yo, come on dawg fucking with me, wont get ur life far
ur threats make me laugh, ull end up jus like ur fucking avatar
ur name is exactly wat ill put in ur mouth, jus for ur whack ass style
lauch at u and blow ur Motherfucking Mind for Miles(M.M.M.=crew)

....
6 LINE MINIMUM.
First warning
~YSD@~

a 6 line minimum,and ya ass put 4,premature,n ya tryna spank-it....?
how manage to make a line at all beyond(be-on) me like a blanket
and is it just me?or did you just tell him ya wanna put ya steal in him..?
but he don't like losers,ya hidin ya record,strictly cause ya neva feel a win
that shit about his crew ain't clever,that is lame and stupuid(stoupe-it)
like ya mixing up the boards and shit over canibus,
.................................................. ..so here;s so shit
.................................................. .............................take it and scoop it.


OWNED

wow that was wack,
.
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there werent any punches yo, but at least he tries,
damn you still aint gettin nothin, even if i said..."hey P-rize"
dude, trini...faggot, theres no point in you posting,
alias's are dumb, well especially when its you hoasting,
ill say it again, i think it deserves a second pressence,
dumbass..cuz i'll murder change ,then easily press-cents,

sayin that dudes whack all because he said shit that's better than you
n fuck ya hatin on pressence for?ya envy(end V) like ya can't reach W
ur raps are like a movie to me DAZ
......................................but it keeps on re-doing take one
alias are only dumb to you,becuase you dun know how to make one
ya know ya diggin his name like a pirate to treasure so bad,that it's hurtin
cause only stage pressence/presents you have.
.............................................is when ya moms giftwraps the curtain

OWNED...haha...i owned daz..nahananah...it feels good too.and you know it daz.you gon respond..but you sayin.."DAMN...this dude that everyone hates got skills!"

ya overall that shit was pretty generic n stretched
try not stickin up for your alias's, its lame..... :spit:

^^^yeah....i was hopin you'd at least leave some feedback in one of my verses or battles

And yeah...I know my set-ups sopposed to relate to punch...but c'mon..i keyed.

and I never heard the presence/presents one before

thx for feedback

Ill cut out your vocal chords so i can cease your speech
labelling you Left Eye the only way you can rap on Creep
Like lucky charms im keeping this rap short and sweet
You maybe be 3-0 but face me and you will taste defeat

in this cypher you'll lose ya life or never walk away
spiting toung twistas and beat boxing just to stall and play
it like this you want some beef im never far away
this mother fucker thinks he and emcee but i must confess
ill drop lyrical pain when you down and in distresse
show murcy when it come to wack kids like you
why would i do that when i owe shit to you

You like to kick the fake knowledge your missing details
Me and you both similar you see we both females
Except im a volatile woman please dont try and push me
Where as big dangerous you are just one big pussy

this bitch describes her small tight pussy
but last time i was inside...it was all big n bushy
in the hindsight ...yea she was volatile...
her pussy used to burn listenin to my freestyle
im tellin ya this bitch is real sick
used chilli when she could find a dick

Pakistan,hah,I'm indian,from T&T,but you disgrace
you humilate(hue-mediate)like rainbow color is middle of ya face
1st post and it happens to be in the cypher,with ya hands up ya ass
ANd if I'm correct,Pakistan lost mad wars to others in the past
Plus they food eats like shit with a little piss mixed in
For real,to even make it,it should be considered a sin

i see a black dead bitch in a trashcan....lookin down on pakistan
this motherfuker doesnt have a place to hide..
found on the roadside....product of anonymous joyride
went to america...but nationality denied by the white...
this bastard pussy dissin me usin racist shit
jealous of me coz im completely legit.....


