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La Cosa Nostra 10-29-04 06:18 AM

I checked ya temp, hoe your bullshit, we all know your a liar..
Lighting a match on ya notepad..
...................................Is the only way ya rhymes on fiya..
I got a sign, hoes for hire, and your names top of the list..
Ill have ya ass fucked for cash..
...............So when Im gettin rich, Itll give you the shits..
Mother of RV? Then yous a slut, thats over 15000 guys..
See Fiyas the local roller coaster..
.............................................Every bodies had a ride..

Blah..

Zig Zag 10-29-04 02:06 PM

yeah you can rap but you aint no sensation
you would if you could but its too bad ur caucasion
your intelligence aint authentik its fake
imma smake you 'cross ya face like dre ho cake
im not tryin to be ill... or even mean but fuck you
cuz like espaƱa said 6 feet under we will tuck you

Ambient 10-29-04 02:43 PM

DML:


bearings remain absent, as you struggle for rank and position
u see, even the lower margin herbs are a more valuble addition
ya self obsessed, belive that i speak the truth, no mistake miss
yer signature idle profits, ur rep is tarnished, why the fake pics?

Nostradamus:

yer diss wit a trial permit, reppin an L with tha keys ya stroke
u awaited yer name provail in RV...but it only is "big" in bold

Miss. Lyricist 10-29-04 03:41 PM

I hate to shame the dude- he misspelled "SUPERIOR VERB"
Replace the "R" with an "H" and spell "SUPERIOR HERB"
He's got a HUGE vocabulary- words that he can't pronounce
Got the SWAT TEAM on his case, "PUT THE THESAURUS DOWN!"

atti? 10-29-04 04:35 PM

Put Up Or Shut Up So She Pushed Up Her Lunch To Give Me Raw Stuff...
I Eat Up These Fat Bitchs Brawn Up...An The "Ball-Seems-Tipped" When Tryn Get Up...
Leave The Weight Brief When I Light The Page With Heavy Set Cuts...

No One Will Prolly Pick Up On My Wordplay...
But Whatever...
.One.

N.Tavarez 10-29-04 05:33 PM

i'd rather 'live' in ya moms snatch..ya 'sonic' is past a willy wombat
'dont wasted time thinking bout the future' just prepare for combat
break ya bones and leave you 'pieces of life.'.who knew 'fieces' could write?
i smash ya numbers with a hammer like pieces of dice
abstract..twist his cap back ..his 'hitlist' isnt hitting...
in 'websters' under bullshit, ya face is 'the definition...'
as i stomp his shit..who cares about 'awards and accomplishments'
beat you down from here to providence..my prominence is dominant

Ambient 10-30-04 05:51 PM

hotshh!

nobody dissed you, like minute particles, ur too small to see
ya raps viral infection spreads Ambien, u da reason we fall asleep

Ambien is a brand of sleeping pill.

Miss. Lyricist 10-30-04 08:08 PM

I don't think anyone did pick up on that Abstrakt...

Phrensik 11-01-04 08:13 PM

dersert eagle act'n lethal pop'n out wit tha raw clip
power to tha death just enuff to make yo jaw flip
got beef?
i eat it up just like raw fish
play around ill have yo ass fallen from a tall cliff


thats a lil sumthin

Jack Da Rip 11-02-04 02:12 AM

Come on cuz you gotta come with the real shit.
A microphone and a beat playa Im'a kill it. You gotta feel this.
You don't gotta give me no lie.
I keep blunts in heavy rotation so I stay so high.
Phrensik don't get me wrong you might be a good brother.
You eat girls so much they call you sea food lover.

