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Daz 12-24-03 07:01 PM

do u honestly think u could get away with those wack lines?/
im a slow zero that equals ur track time/
pimp and i got a place for hoes/
im a turtle?dont u know how that story goes?/
boy..respect ur elders ur being rude to me/
and b4 u battle dont u think u should hit puberty?/
the winner saved u need clinic aid/
ur the iceman so i put u in my lemonade/

nutcase 12-25-03 01:13 AM

....as the world turns...ur lyrics are gettin gayer/
dazaster couldnt stab a bastard to death if he was a slayer/
betrayer of being hederosexual wana be player to---fag/
when im done spittin my layer of lyrics wipe urself off with a rag/
u should be used to that chokin n gaggin to the temptations,
feelin the sensations of throbbin in ur ass/
n ur manly masterbations leading to ejaculations in the past/

Tolerant Level 12-25-03 01:36 AM

Nutcase u think u have the ~illest Ryhmes~ but i turn the table and smack or verse to a ~Shitest Lines~ i shouldve pinned u against the wall and ~Fisted u with Knives~//
man all u think about is ryhmeing about ~Homosexual Tensions~ maybe u a fag but u hide it behind u ~Hobo Sexual Sensations~ //
when i get u in my sight im gonna ~Break ur jaw~ and wire it up and ~break it more//

this doesnt meet the line requirement. -feeble

Daz 12-25-03 08:01 AM

ur both wack..i have zero tolerance for nutcases/
damn right i got zero tolerance for butt rapists/
lyrical ability? its over your head for sure/
raped in jail?nah gave it up and still wantin' more/
nutcase is a biter..its shows and his sig/
he also bites other things...aka dick/
he got his screenname after he got butt raped/
sucked dick,and got pappyslapped sued and called it a nutcase/
ur flows invisible and we can all see behind it/
tolerance got corrected and edited by feebleminded/
i smoke herbs wrap 'em twice and light/
i'd get more of a challenge if challenged a blind man to a fight/

Harlem's Finest 12-25-03 01:37 PM

This fools simply a white 'Darren' with artificial dreads
Four bars with sex references... try originality instead
Avy depicts you ain't real, just an average computer fake
Makes sense tho -- Daz really is a fan of 'solid snake'
No structure or flow and still you think you hit raw
Kid... Every line you drop's been played 10 times before

IceMan187 12-25-03 02:39 PM

yo you say your harlems finest but your a cat from UK
fuckin wit me youll get chewed like ecstacy
dogg your a fuckin joke im slayin you today
comin at dazasta when your flows are garbage
cops will find you in a tree just like the fuckin partridge
cus i come equipped wit a m4 and an extra cartridge
way better than half these cats n thats b4 i even started
cats say i spit better than you and all i did was farted
they call me the iceman because im black hearted
but you, you have no heart at all
youd have to get to the top of the empire state building three times just to stand tall
but im climbing up six cus fuckin wit me your gonna fall
cus cant nobody fuck wit me noone not even you at all,
cus once you take rap serious gmme a call
your like a B-Rabbits delta ~ all you do is stall

Straight Ace 12-25-03 06:31 PM

Wordplay is a form of interpretation which u clearly miss..
Kid check'd his watch when i said his shit was 'eighty-six'.
Pushin' weight in form of benchpressin' ya pine drape..
N after this ur physical condition'll be the same as ur mindstate
_____Flat dead..ur communication strikes back to this to..
Cause ur minds more 'blank' then your original skin hue..
Prodigy,kid is hardly genius, i'd reconsider if he made sense..
He's flow was drippin' cause he held mics with sweaty hands..
Transfer this 'case' to the Wackness Emergency Centre..quick.
I'd send u my regards, but dunno ur name so ill just call u 'Dick'..