no more racism i insist....or this thing will turn too ugly

Man can you believe a terrorist trying to rap!?,
Nigga just stick to ya jihad and suicide attacks,
Wearing tattered sandals in the mountains screaming allah,
On ya days off, Trying to be gangsta think ya Dre and Snoop in some 6-3 impala,
And just give is up Bin Laden cuz he gonna be found,
Or the U.S. gonna bomb Pakistan to the ground,
Bin Laden he scared and got nowhere to hide,
All these al qaeda bitches getting ready to ride,
Osama's shrunken dick, Makes me sick,
How can a stupid muthafucka jump on terrorist shit,
You stupid muthafuckas are all terrorists,
Getting in the way of the U.S. interests,
Just back up nigga, And get back to ya training,
You kill so many innocent people,
God cries, When he cries it's raining,

YOur rhymes r stretched,sorta like Span-dex!
Talkinbout terrorist rappin?...when ur all in tah Man-sex.(Osama's shrunken dick, Makes me sick,)
Use ur hands next-time..an try ta drop ur best-line
Instead of that over sex'd-Rhyme that only "the Q" will be impress'd by!
Hah!
YOu aint even worth.........I mean a good splatter(spit!) in ur place!
Shame on your mamma for givin birth,shouldve shot baby batter in her face!

you completely missed the topic tryna -diss the boy before you-
dots n slashes stutterin like a -pistol pointed toward you-
i cant follow disrespect rules im sorry im too brutal
probly cuz you screwed up gotta be too frugal
when u use your rhymes on this internet shit
as if anyone big gives a shit if you can spit
i think its funny actually whoevers comin after me
probly isnt even gonna be half the monster they have to be
steel stutterin n sputterin, go hand em an inhaler
the only -rv- they -beatin me- in is a -handjob in a trailer-

WOW,another newb,seeing you in cypher is like no hornet in charelut
calll yaself the pistol but only thing ya bust is ya pops nut
why ya postin all those lines in cypher,no body reads em
i don't think I would if I desperately need to feed of em
Ya suck,the only thing probably good about ur verse,is the coast
Right at the side,where it labels you newb, "THIS IS MY FIRST POST!"

u couldnt prove ur skill with the highest amount of hope,
ur face peels like paint bein washed with soap,
aitz is here and im rippin ur soul,
aitz smells fear and im killin this mole.
u wanna grip a mic like a kids wish list,
i'll find u in the middle of the night, and make u eat a fist bitch


~p'z

this hoe woulda been hot but its lack of baking
you'll never get a clap cos u SUCK & ur verse is flo breakin
stick ur shit to the 1-1-1 cos u'll never exceed ur RV lim-it
with 9 strokes proovin ur wack u still dont wanna admit-it?
its like u goin thru Immune V conflict dats y u rap like u bit from "GAYZ"
no wonder u couldnt be more creative than to call urself "AITZ"*
the next time u wanna entertain just make it ezier n press "SPACE"
cos with this lyricall state u've gained,son u just ur fams big "DISGRACE"

you whack,thinking Capitalizing the last words make-you-dope
i want you gone too,so here baby girl,go-head,take-the-rope
and hang urself in the house,so you hanging down like a chandelier
i know this verse defines you completley,as things are to appear
why you hating on the other guy for?,cause ya can't get through his pants?
LAscia stare?Well,problem is,when you there,nobody gives you a glane

Pressence, Light Weight, Hell nah fuck that,
Every one can feel ya presence cuz ya too damn fat,
Lil wack ass rhymes, Got no muthafucking flow,
Million Hyphines in ya lines,...... Lil fucking HO!,
That type a shit don't make you muthafucking dope,
So don't hate Yvonne cuz her style is better,
If she ever put a record out... make more cheddar,
1 minute rhymes, Sucks!, But it's still better,
Than that stupid shit ya wrote

this guys flows shaky.... like he's a bar jerker
the only good thing i know is he's gotta be a hard worker
and thats not racist lets face it he's tasteless
got him sweating like poker playaz wit million dollar raises
he's aces in a game where the ace is the lowest
THATS FUCKED UP! is the only way to explain how his flow is
i hope he notes this and knows to rap while im chucklin
better come on back like dog style fuckin

good thing this is only text,cause you'd put us all to sleep
you know he's a hard worker cause you both under the sheets
your rhmes were whack,seems you dropped it when touchin ya bells
talking about racism and poker bitch?,well lemme pass you some shells
only time i can see you landing with some applause is when ya say bye
and that last bar,hmm,dog style?
.....................................don't tell us about your fantasies with mexican guy!

