one acuity you lame idiot the battles were set on time they are set after 12pm you oppenant has till tonight to check in and i brought 12 people to the league stupid.monday nite as the new rules say try reading them cuz you will be dqed if you break them.as dramqueen said i run the league now for poetry and i need no help on it.a topical piece is a topical pice and not poetry when you state thing like red is the mother black is the father and the blue typing is me no then its not poetry when you do things like stop the pome and describe whats going on its a topical a story now and not a poetic piece anymore so yes its easy to tell a topical from a poem.dizzee poems are based on these elements in this order

1.emotion
2.imagery
3.creativity
4.vocab not big words but the usage of your words the symantics of them

structure is not important nor is flow unless it is a certain style of poetry such as tanka or some shit likewise to it.structure=can you read it not does it flow or lines line up evenly you fucking idiots all structure is is not making run on sentences with no periods and using commas.
lastly black teardrops is a good topic your wack if you cant write to it it can be used as anything from gang warfare to volcanic ash the topic is good because of the vast ways you can approach the topic thats what makes a good poetic topic.

one acuity you lame idiot the battles were set on time they are set after 12pm you oppenant has till tonight to check in and i brought 12 people to the league stupid.monday nite as the new rules say try reading them cuz you will be dqed if you break them.as dramqueen said i run the league now for poetry and i need no help on it.a topical piece is a topical pice and not poetry when you state thing like red is the mother black is the father and the blue typing is me no then its not poetry when you do things like stop the pome and describe whats going on its a topical a story now and not a poetic piece anymore so yes its easy to tell a topical from a poem.dizzee poems are based on these elements in this order

1.emotion
2.imagery
3.creativity
4.vocab not big words but the usage of your words the symantics of them

structure is not important nor is flow unless it is a certain style of poetry such as tanka or some shit likewise to it.structure=can you read it not does it flow or lines line up evenly you fucking idiots all structure is is not making run on sentences with no periods and using commas.
lastly black teardrops is a good topic your wack if you cant write to it it can be used as anything from gang warfare to volcanic ash the topic is good because of the vast ways you can approach the topic thats what makes a good poetic topic.

one acuity you lame idiot the battles were set on time they are set after 12pm you oppenant has till tonight to check in and i brought 12 people to the league stupid.monday nite as the new rules say try reading them cuz you will be dqed if you break them.as dramqueen said i run the league now for poetry and i need no help on it.a topical piece is a topical pice and not poetry when you state thing like red is the mother black is the father and the blue typing is me no then its not poetry when you do things like stop the pome and describe whats going on its a topical a story now and not a poetic piece anymore so yes its easy to tell a topical from a poem.dizzee poems are based on these elements in this order

1.emotion
2.imagery
3.creativity
4.vocab not big words but the usage of your words the symantics of them

structure is not important nor is flow unless it is a certain style of poetry such as tanka or some shit likewise to it.structure=can you read it not does it flow or lines line up evenly you fucking idiots all structure is is not making run on sentences with no periods and using commas.
lastly black teardrops is a good topic your wack if you cant write to it it can be used as anything from gang warfare to volcanic ash the topic is good because of the vast ways you can approach the topic thats what makes a good poetic topic.

^ yes, but almighty mod cali had to be an idiot because he didn't like her style

which was so gayishly ignorant.

damn man too much beefin goin on hurr can sum1 inform me how it all got started PLLLLLZZZZZ!!!!!!! lol

I know your referring to me about the "color" thing, I dont see nothing wrong with it. See what i mean? I can't drop and i WONT drop in the battle because of this stupid shit, if i can't use my "style" Then It's no use, Because I will get DQ.

since when do you CALI tell ppl how to vote on poetry your a faggot, thats restriction , voting should be about that person's response to the poem, no single fator should have more wweightin than the other.....

CALI u brang 12ppl to the league muhahahahah go and look at the amount of actuall battles are going to take place...most weeks DQ,Elementality and I setup similar umbers of battles but they all ho-show...its a fact....cnt wait to see the no. of open battles after 12pm 2night with 2 checked in battlers...it will be less than we had on average..so b EZ

^^OWNED :thumbup:

and DQ selling out Elementality and sayin CALI can run poetry was not cool :nono:

Wow. You are no holds barred the epitome of the stupidest fucking person I have ever witnessed in my whole life. ^^^^that is all that you think is poetry isn't it, I knew it...I kinda wondered because all you had to say in your feeds to other people's poems is: "Good imagery, nice vocab" Acting like you think you know what you're talking about...when we both know that you don't. Don't call me crazy, but dont you have to know a little bit about poetry to be a moderator for a poetry league? That would be like a Dodge ball ref refereeing a hockey game. < Im sorry Im sorry, thats probably too big of an analogy for your weak brain to understand. Let me put it this way, you have no fucking clue what that fuck you're talking about what so ever, and because of that post up there you have just made us all a little bit dubmer for it.

