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Vango 11-29-04 08:18 PM

yo soc i know you said it was garbage but can you break it down line by line so i can elevate.

Logic The Goonie 11-29-04 08:19 PM

I was talking to vango with the homo boy part.

And no@headgames.

50Cal. 11-29-04 08:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
I'm not touching your's Vango....just know it was garbage.

Dunno about crews Head.

Like women worried bout getting fat, troop watching his back, cuz i'm sick like sars...
he's wack, evertime he raps it's a criminal offense, why else is he always behind bars!
nope
Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy...
*troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money!
LMFAO
Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling...
he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and...
...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading!
straight fire
Can't think of a punch, so just make a weak comparasin, troop rhymes bout as 'fat' as models...
oh damn! wait, hold up! sorry bout that, my bad troop... was I coppying your style?
no

Jesus Christ the middle two bars wee dope, the others were garbage. Don't ever start a verse with bullshit anymore please. :( Keep workin hard.

agreeded lmfao that troop line is fucking dope omg i shouldve said that :laugh:

Logic The Goonie 11-29-04 08:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vango
yo soc i know you said it was garbage but can you break it down line by line so i can elevate.

It's not possible for you to elevate.
You've been here longer than me and still write crap.
Now be gone.

Abraxas 11-29-04 08:22 PM

ROFL at thread................

Vango 11-29-04 08:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
It's not possible for you to elevate.
You've been here longer than me and still write crap.
Now be gone.



ha your funny socrates, i own kids like you. get some skill and we'll battle sometime, better yet, get a drivers license and then maybe you could drive to a real battle sometime.

OWNED

Logic The Goonie 11-29-04 08:26 PM

Oh Lord you're an idiot.

Paramik, drop something and i'll rate it for you with Mike ;)

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 08:29 PM

Socrates and Mike Hawk leaders the new leaders of the feedback clique
Leave your verse and they'll get back to you once Mike's done sucking Soc's dick
wack
Hawk and Socrates live their life thru the net, that's why they never get laid
They'd rather diss your battle verse and use cool words like, wack and plizayed
lol...but wack
Siskel and Ebert of Rapverse, destroy your whole ego, but don't have a clue
Except instead of a thumbs up, thumbs down, if we hate it then it's a big Fuck You
wack

Pretty much your regular Vango drop...

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 08:34 PM

With a record that's as bad as Shaq's freethrow sheet....
Is that why u hide it now, kause u know you're weak??....
lmao@makin sheet a rhyme like that...weak
Ima keep baggin on your record kause your rhyming is cheap....
When this battle is over, they'll find your remains in a garbage heap....
Gangsta...but no punch
Around my way i'm considered a heat champ....
Kause my flows light up blocks like street lamps....
Who cares...self glorifying..weak punch
You can't ground my supersonic even if you started trying....
You betta go somewheres else wit them EBAY rhymes u buyin....
blah
Toxic or toxin, panic your logic wit bare knuckle boxin....
Combinin punches, kicks, & elbows jus to add extra props in....
blah

Weak drop...self glorifyin is sumthing u dont do in battles...need to actually drop punches too son.

MC Firetruck 11-29-04 08:36 PM

Peep my battle verse against Damestik...

I had to set a short drop time for me to be whippin' this pig
Or else he would've run away like Michael Vick in his sig
He's wack but thinks he's the best kid, but I give him credit
He gets felt…when he's molested in his domestics
You only push weight when you walk with ya fat frame
Fuck a punch, I'll make a statement, you give white people a bad name
For real, he claims he's dope 'cuz he listens to Pac all day long
Why you tryin' to "make-up" stories when you got ko'd by Eyvon? (Avon)
So don't ever fuckin' pm me again and try to push me
'Cuz they say you are what you eat, and you admitted to lickin' pussy

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 08:36 PM

Like 'virgin asians' in 'porn' flicks, this bitch is gonna get 'torn'
Lmao at the quote, only time X seen pussy...
... Is when he was born!
gay
Like 'gay men' addicted to 'druggs' this kid likes 'crack'
And the "..." after your name leads to: "At being wack"
forced as fuck
This kid threw a fit, cuz I got into classic and he wasn't let in the crew
And it's sad, when to own X, posting his picture is all you have to do!
lol
Xclusive with girls reminds me of handicaps playing in the N.B.A., he can't 'score'
Site is his life, cuz last time X was out with freinds...
... He was in a computer store!
lol

Ok...didn't come straight gobbage...