ThaYOcutee 12-25-03 08:40 PM

Straight Ace how many times have u ben back ?
Can't u understand that all ur rhmyes were whack ?
Well I'm here now jus 2 let u no
Now go get a cock do ur best and blow
Lemme ask u 1 thing, Are u 4 real ?
Those rhymes couldnt even get u a Kidz Bop deal
So wats up wit u are u n need of a new boo
1 to take over all the masturbatin u do
OK next person I guess im done
Go head and have urself a lil fun

Straight Ace 12-25-03 10:05 PM

a IQ equal to her record, n less then a AIM bot..
Call this ur 'lifeline' cause it ends with this Dot .
^those lines u dont even get ur ....'New to RB'..
Min.of 6 lines cause of you they may set it to 3..
My registration date, makes no difference..no..
Cause w/e my rep can -unlike- ur chest grow..
Quick, fast, speedy, hastey..this is a key cyph..
I've eaten u, ur 'nuthin' where's my food wife..

Ambitious 12-26-03 05:20 AM

straight ace, your verse is a good way to make waste
Readin' your lines i couldn't even keep'a straight face
You call that dissin? looked like you were seekin emission
peekin at bitches on Rb?.....damn this kid's freakin witless
Speekin of Christmas, Put a set of balls on your recent wish list
Cuz Ace Your punchelines might as well be sleepin wit da fishes
Such a lack of action, slice up nothin your skill meets the fraction
Back trackin, slackin, twice somethin you fill beats I'm matchin

DªÖ 12-26-03 05:50 AM

This cable guy is irritating, ima bout strip him of his skin
Throw him against a Fire Truck so he can blend in
Trouble is even then he's white to the core so he easily seen
Coupled up with a fat belly and hairy ass he grabin at his team
The masses arnt all Gayball so this sig is all a dream
he black and white a parental advisory to save us from the obscene

Ambitious 12-26-03 06:29 PM

^ You got beat by condom king.....yer name was insert
It's No surprise hes bitch his avy and sig wage in skirts
Your rhymes like un-arranged blurts, contained pain hurts
U Complain fame squirts, you take cum shots in eyes for work
I didnt wanna address your personal problems in public
But your the one who whips out your pussy and rubs it
Let me make your Day Yo, fuck you like you were a paid ho
Dao, the retarded homo on Rap Battles we named Gay~Slow

Straight Ace 12-26-03 06:55 PM

Bashin' DªÖ with gay lines..his avy/sig is hetero..
Your lines are simply played n old, not just retro..
Blue-red-black sig looks like a foreign country flag..
Ur ' one step behind ' like online games with lag..
I've heared all u said "twice..twice twice" ..eight!..
Times, his g/f steppin to the plate, only way he's..
.. pushin weight

DªÖ 12-26-03 11:07 PM

to tech.
O no he can search on a forum, his intelligence is 2 now..
Lost in thought cuz its Unfamiliar territory to beat DaO..
He Said he Tripped and Fell on his Dads Dick On Accident..
But the Gayness Seen throu, His Fake Disses Are Spent..
I Rep Chicks in My Sig n Avy Cuz im just not Gangsta Sitten..
This Net Thug Only Gun Holdin Was Quick lik Gun Powder To Get his Spit Bitten...

ThaYOcutee 12-27-03 01:22 AM

Str8 Ace

Do u think u seriously think u gotta rep
I get more respect wen i make 1 step
I make more then six lines cuz i got better ryhmes n my head
I got the amount of cum spots that lay on ya bed
I got bigger boobs then tha size of ur balls
they only tha size of paint bubbles on my wall
U dont even ryhme
look like u sayin tha same thing alll tha time
Now i have sum advice 4 u 2 do
go have a private party and make sure DAO is wit u
Go b 2 lonely boys that got no girls
Take a look nside ur lil gay porn world
Afta yall done make sure 2 kiss
DAO make sure 2 read this
He does u and u do him
Aint that how it always begins
OK now something back
I already no if its from Str8 Ace its gonna b whack