man cali....seriously, where does it say in poetry that you can't rhyme on sequential lines? and wtf does "stop and describe whats going on" man, seriously, how many times do i have to say, just because you think its not poetry, does not mean it aint'......get a fuckin' degree in english and maybe i'll respect your fucking opinion, until then, let people write the way the fucking want to write

poetry is self-expression you fat ass lard bitch, so let people express themselves however the fuck they want, with whatever words they want, whatever style they want.....jesus fuck kid

Degrees? Shit, first comes first... this kids gotta get through elementry first

^ pretty much, thats basically the point i was making....lol

And the truth has spoken.........................

you sound lame as fuck one emotion and image are the chief aspects of poetry should i rate structure or vocab above them?get the fuck outta here you sound like a fucking idiot elementality your garbage only way youll win this week is if tweety no shows your a herb seriously you can battle me here or on any board and i will k.o idiot and acuity dont even dare try to act like you know poetry when you were on aim and i was having to help you with acostic style which is the easiest style of fucking poetry and same to you tweety dont even try to front now.elementality your garbage drakel if you contibue to beef i will de mod you as well we only need two mods.and elementality if you contibue to clog the forum with ridicules beefing over nonsense i will ban you from the forum now everyone shut the fuck up.

listen idiot you can not stop in a poem and tell shit like that that makes the poem a story which makes it no longer a poem a story poem is like the pit and the pendulum not like a dean koontz novel.a farewell to tommorow a very famous book is writtten in a poetic form but is not poetry.your poem is to stay on lines of topic dont act dumb like you dont know what i mean this is nothing new i have dqed people for doing this before dont do it you wont be dqed just write all that extra shit is unneeded.

who's trying to write a book on RV in true poetic form?

i dont think anybody is.......don't be so uptight/assholic mod, maybe thats why nobody has repsect for you running this league

once again, poetry is self-expression, im getting sick and tired of saying that, after what post are you going to comprehend it?

^^ True that, there's no certain style in poetry...well there is but blah....I can write a story poem and send that shit to the damn Poetry competetion i want to see what kind of replies I'll get.


"This is not poetry"..........<<<I'll be waiting a answer like that

practise what you preach boy

if im not mistaken, you are also continuing to beef, so then i can get you de-modded, correct?

once again the point is being proven how you are self-bias....you're threatning to de-mod me on grounds for 'beefing', when you are taking part just as much in this little cherade as i am.

quit acting like you own RV and poetry. please

Bio Chemist from rb..............

Sakim Aerias: Yo Bio Chemist from rb? This is julius Caesar from rb, and i need some help.
Sakim Aerias: Do you know poetry...?
BigRapperSlash: yes
Sakim Aerias: Ok I'm going to give you a link to this battle against myself vs Cali aka Caliph on rb...and i want you to tell me is it a poem or no...Cause Cali is the mod of the poetry league now he said if i drop like that He'll DQ me, but Poetry dont have a style correct?...But hold on let me get the link.
BigRapperSlash: ok
Sakim Aerias: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=193312
Sakim Aerias: I appreciate your help, thanx man.
BigRapperSlash: your Cali...?
Sakim Aerias: No. I'm Tweety.
BigRapperSlash: ok
BigRapperSlash: My eyes hurt from that freaking color...anyways yes it's a poem
Sakim Aerias: Thanx...........I appreciate it.
BigRapperSlash: would be considered a poem by most
BigRapperSlash: yeah no doubt
Sakim Aerias: So is it really necessary if CALI says "It's not poetry" cause that's false right?
BigRapperSlash: yeah it's false
BigRapperSlash: he's an idiot
BigRapperSlash: it's obvious
Sakim Aerias: Thanx...He acts like he invented Poetry....
BigRapperSlash: erklchf lmao
BigRapperSlash: <<< ss Sacred Scriptues Champ
BigRapperSlash: so yeah I rule over him lol
Sakim Aerias: But dawg thanx....Yeah I know your a ss sacred scriptures champ.........We should battle....:-D
BigRapperSlash: ;-)ANYTIME
Sakim Aerias: Lol alright.......Pratice while you still have time...J.P
BigRapperSlash: Nah ...too tired lol
Sakim Aerias: Lol alright peace bruh and thanx for the help once again.
BigRapperSlash: ight peace

WORD! :shoot:............O yeah I'm getting "Bounce" AkA Acts like poetry is his own dick......WORD....response soon.

*Ahem*

Mindless from rb (Dope ass poet)

Sakim Aerias: MindLess from rb?.....This is Julius Caesar And i need your help, a opinion mostly would you please help me for a quick second?
MindlessScripts: sure, whats up
Sakim Aerias: Alright you know "CALIPH" from rb right?...Well he's running this Poetry league on rv...and I battled him and i won. But he told me if i drop like that again he'll DQ me cause it's not poetry more like a topical verse without rhymes, but it's poetry...I would like a yes or no answer from you if its poetry or not......K?
MindlessScripts: ok
Sakim Aerias: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=193312

My name is "Tweety"
MindlessScripts: yea ofcourse thats poetry.
Sakim Aerias: THanx man, Cali talking about that's not poetry more like a topical verse without rhymes..He said if i do that again He'll DQ me wtf?.....But anyway He acts like he invented poetry...
Sakim Aerias: Thanx for the help man i really apprecaite it.
MindlessScripts: lol, yea he doesnt have the authority to say what is and isnt poetry. it doesnt have to rhyme. yours read more like a short story, still poetry though

:shoot:

BigRapperSlash<<<is the topical champ and lost first round in poetry


theegodmc<<<fresh prince is the champ of intraciate emotions rbs poetry league and hes the mod

and mindless said it read like a short story hence not poetry

DId you not see what mindless said "it's still a poem"..................Get your eyes check.