Terumoto 11-02-04 02:32 AM


shutup kid.. you vs me is like virgin sex, ya fuckin with tight
quit lyin ya faggot.... youve never touched a blunt in ya life
Im leavin colorful stripes...... lines makin bruises on ya body
odds are 100/1, and you need elevation, like neo in the lobby
Fuckin 12 yrs old or somethin.. ya rhymes provin u bitchmade
pussy bein like fish is a rumour that goes around in 6th grade


meh....................... <drunk...

fluidmoon 11-02-04 02:39 AM

simplicity kills the man who lives by it,too weak and breathing it
your words can do crunches but you still wouldnt have hard hits
your skills were adopted by a foster mother,she felt bad, i know
this is what was needed in ya life to say you've grown "pure",it shows
jack dont know shit, your numbers let you know constantly
R.I.P, you dumb bitch, sleep with fish, you have guaramis hitting me..lol

guaramis are weak fish, sensitive to certain water

edit,,supposed to be for the rip..lol

Terumoto 11-02-04 02:50 AM


fine challenge me...... drop a rhyme or two, a few lines'll do
but everybody knows im better.. the fuck you tryina prove?
i couldn't find your view.......... with me, applying pressure is brainless
why cant you see things my way?.. ya gotta pull ya head out ya anus
ya skills are a mess.. they aint been really addressed, still im the best
bitch, im leavin ya flat footed, when i replace ya heels with ya breasts


sup fluid :thumbup:

Chew187 11-02-04 04:30 AM

hahaha cheese filled rhymes good flow if you read it properly
 
Get ready for a steady flow
hit you like a merry-go round after round you know
you can talk but you just a ho
At least everybody says so
so when I tell you stop bitch let it go
thats when i'm really gonna kill you slow
face down with you face blown
shut your fuckin lips cuz your an ass clown
round after round i will stop you
I'm like Big Poppa ruthless enuff to curb stomp yo ass bitch!!! :thefinger

Chew187 11-02-04 04:54 AM

I'm depressed cus my bank account barely exceeds a grand
you're depressed cus you always make love to your hand
oh wait a minute the last rapper was myself
I better set the trophy sock back up on the shelf
It's nice to finally get some tail
when all i needed was another drink and a rail

Godz Angel 11-02-04 01:45 PM

That was gay shit right there, I didnt feel it,
I will buy you an opportunity, Then steal It,
I will reveal it, That fact that you suck,
If this was a real battle, You'd be sure to Duck!
What the Fuck, Your avatar Is a million Yrs old.
You will always cherrish your lines that I scolled!

Peace~

* -- Blaza -- * 11-02-04 08:42 PM

now if we battle u suck so they'll neva Vote
And im standin out Puttin shellz in da back of ya throat
now u shit outta luck shit don't cuzz ready to say fuck
fo me to shut u up i dont even need da hoasta to bust
now i got glock rep around wit da houston rocketz
and i got shot gunz but i really Refuse to cock it
so u dun got lucky next time u bettah apresiate
fo i go runnin around town ya momz what kinda-heat-ya-ATE

Anamasity 11-02-04 09:24 PM

My hollo tips will leave yo hole fuckin body lit
and how yo name gonna be cash when u aint got nun of that shit
You aint no got damn true balla
U the type of nigga when u breakup wit a bitch yo ass is tempted 2 call her
Im the greatest and aint nobody on top of me
The most money u eva had in yo hand was from monopoly
And if u didnt know im wit the R.I.P crew
I aint got time 2 battle somebody that got a bed curfue

riddlemethat 11-03-04 01:24 AM

Who is this atrocity, breakin down mic's chattin bout curfew?//
Spellin the shit wrong makes him jus look like shit on my shoe//
Where the fuck you from, cos I sure wanna be there to put you in ya place//
If you gon spit shit back, then say GOD not GOT, before I laugh in ya face//
This is the diss the person above you, not self glorification cypher//
So if you don't mind goin, jus go ahead an crawl back in ya diaper//
If you were anywhere near me i'd maybe give you a bit of credit//
But you a wannabe nigga so you don't get shit there, I done said it//

Jack Da Rip 11-03-04 02:57 AM

Now what you gon do. When I step through.
I can't lie so Im'a give it up to you.
You got an extended vocabulary. This shit's bout to get scary.
Im'a put you in yo place and that be da cemetery,
Grab a dictionary. This word you won't comprehend.
Nestor muthafucka that means that I win.
Now riddle me this and "riddle me that".
Milton Keynes what? Tell me where that be at?
Never mind cuz that info is unimportant.
Throw some baking soda cuz my shit is scorching.

