wrist and choke you with ur own veins
and just like ur career dat post was all down da drain
No one gives a fuck about wat you have to say
Ill stab ur ass up but still have a Great day :)

Chase 02-11-04 04:48 PM

Just cuz i'm from the D don't mean i rep 8 mile
But while we're the subject Joy Road is killen 7 mile
On the other hand your about as scary as a chucky doll
I'll rip your face in two or put you to sleep on the green mile
better eat your spinach, cuz unless your pop pie your weak ass is finshed
Actually it wouldn't matter if you were him or bam bam
I don't tune in to toons who keep a dick in thier hand
And one in they mouth boys who dress like like girls
For freaks down south

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 04:54 PM

freaks from the south? you sound weak in the mouth...///
you spit and i barely speak, then your out///
both your parents were gay, then they spawned FAGlings///
out pop two bad things, chase and renegade, 2 born drag-queens///
WTF am i saying? im not trying, in all honesty///
imma save my real shit for when a real MC disses on me

Chase 02-11-04 05:02 PM

Wha ?
That was most jiberish I have ever read
I can tell your talking out the side of your neck and not usen your head
Go to bed before I put your ass in the street
A day on the sun couldn't compare to this heat
Don't speek, cuz I know your hurt
I can see you skulls leaken thing I guess the 38s do work

lyricalchick86 02-11-04 05:04 PM

harzard get thrown in da gutter
i tol u u were whack bitch did i studard
why u still tryin to flow nigga u need to go
u new to rb leave while u have the chance
wen he leave yall giv him a round of a hand
im dat fmc dat jus dissed u its ova man u are threw

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 05:08 PM

38? i work over 48 hours a you!!! (thats "week")///
sadly, ill make you choke on your own spit givin u fat cheeks//
the only boys you know are the "Backstreet"///
they tried to jack me, then i started laughing//
like i saw a gothling who tried rapping.....with lots of bad acting


@CHASE

Chase 02-11-04 05:10 PM

Young lady from hopewell i hope you learn
How to spell, how to rap, or get burned
Oh wait you are burning your hot to death
I saw you on MTV,for true life I got HIV
and herpes on lips, and still got dick on tha brain
So young and so lose damn its a shame
I would battle you but it would be a murder
Cut deep like I can only rip, I'll give your ass a tip
We they let us free you should have staied on the ship

lyricalchick86 02-11-04 05:30 PM

bitch u bein chased by lyricalchick
yo spit losed me before i got to da middle of it
i dont kno wat u sayin damn dats sad
next.......
hazard i done spitted on u like so many times
let me tell u man do it rite next time
u n chase was made fo each otha
n let me tell u chase im a grown ass women
not no young lady u got it all wrong
jus like yo flow u dumb hoe

Chase 02-11-04 05:37 PM

So young and so dumb, damn rap music !
And you hate on ppl like us cuz you can't do it
Ah well mabey on day I'll educate you
Instead of hurting your feelings like the rest of us do
Little girl tried to rip with just three bars
When I saw her given BJs in three diffrent cars
Emotional scars I know I gave them to you
Extrernal ones two when I sent the speacial threw you

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 05:40 PM

i dont wanna get in this, cause i know youll get hurt///
u cant freestyle, the only thing off the "top", is your shirt///
when femcees say they're underground, its just means im under their skirt//
hazard at work........im back to attack wack mics//
thats right, beating down and breakin up cat fights

DAARK 02-11-04 05:42 PM

Hazard keep ur "unwritten" lame shyts deep within/
cos tha more U type~U get closer to an un-pardonable sin/
Nig U lack substance like pussy holez gettin fucked by a "spectre"/
even if U play tha role of Hannibal Lecter~fag I'll still "chin check ya"/
but hol'up a fuckz minute wat am I doin?/(speakin to a fag)
this pric decieved his fam with bitchez picz on wallz but he prefer dicks
that are on "point" and spewin(faggot ass)/

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 05:48 PM

you spend your time, typin symbols ()?|\/""~ and huntin fags///
ill hit your bitch ass like a "Punchin" bag///
i spit nothin wack, i leave you lost in the "Daark"///
with black arts that dart at retards who wanted to start///
now you have an open heart, that got torn apart///
ill shatter your lines and eat your rhymes to grow smart


@darrk

carlosbarrett 02-11-04 06:07 PM

You are as weak as a punch from Elton John
Bitch you wear thongs
In the shower you sing Britney spears songs
You are a fraud
But watch the words that leave your lips
Cuz these bullets in this clip love to go on road trips

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 06:10 PM

nice drop, though it coulda been longer///
i only sing Britney, cause "now im STRONGER"///
when i spit, your a goner....im the beyonder that smash your skull in your brain///
till you pull a vein, then stab you with 3 knives like i was Wolverine......whos next men?//
im like Magneto and my crews the lyrical X-men///
now thats henchmen!!!!////
then have you "french kiss this clentched fist" like the french connection

carlosbarrett 02-11-04 06:15 PM

The only thing you smash is a male ass
Lose your life in a flash
You spread your cheeks for cash and your lips define ash
You are an idiot
It is'nt smart to push me
You as soft as an eight year olds pussy