50Cal. 11-29-04 08:37 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Hawk
Socrates and Mike Hawk leaders the new leaders of the feedback clique
Leave your verse and they'll get back to you once Mike's done sucking Soc's dick
wack
Hawk and Socrates live their life thru the net, that's why they never get laid
They'd rather diss your battle verse and use cool words like, wack and plizayed
lol...but wack
Siskel and Ebert of Rapverse, destroy your whole ego, but don't have a clue
Except instead of a thumbs up, thumbs down, if we hate it then it's a big Fuck You
wack

Pretty much your regular Vango drop...

lmfao omg that was funny ass shit haha fuck vango :gfy:

50Cal. 11-29-04 08:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MC Firetruck
Peep my battle verse against Damestik...

I had to set a short drop time for me to be whippin' this pig
Or else he would've run away like Michael Vick in his sig
He's wack but thinks he's the best kid, but I give him credit
He gets felt…when he's molested in his domestics
You only push weight when you walk with ya fat frame
Fuck a punch, I'll make a statement, you give white people a bad name
For real, he claims he's dope 'cuz he listens to Pac all day long
Why you tryin' to "make-up" stories when you got ko'd by Eyvon? (Avon)
So don't ever fuckin' pm me again and try to push me
'Cuz they say you are what you eat, and you admitted to lickin' pussy

omg and you think you can beat me?lets be fucking serious bitch :nono:

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 08:39 PM

I had to set a short drop time for me to be whippin' this pig
Or else he would've run away like Michael Vick in his sig
weak personal
He's wack but thinks he's the best kid, but I give him credit
He gets felt…when he's molested in his domestics
played
You only push weight when you walk with ya fat frame
Fuck a punch, I'll make a statement, you give white people a bad name
wack...as hell.
For real, he claims he's dope 'cuz he listens to Pac all day long
Why you tryin' to "make-up" stories when you got ko'd by Eyvon? (Avon)
she sucks, thats a disrespectful
So don't ever fuckin' pm me again and try to push me
'Cuz they say you are what you eat, and you admitted to lickin' pussy
lol...but someone already used that..i think that was in this thread

Throw some more punches, and if ur gettin personal..make it a punch too.

50Cal. 11-29-04 08:40 PM

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first(1)
Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets(2)
Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias(3)
'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors(4)





Explanations for those who need them-
(1)he got nas in his sig and avy but his profile says hes from 'THA ROC'
(2)his old names flow intelligent and a white flag means you surrender and want peace
(3)wordplay here g balls is forsakens alias hes riding on gs balls like mine
(4)he dickriders valor and a few others and they dickride him back and mind over body is his crew

MC Firetruck 11-29-04 08:40 PM

Yeah, you're funny...too bad that was a 5 minute verse

And I never said I thought I could beat you, you're just assuming I can't:thumbup:

MC Firetruck 11-29-04 08:41 PM

^That was to Empire, thanks for the feedback Mike:thumbup:

Vango 11-29-04 08:43 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Hawk
Socrates and Mike Hawk leaders the new leaders of the feedback clique
Leave your verse and they'll get back to you once Mike's done sucking Soc's dick
wack
Hawk and Socrates live their life thru the net, that's why they never get laid
They'd rather diss your battle verse and use cool words like, wack and plizayed
lol...but wack
Siskel and Ebert of Rapverse, destroy your whole ego, but don't have a clue
Except instead of a thumbs up, thumbs down, if we hate it then it's a big Fuck You
wack

Pretty much your regular Vango drop...