DªÖ 12-27-03 02:43 AM

this little whore likes to take two dicks at once
Me and Ace just Put Her in Her place in the mouth
Im Twistin This Bitch Like My Hot Chocolate
I Found Neeko at the back of the bus takin it Straight
in every hole every crevice she sound she made
was muffled on my balls that she stuck to like tape.

sjc2199 12-27-03 06:58 PM

shut ya mouth, DAO ya profile claims u hotter than the south
n u got the mark of the beast, but everythings weak wha u rap about
u need to seek out another hobby, cuz brovah u sloppy
ur lines r re-run'd like Cosby, n probably cut-paste n copy'd
i'll cut ya face till blood splatters on ya white Tee/ i can tell u already don like me/ cuz tha boy sharp like machettis eatin' emcees like mikee/ n i might be chillin' wit ya chic gettin fish neck'd from a pices/

ThaYOcutee 12-27-03 07:21 PM

DAO take tha cock out ya mouth
Tha only way ud b hot if u let that heat out
Did u notice u didnt even rhyme
Its ok take a break come back wen u make up sum real lines
Did i make i mad sad or unhappy
U like tha homeless dog every1 call Lappy
U drool wen u c fresh meat
So guess u drool wen u take out ya 1 inch 2 beat
If i took 2 cocks sure as hell wouldnt b urs
Its already ben sucked by them payed hoers
Tha only way u could eva get laid
Is if a real ugly hoe is desperate to get paid
U have no balls 4 me to get stuck to
Plus i dont wanna take place of Str8 Ace who fucks u
Ur rite bout thing, there is death n ur thread
Cuz every rhyme u wrote came up dead
U twist me like hot chocolate?
Then i throw u out like lint in my pocket
U a reallly funny guy jus thought u should no
And one more thing, I aint ya motha so dont call me a hoe

shizz 12-27-03 07:55 PM

dont take this shit personally ,as i would say
if all the hard niggas from yonkers, stay in your place
i wouldn't give you props by saying bitch or hoe
or switch my flow ima take it easy on ya just to know
your penis rymes ,stinks like an old bag of indo
you lay on your back so much, you should have a drive through window

Verbatim 12-28-03 02:24 AM

this goes to shizz

"quit sleeping on my fuckin battle" (your signature)
no one wants to read it, you got no talent
no luck? using the same rhyme over and over
you'd still suck, even if i gave you a 4 leaf clover
you won't win your battle anyway, look at your rhyme
no vocab or punches, your wasting your damn time
ain't gonn get no where in life, so stay in texas
maybe someday, you'll learn what sex is
you ain't the shizz, more like a piece of shit
stop rappin! just please fuckin quit

Lil' Pac 12-28-03 10:40 AM

But please vote, Im his oppnent
And it seems like Im always spittin' straight fire, dont it?
Half possesed? Yeah by tha Suger Plumb Fairy's

Don't you ever post crap like this in the cypher forum again. Shit like this will get you banned! Keep the cypher forum dope or get the fuck out!
~Bounce~

shizz 12-28-03 10:58 AM

i dont need punch lines or a vocab for you
this dude krem is a canadian rapper(sucks ass for you)
you bout as real as the bear advertising "labat blue"
ill bash you with a hockey stick, till your ass is through
i tried quitting rap, your mother wouldnt let me
and for my son to mouth off , ifs starting to upset me


what are you doing@pac?

Verbatim 12-28-03 12:54 PM

to shizz again

so what if i'm canadian i'm still better then you
ask anyone on this site, and they'll say it's true
dissing my mother, wow dawg now that really hurts
well i didn't learn to rhyme from you, your worse
but that's ok, keep thinking that your better
your really whack, do i need to send you a letter?
to get this through your little skull
your rhymes suck! and your really dull
you can't even get past the minimum of 6 lines
i'll make up a contract, for you to sign and resign
cause no one wants to read your gay ass shit
so leave now...before i truly diss you bitch!