Natural!...Yeah maybe like a Jheru Curl on Fat Joe.
Killa?...(who you foolin!)......Yeah,Kill'n my ears wit yer wack flow.
Your skill on tha real is still at bit borin....
Even if you had a grill you still couldnt hit hard like George Foreman!
:huh:
Yep..I can spit a wack line an still merk this clown.
An own U like house's on tha sub-burb'n side of ah town!

:thumbup:

Who's really rating this shit anyways?... :huh:

Your last statment is right who here is rating your shit
Like Mr Fifty Cent all you do is spend time faking your hits
Claiming the things you have do now youve done me wrong
From Memphis Tennessee Shouldnt you do country songs?
Getting owned by you are you kidding you must be stoned
Thats like saying that Lindsay lohans muscley and toned

Lockdown?

You must be new ta tha game..against me!..you pale in comparison.
Whatcha tryin ta prove wit that name?...That Jail is embarrasin?
That Bitches get raped with duck tape'd broom sticks...
An Have ur cunt ripped open......Leavin ur womb split?
Or that being in cells could leave you with very nasty scars..
You aint a classy broad..."lockdown"prolly meant"Jail Food"..cuz of ur Trashy bars!

^^^okay... :huh:

lol tight cold...

no matter how hot he comes he still bring cold
he wishes to be like the bove cos he just aint bold
i dont really need to paint a picture of ya cos its done
you cant entertain you shootin like an aimless gun
bitches like u eat cheap rap from fools like lil'kim
a pin got ur punch busted d fuck u do with dat unda ur chin?
i forbid waistin words on a wacko i'd better keep my knees nodding
and as i re-read ya shit i just keep sayin "over my dead body"

...ahh fuck

Keep ur knees noddin?....hah!..."Give Head?"
All I can say is"Please keep Bobbin...Stop!..I've Been mislead!"
Your mouth is filthy...an you got sores on ur lip!
Seen ur pics tho'...I think this board gonna flip!

^^^Hah!....
Im juss trippin right now...But give me a moment!
I murder lil girls,trample over an woman...Leave quick,Make sense.............WONT it!


Hah!

Juss havin a lil Fun Dear!

but you can "Get Own'd!!"

Talk about head this guys a fukin pro
no dick in ya pants? he's stoppin ya at tha do'(door)
this dude love tha dick, but eat pussy he jus might
and im sure he's half settle for a herephadite
from memphis, step in my city get ya as beat fa real
it a give u a chance 2 taste my cold steel

*corrections*

Talk about head this guys a fukin pro
no dick in ya pants? he's stoppin ya at tha do'(door)
this dude loves tha dick, but eat pussy he jus might
and im sure he's half settle for a hermephadite
from memphis, step in my city get ya as beat fa real
it'll give u a chance 2 taste MY cold steel

You Cant "B" serious Folk....

Your city?....Youngin get ur mouth blazed up 4miss-reppin!
Cuz from this direction..all I see is you gettin Diss-sect'd!(Dissected!)
You false in tha streetz...You thought off of me...You could grind?
Look at his pic Ery'body...dont he look like J.J. evans offah GoodTimes!
Talkin bout gay...juss read how he diss me!
jus look close ta what he say...Decode it...You can see he's ah Sissy.

Get Own'd!