Thanks Mike for the feedback :thumbup:

Vango 11-29-04 08:43 PM

Yo Mike Hawk is gangsta

Logic The Goonie 11-29-04 08:45 PM

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first(1)
no punchworded this way
Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets(2)
coo
Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
set up was the punch....wtf
Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias(3)
lol, word
'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors
woooooooooord

Decent srop but could definatly be better. :thumbup:

Vango 11-29-04 08:48 PM

Yo Mike do this one, do this one,








Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame
By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name
Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same
Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game
I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy
How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy?

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 08:51 PM

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first(1)
worded horribly
Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets(2)
weak...
Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
wack
Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias(3)
lol
'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors
lol..almost

Almost...but type weak.

50Cal. 11-29-04 08:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Hawk
Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first(1)
worded horribly
Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets(2)
weak...
Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
wack
Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias(3)
lol
'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors
lol..almost

Almost...but type weak.

still mad i voted aganist you sorry i aint a d.r and you suck :nono:

Logic The Goonie 11-29-04 08:52 PM

Lmfao....
.......

Vango 11-29-04 08:54 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vango
Yo Mike do this one, do this one,








Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame
By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name
Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same
Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game
I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy
How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy?




cmon mike do this one, do this one.

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 08:55 PM

Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame
By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name
lol...
Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same
Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game
lmao
I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy
How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy?
lol...jigga is the shit

lol@it.

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 08:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Empire
still mad i voted aganist you sorry i aint a d.r and you suck :nono:

rofl...it was wack emp.

Logic The Goonie 11-29-04 08:56 PM

Vango please loosen your grip on my dick a little bit.

Vango 11-29-04 08:57 PM

Mike You Are Officially An E Gangsta In My Book.


Thanks For The Feedback, I Felt The Same About That Verse, Lol

Vango 11-29-04 08:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
Vango please loosen your grip on my dick a little bit.





YOUR FUNNY SOCRATES, I LIKE YOUR STYLE, LOL :thumbup:

50Cal. 11-29-04 08:59 PM

mike hawk=gay owned by exclusive lmfao what you know about rap?lmfao owned by exclusive omg lol

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 09:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Empire
mike hawk=gay owned by exclusive lmfao what you know about rap?lmfao owned by exclusive omg lol

If you actually think he won that, that is exactly why you drop like you did in that one.

50Cal. 11-29-04 09:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Hawk
If you actually think he won that, that is exactly why you drop like you did in that one.

he did and ill own you worse then that so sad you are :nono:

Logic The Goonie 11-29-04 09:01 PM

Now you're just confusing me.

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 09:01 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vango
Mike You Are Officially An E Gangsta In My Book.


Thanks For The Feedback, I Felt The Same About That Verse, Lol

Get off my dick.
I know I'm the coolest guy around.

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 09:03 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Empire
he did and ill own you worse then that so sad you are :nono:

LMAO...Tell me one punch that he dropped in that battle?

*sits and waits for empire to not say anything but 'he owned you and i will own you worse than he did*
Wack as fuck.

50Cal. 11-29-04 09:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Hawk
LMAO...Tell me one punch that he dropped in that battle?

*sits and waits for empire to not say anything but 'he owned you and i will own you worse than he did*
Wack as fuck.

*smacks mike hawk for thinking hes nice*

Pop Lotty 11-29-04 09:08 PM

Regular Empire for you.

Logic The Goonie 11-30-04 01:36 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Soc vs Feeble @ RB
This is easy folks cuz quite simply Feeb’s is a loser
I’ll just beat the hell outta Jew and make sure you do Nazi the future
Feeble you’re a joke son, wack ass of your time
You were on the road to success, but just pushed W.Rite past the finish line
And i dont care about ya skills, you cant play enough words
To stop the crowd from screaming “boo” like im battlin alicia keys and usher
Plus im crazy kid, kill ya whole whole in mere seconds
And drop ya block quick enough to get a high score on Tetris
Kid ya done, really all of your punches are missin
So now imma cross ya mind but its really more of a crucifiction


Yeah kids i'm whack.

Crossroads 11-30-04 01:56 AM

yeah you are..................................too bad.................
I'll rip you up


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