Tolerant Level 12-28-03 01:16 PM

man u maybe canadian but u still ~whak in Ryhmes~ u couldnt tell time cause u wack so ~fact the times~//
but as u try and to ~Minipulated terror~ i come with dramatic force and kill ur brain cells and ~Decapitated ya~//
as im the surealbal commin to ~Staple ur Bladder~ and with force i get ur dreams in my hands and crush then u like the ~maple leaf Matter~//
if u wanna tempt me..tempt me but ~prepare to Cry~ cause u love life will be spared to wat i ~Compare when u Die~//

Harlem's Finest 12-28-03 01:30 PM

Krem, Simply put your styles basic... I'll cane it spittin phlegm
Possessed? Lmao... when ya sleepin kid - R.E.M
'Write a letter?' A replica of TL above... another herb
I'll confuse both of these fools with just a four letter - Verb
Its clear Isolated Orphans compile emcee murder statistics
Perfect sig similie there... shame its pathetically unrealistic

sjc2199 12-28-03 01:45 PM

how can u be harlems finest when u the worst
to ever spit a verse/comin' off soundin' like fred dirst
ya styles headin' for a hearse/cuz it's already in dirt/
i should compliment ya moms for raisin u,cuz that shit must be hard work/
to have her first born son walkin' round sportin' a purse
lookin' like an anerxic A.J. mix'd wit free in a terry cloth shirt

Mc_Russie 12-28-03 02:30 PM

lemmie take out this bitch.

half of that shit didn't even make sence,
good job we're not in court cos u aint got a defence,

sjc21...bla bla bla.
shit, i can tell u come from amerika

don't ever think of trying to go li-git, u can't spit, to save shit,
might aswell drop the mic and quit,

he doesn't even say where he's from, proberly 2 scared to say,
if his mates saw his rhymes, they'd smack him up straight away.

Shut the fuck up dawg, take a seat,
have a treat and next time, try rapping to the beat.


laterz

Dev 12-28-03 03:20 PM

who you tryin to fool with look how ya structured ya words
its obserd! trying to tell others about what you havent yet learned!
then look at ya vocabulary, its elementary to say the least
ya couldnt make a 'feast' with a chef and all the food you could eat!
so go home Mc_Russie... ya loser, lyrical fucking fag!
step it up a gear its clear ya no where near the skillz ya think ya have!

RapStar12 12-28-03 05:55 PM

Yea u don't need publicty, if you never want it//
I could easily take you, and I'm talkin' one hit//
I wouldn't talk about MC_Russie vocab, ferreal//
If my words were food, this would be your last meal//(KiLLiN' You)
Oops, did I take your fuckin' gay 'food' concept~yo//
You probably recycle like ya name was "just won't~let~go"//
I figure all the shit you say is a lie, cuz you talk shit//
You think "..Women Love Me.."? yea, what she sip?//
Dude, the girls you ride must be named "roller coaster"//
7-3 with 846 posts, what you also a free poster?//
IIte I'm just gonna leave this battle like a vampire wit thurst//
Except for you suck, and you get the "can't rhyme" curse//
You better run now, my rhymes, I am about to dispurse//
P.S. I can drop you faster then I drop a one bar verse//

Dev 12-28-03 08:09 PM

ive got a noob on my case, saying i freepost alot
i jus prefer open, to battleing 'fags' like you think your not
rapstar 12 what a name, matches ya lyrical ability
at 12 years old i could write better than your dis at me!
go home little boy, mommas calling its time for ya bed
leave rb to the big men, who can play without (explaining what they said)........lol

Knock Out Punch 12-28-03 11:40 PM

umm....................hahahahah ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hahahah i just free posted hahaha ummmmmmmmmm........


You just been warned keep this herbish crap up and be banned from the site!