This dude From memphis thinkin he GD FOLK
Dawg u false flaggin and that shyt aint a joke
Get ya faggot ass beat to u bloody fukin red
Got ya niggaz so spooked they 2 scared 2 call tha feds
Sissy? nobody says that dumb shit these days
U can tell this dudes from memphis cuz he gets no play

i see more enticeing bullshit from watching Kritie alley in a thong
n false flaging?wat you making your own lame terms as you go along?
why is it in both lines in that 2nd bar,you had to start it with "get ya?'
could it be a sign that your desiring Coldsteel to get with ya?
talking about feds,faggots,and the nigga word,man you insane
And don't hate on memphis bitch,speccially when ya got hr. in ya name

Sorry dawg i aint gay CS aint got shyt ta git wit
You a fukin wangsta so i see y u dont understand shit
dude there iz a between difference between get ya and got ya
you jus mad cuz when u crew saw u wasnt shit they shot ya
this dude, sells dirty weed so we know he's know drug deala
But tha smokes gon and we see im tha real natural killa

Ya think a virgin like cold steel..has an image for being so real
Spends his hobby molesting dolls..turn around, get sold deals?
That's a joke..like your quotes of having these others owned
Disarm ya at point blank range..before blasting another hole
Ya most average of raps..not dope..but they packaged in sacks
Trap scandalous cats..to burn em faster than his habit for crack
Actin hard til I crack ya bars..like codes..now the tears fly foreigners
The streets know ya, all right..as a sucker at nearby corners

You aint even close With that!.... please stop an chill!
Before I Unlock tha steel...On "X"...An str8 pop this Pill!
Your name is like ur bars....Illegal use of wastin trash.
I got yo addict'd ta my dope lines...Without tastin tha glass.
Dont let me start erasin his past..an bring an "L" ta his present.
"Get Own'd" is tha catch phrase...But Cold dont pimp on peasants!


Get Own'd....Really! :thumbup:

Shatter ya glass jaw..ya future's made of stupid styles reppin
Only thing you'll know about law, junior..is juvenile detention
Once I lock these bars..ya spots depart from being so high now
Common sense the hardest rapper we'll see from shy town
These 45ths slim ya frame.. like cameras in panoramic tests
Why go & battle this faggot..lookin like an anorexic Ness
Another 50 cent groupie..I've patiently waited for massacres
Ya fake 'Free Pimp C' hat..shows you the gayest of amateurs

Exchange blow for blow...head to head...toe to toe//
Law Jr.'s raps are WACK!...X-tortion is so-so//
So i won't hate on M.C.'s labeled so-so, but Law Jr.'s under arrest and i'm the po-po//
If i rolled up on you i'd cock the 4.4.//
dump ya body out the back of Duece Low low//
ya mom's ugly like a 5 dolla ho named co-co//
and ya rhymes are cheaper then 25 cent HO-HO//
If you saw me ridin...bumpin in my six-fo//
my ambitions and acusations are strictly to get mo//
if you saw ridin in hoop-D...ooooh weee!//
if you take offence to this bitch well fuck you...SEW ME!!!!!!//

Im bout' to flow yes flow about this kid o no o no
i feel like an ass already say-in shit twice in a row..
at least ur name is "young" its under-stood that kids repeat but i'd delete that lame post hung.. brother, ya should! keep that discreet
may-be its beef but i believe ive ready got that whack verse beat...
my back hurts for these bas-stards who walk backwards to vurse me.
if you got somethin sweet bust a free n start drivin lessons
push the button phree and go leave me a private message

Beat what's left outta this amateur..until there's complete death
You need help..stuck inside collision courses..with no seatbelts
Left mangled & torn..smoke suffocates like its stranglin cords
Not even a compass or pencil..could help your angles to form
So when ya swarm garbage man..your flows disposed regardless
Expose ya nosebone..when it's known..ya act bad from 3 charges
Ya mouth cause reasons why I align pistol whippin..so push me
Jaywalking..Trespassing lines..and most of all..Soliciting Pussy

my name may state x but it sure dont work on this pussy
your flows are cummin slo-mo now i know y u got that avy
shit is played but its better than bein a ho-mo on R-V
your verse wouldnt catch applauses even if i put it on R-E
he scared to go out and get a life cos its like emotional torture
you vocal chord aint hot at 11..so y try to be a texual pleasure
the only way yould be a break through is if you walked out of the cypher
cos u smooshing your keyboard a lil 2 much..this is a forum not a 4kin cyber