^ S'up homie?

/Beef is dope..specially hamburgers..

Cali, all I can say is that you've been owned in every single arguement in this for the past 6 days, > Tweety gets poetry vets from rb to show you that his shits legit because your so fucking ignorant you think you've defined poetry into 4 categories!!! LOL. Wow your phycho-stupid. I bet that even if he got shakespear himself up in this bitch you'd still stick to your guns. You know every word everyone has spoken against you is all truth too because you can't handle it... your trying to minimize the issues but were keeping it large. Telling drakel that if he keeps speaking his mind and standing up for whats right that you'll demodd him just like you demodded me because I called you on your shit so you just played it like a child. Fact: You act like a child and talk like a baby. Fact: The only reason that you got mod position back is because you got your dick so far in strobes ear he can't hear the truth over your phycho-babble bullshit. Ego-Trip isn't the right word but its the first word that comes to mind.
see: Self-Admiration
see: Vainglory

He should be de-modded if everyone wants that. Seriously CALI your wack at poetry.

^^alaiases are gay as are you.and everyone dont want it only 3 people want it and them three poeple are nobodys so who cares.

i wanna sign up for topicall :( n i cant when can i sign up

^-^-^-^-^ > AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHA LMFAO> ok then if this is true then how can this be true > http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194233 ??

Lol, if im a nobody to you... than why is it that you've made a thread asking people who the better poet is! hahhahahahaahha........... lol, [SARCASM]that makes a lot of sense[/SARCASM] Seriously the funniest shit i've seen all month. But I think that the punch to this joke called "cali" is that if you scroll down to the bottom of the thread you'll see that red bull put that im better. Red bull told me that like not even a minute after he posted his reply to this doosh bags binale minusha vote pole that cali messaged him on AIM saying: "As if you said that Element is a better poet than me. I'm not going to vote for you for King of Rapverse anymore." < That shit is straight up and down jaw dropping, this guy is truely "The" dildo slinging dick rider of the month. He went on bragging: " hahah, now that I'm mod again, gonna throw him up against the best of the best" "Because he's garbage and I'll show him that" <ahahahahah, o wow. Isnt it great how he loves to try and cut people down instead of trying to build them up. Ok cali, you give me the Gods and leave yourself the herbs > It still wont matter cause the only way you're gonna win is if you make an alias and battle yourself > but to be honest with you, I still don't think you'd win cause your shit is stinky > and thats word is bond.

That fool Trooper didn't even check into our battle..

What a silly bitch..

i never told red bull that ever i cant vote in korv idiot damn your dumb as hell
"As if you said that Element is a better poet than me. I'm not going to vote for you for King of Rapverse anymore."
^^that sounds nothing like i talk nor looks nothing like i type nice try though homo slut.

I meant Vet of the month > not KORV..... Theres no difference in it though cause you're still neive that you're terrible at modding/ trying to write poetry.

^^wtf is you talking bout i never voted red bull vet of the month ever idiot i voted spektikul you dumb idiot

LMAO, you really cant read ca you? Im not going to explain myself anymore to an illiterrate fool like you. Learn how to read first then try and twist things. Everyone else sees through you but yourself.

^^stop talking and accept the battle pussy

I love how if I win I have to leave Rv and you dont, why not up the stakes on your part too? Its only fair that if you loose you should have to leave rv aswell.... Because its not that big of a pot for me, I only end up where I started. Besides.... you talk more shit than anyone on this site, so if everything that you say is true, than you should have no problem with putting this on the line just as I am doing.

note of Elementality: beware of dickriders.

Not to mention all his aliases. I.e. > http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2204889 ... guy voted for himself lol.... Its funny also that he hasn't checked in yet either, has 2 days to drop this shit, and I've been told from an anonomous soul that he has prewritten his verse from a battle that he was going to have with this person.

^actaully no and your sooooooooooooooooooo good you should be able to beat me no matter what and no homo im gonna lose my mod spot you get banned fair is fair my account has over 80 wins and almost 9300 posts you have 290 posts so no dickface i aint putting my account aganist yours cuz your a herb period accept bitch and stop ducking homo

Lol, I said it before and I said it again. I accepted the battle,http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=194534 Look before you ask ... you are the one who hasnt accepted ful. all I know is that your a pussy because you know forsure that your better then me... so how is there a gamble at all then? I think its only fair that I get to call atleast one of the stakes... I think that if you should loose, you have to change your Cali name to tiffany also. What do yea say tiffany ?

^not gonna happen im not gonna lose and your dumb ass already accepted so rules apply to you if you want them or not too bad