~Bounce~

RapStar12 12-29-03 12:15 AM

Fuck ya Deva, you can't talk shit on me//
Yea, I'm young, but I still diss you...see?//
What a fag, can't you actually try to diss//
Wait... that was your best, sorry don't get pist//
I'm just tellin' the truth, no harm in that//
Look I'm hatin' on you, and this shit is whack//
Look if I really wanted to diss ya, I would get in a battle//
But why when I can 'control' ya like you was a 'paddle'//
I'm just spittin' the first shit that comes to mind//
You need wordplay, vocab, and to actually rhyme//
Well Peace out dawg, please don't try to respond//
If ya did that, you would be as stupid as a blonde//

Castro XL 12-29-03 03:49 AM

Rapstar(pssh)boy you dont bling//
You rapping is whacker than Ja rule trying to sing//
Dawg you need give the game up cuz yo rhymes is whack??
And like them boys from bad boy said" Ill beat yah down wit a Baseball bat"//
Rapstar,I aint wanna do you wrong, but its the rule of the cypher//
And I'll do you like the feds, and str8 indite yah//
Dawg do you really want it wit Castro//
Dawg if you take it to audio imma prove you a hoe//
Yeah you getting real mad cuz I keep saying dawg//
But yo rhymes is gay ,so it seem like you be sucking yah balls//

Born To Kill 12-29-03 09:01 AM

Castro's XL, that's alotta whack ta deal with, right?
And you know he is cuz despite his sig...this kid's white!
Call him Wonder Bread, the way I slice him frequently...
And neatly, no blood spilled...cuz he ain't got heart...apparently.
So get outta here with ya fucked up format and weak shots...
Ain't nuthin mighty bout you or ya town, cept ya crotch rot.

Straight Ace 12-29-03 09:30 AM

Reset a record, it's just numbers no throwback..
Cause with basically 2000+ posts n up 9 wins..
This self proclaimed Vet is still wack..
Born to Kill, killed seventy seven, re-incarnation..
Or endless hours in frontlines with silly determination..
I admire you though..i guess your still young at heart..
Still 'stuck' on [move] wins? after 2 - your losses start..

Dev 12-29-03 10:43 AM

ya won 1 battle on rb why ya bother show ya face
straight ace my words are like mace to ya face
its a discrace! i burn ya eyes, cos ya words are misplaced
compared to mine ya like a midgey bite to the skin
1 and only win, with 110 posts, ya skillz wearing thin
i aint hit hard in this dis, why? cos i dont need to try
i beat you easier than halle berry on my love eye....
so bye...

Straight Ace 12-29-03 10:52 AM

My history here is longer the yours..now new..
You dont need publicity?..so u advertise ur crew..
You beat?..your heart, faster when i reveal me..
Im a disgrace?u got a lie posted right under ya avy..
Got 100+ posts, cause i actually tend to critizise..
Get a pic editor, cause this ego has to be resized..
Left feedback in your open mic..gosh how nice of I..
..But guess what.. even ill people lie..

Dev 12-29-03 11:01 AM

ya come up with used lines look back at the previous pages
shit ya already did thats where ya get ya played cases
every time i cypher what do i get same old same old
inactive noobs, enrolled who wont do what they told
this is my last round for tonight, no need to get syced
still aint gonna win fuck against another noob cos ya shite...

DirtyChill 12-29-03 04:51 PM

hotboi is shit and ur right, but still and despite
U lose on tha mic, I flip my tongue like a dyke give ya hoe what she likes/
Overrated u r, if evenrated at all, ur a masterbatin fag at a bar,I peep ya type from afar, asshole tattered and scarred/....(smirks)...come on dude ur a fraud, somethin close to a braud, admit it Im tha best, be4 I dump clips in ya car


I could continue mashing...but its not a battle....so i'll show mercy

bouncedoggydog 12-29-03 05:17 PM

This cat falls back when my lryical shots converge at ya back/
Emerge thru ya flack and pierce Nipples like ho's on a Mack/
Profound thoughts travel at the speed of spit, but yours drool like kids fixed on a tit/
Face it kid your lost like the 'Land of" Like Chaka and holly your minus the Love/
Dirty chill describes your type of skill, like sex in the cold theres nothing to feel/
Like candy barz your sugar coated lines get ate by my Phat induced ryhmes/


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