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 06:21 PM

if im an 8 year olds pussy, then im that "tight"///
ill eat your wack lines in black night, to feed my apitite///
ill take a bite, cause nothing tastes like blood do///
ummmm....why you still posting, you lost......check the post above you..
its enough to, merk any MC, they could post any amount///
its enough to make him change his name to Carla, and delete his account

carlosbarrett 02-11-04 06:27 PM

You are a faggot hiding behind a facade(fassad)
You write disses and curses then on sunday you seek God
You are still soft but this time I'ma dismiss you
You as soft as a piece of wet tissue
Fuck you
You living a dream you need to be awake and stop writing poems you vanilla cupcake

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 06:31 PM

im a cupcake.........wow your wack....just face it////
your lines are to basic and im here to give them a face-lift////
Carla-Braclet is a bitch rapper, not to mention one of my favorites///
im sick like child rape cases that went to the courts naked///
imagine the lies a report takes///
this is cupcake..over and out, to strawberry short cake

:laugh:

carlosbarrett 02-11-04 06:50 PM

Here is complexity
You are too basic to stand next to me
I spit sulphur nitrate face it you dreamin
You spit another man's cemen
You pledge allegance to parapalegics for quarreling with me bitch
I'm burning pottasium cuz of the flash you can't see shit

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 06:57 PM

if you spit nitrate in my face ill just rub it in///
it says "diss the MC above", not fall in love with him....///
this dumbfuck is always right on my butt///
if not that, hes all on my nuts////
i know im sick and your a fan of me, but you cant manage me///
im livin lavish B, under canapi's where my hamicks be///
then i get someone like "Carlos" in font and in back, tryin to sandwich me///
automatically imma gonna counter attack with a verse////
imma be like EM was to Stan, but 3 times worse

KytoKhouang 02-11-04 06:59 PM

Unwritted Hazard has a white moms and he dont know his daddy.
This fool couldn't be pimp shit, if he was rollin Escalade, Caddy.
I'm break this fools ankles, like AI to the Knicks..
Eat you up like my Moms eat noodles wit Chop Sticks..
I'm leave you dropped on the ground traced with chalk.
Murder your rhymes so bad you can't stand or walk.
Your rhymes their flakin, your bones, their breakin'
Slaughter you so bad, even tomorrow you won't be wakin'

carlosbarrett 02-11-04 07:07 PM

lol...this just got funny

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 07:14 PM

its funny? what am i??? a clown for your amusement??///
im a neusense, that put your mouth on my dick then fused it////
lol now thats stupid, i should put bacteria in your verse, just to put "life" in your music///
your from sugar land, maybe cause it sounds like you spit with candy gum
i could melt your mic, even if it was Adamantium//

carlosbarrett 02-11-04 07:23 PM

hazard you are not even a caution
You defeating me is not a option
I'll paralyze your fiber optics by manipulating your logic while the clock tics
Fuck a rhyme I'll beat yo mama to a vegetable
Mad as hell from hell cuz I won't get head from you
You my fan pussy
Biting Barney and Dr.Seuss
Because growing up your father gave your asshole abuse

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 07:32 PM

asshole abuse.....thats so....obtuse///
ill put this fruit in a "loop" then tighin the noose///
no use, ahhh SHOOT, hazard made you look///
play my dick like a flute, with those music lessons you took//
cause you aint an MC, you aint even a poser///
if you wanted to see god, then battlin me will get you 2 times closer

carlosbarrett 02-11-04 07:34 PM

i love this...pure comedy..i'll never stop laughing at these punchlines.

GIVEN 02-11-04 07:38 PM

ok who must i rip to shreds
i know it has to be carlos barett
boy you aint got no fans
"pop pop and then you ran"
dog calm down it was just pop corn
man your rhymes were better when you were born
when your mamas pussy was torn
you aint from this so called sugarland
your with michael from neverland
you and michael went and got better than
friends you slept in the same bed
i bet he left your asshoole burning red

carlosbarrett 02-11-04 07:47 PM

Given you are a waste
Wipe my shit off your face
It only takes...20 pounds of weight to break....your leg
You vividly describe anal sex like you participate
You ain't a thug you a sweetheart...a laffy taffy... a sweettart
Be smart .....when it's dark don't come at me in this art
I spit dart at any faggot ass puta cabron
Ya lo se tienes cero amigos
dejame ver tus cosas
tu corazon sabrosas
ha hecho famosa
I busted yo ass like I'm supposed tah

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 07:55 PM

carlos, your just another illegal amigo//
in the face of evil, you just look through a peep hole///
i make people "sweat" more than last summers El Nino///
me no speaka english, do you want Fanta?//
i could merk you in espanol if i want ta//
Acuna maTaTa...lol what a wonderful slogan///
ill leave your mouth needing lotion, like a latino who tried swimming for freedom, but drowned in the ocean


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