Effect 11-03-04 07:42 AM

jack the rip your packin no shit your a skitso
your mummas so fat she's startin to look like a hippo
you were born brainless this boy is no challenge
hes good at doin stuff like suckin his dads bellend
you can't reach me all you do is watch ya tv
bitch you was............ quoted dumb on ya cv
no one wanna cheer cause we don't wanna here
bitch has tears in his eyes cause i shot him like a dear

...Virtue... 11-03-04 07:59 AM

rippin ya in 6..

Jack Da Rip:

you just a dope rook, thats why ya battle in a cypher
never able to run with the big dogs, g'luck u singer/songwriter
i crush small hoes, your a step-ahead, in that race you'll come first
your air explodes, when i clap organs and make ya lungs burst
ya lines where rehearsed, why you spit pre-writes
like de-javu, all ya seem to be spittin is fake re-types

Jack Da Rip 11-03-04 03:44 PM

You spit six bars on me which is all cool.
"Virture" you understood it, that Im'a dope rook.
Your moms yo biggest fan only cuz she loves you.
The only person sicker than you is the person above you.
That be me. Ima better MC than you are.
You right Ima ahead of you can't catch up cuz I'm too far.

Im da one rippin you in six.
Jack Da Rip

Teknikal 11-03-04 04:50 PM

Your lyrical display is a disgrace, I'm leader of the Hip-Hop crusades/
Tattoo my name on your face to show that my presence wont fade/
you played; A mix of "true colors" like flags that wave at gay-pride parades/
I'll leave this bitch spayde*;Left afraid of the iller kats, so he attempts to evade/

*- He's ball-less, so he's a bitch, and by "spaying" him, he can't pass down his whackness.

blah...Aint close to my best...spit back...I wanna see how you contend...

DrasticMeasureZ 11-03-04 06:21 PM

dis kid wants to rumble with me,but ya bar'z is like kitkat i'll break them
i'll savage ya rhymes,like an fat boi is ready for ya lunch ya bars i'll eat them
kid cant even flow,if he'd fucked with mother nature u couldnt blow my rhymes (windy)
ya punches wont lock me like braces ,u cant even be an legend if u went back in time\
ya rhymes teknikal cant even be nice or seen if u had an plants of roses in ya mouth (bloom and nice)
cant cum harder than me if he'z sucked da demons dick,only time u sik than hell if u visit to tha south

Ill-Grammatix 11-03-04 06:21 PM

i'll rip out teknikal's retinals... leave'm like a vegetable
edible... eating his wack rhyme flow... like anorexics do (makes me throw up)
i'll stop, stand and bust shots... get slammed in dust
ya plans is crushed... dude really thinks he's Can-i-bus
1 post under his avy... this kat gets mad happy
get at me... when ya fucked up flow's no longer crappy

ill game 11-03-04 07:09 PM

shatter ur dome i case ur bones with horrible moans
brooklyn bitch home of gay nigga wit no homes
and no dreams cant be a balla
so they join fanstasy teams

streetryda 11-03-04 07:11 PM

this kid couldnt be ill i he was infact a disease in a foreign country...
your "flat" broke and this kid raps like he actually has some money...
the funny part is that he's reppin brooklyn like they hard or somethin...
he only gets hard, clamed up, cuz hes schemein on his manly pumpkin...
scrumpin is this kids realisitic dream, he'll never be the real definition...
turn back now, how u think u winnin, your only getin one preminition...

Meziaa. 11-03-04 07:17 PM

Streetryda's a complete biter, who eats concrete after my extreme writin in this obscene cypha..
You'd be-higher then me if ya skill didn't lack son, so duck...
you short in-talent and ya sex performance...so, i can't exactly say ya fucked...

Teknikal 11-03-04 09:41 PM

Never said I was canibus so leave the dillusions at home/
We only similar, the Dr concluded that we were clones/
My spent verbal bullets spill your blood and paint your radius/
Compared to views on your "lyrical gods", Tek remains an athiest/
The bringer of all blood left to be shed-
bringer of substances to all mouths left to be fed/
I bring the concept of intellectuality to a point in reality where it is no longer a fallacy/
You realize the superior cranial capacity I contain whenever you try battlin' me/
The all knowing being through out the galaxy-
No need to be seen, I'll clog ya mouth so you cant breath/
Fuck a rebuttle, I slaughter a MC until they cant regain conciousness/
You couldnt bend my bars to be untrue like tryin to make a Thompson*-twist/(*its a type of gun)

JuicyJhcp19 11-03-04 10:31 PM

Maybe youz the one who adores the tots....
Cuz Juicy ain't a fag whoz got his little dick in a sock,
I'm the hardest MC in town, and unlike you I got the dope and the flow
And the flow is at its dopist when i put on a show....
Show, yeah show them dudes your loose cannon....
Because you got an asshole thats shitting yogurt like Dannon

Jack Da Rip 11-04-04 01:20 AM

In what town are you da hardest?
Cuz if visit there I bet half da population be straight retarded.
You got da flow and show cuz you must be on dope.
How you gon say you ain't a fag with my dick down yo throat.
You ridin da dick of 3-6 and you ridin it hard.
You can hate now but later on you'll be liking da GOD.

In other words Im da hardest.
Jack Da Rip.

User Nameless 11-04-04 01:52 AM

Juicy froot gets chew up and spit out again, like recycled jargon, "who's hard" when, this tikes refers his bars to a fag with a little cock, thats not far-fetched, but knock him, when his spars went bent like limp dick after not enough lubricant, and chicks ain't what he's into, more like the sticks that comes with two, two of what, two of deez nuts. so let me freeze and explain in simple text so the peepz can "understoot" the froot above me is about as gay as the next.

Jack Da Rip 11-04-04 02:24 AM

Now let me address this cat who calls himself "nameless."
As you can tell from his rap he's just weak and brainless.
But you can't blame him. If you wanna blame someone blame his mother.
For fuckin around on his dad and fuckin "nameless's" brother.
It seems like your whole rap revolves around some gay shit.
Might as well give me some brain, how else are you going to waste it?

"A brain is a terrible thing to waste."
Jack Da Rip.

Trentorican 11-04-04 10:16 AM

how can u ask brain from a man and expect to be straight
u gotta accept da fact dat ya raps is a waste
come round my way and get sprayed from wats attached to my waist
gat spit at ya i rip jackers who act and you know dat u fake
next time watch wat u say or i'm a fullfill ya head wit clips if u come out ya face

Dex 11-04-04 10:38 AM

I could mock you and make jokes but your so bad it seems sleazy
With a verse like above, should i laugh or feel sleepy?

Relax tho, let it go.. stay cool calm and breezy
Dont get ahead of yourself and tell your friends you will beat me
cos il lyrically beat you like you aint ever seen cos its easy!

Your verbal words absurd like you thirteen as other rv bods a plenty
Surprise time was high, on your profile when i looked and saw that your twenty!

streetryda 11-04-04 03:19 PM

as soon as i steped in i knew u was an herb....with a name like weedex
my punches got this kid crying..hurry quick someone get him a cleenex
vest all ripped up left you fully exposed...bullies chose to go easy on you
blue an black spots on ya eye, cuz u got caught spyin on em in the bathroom
pussy ass newb gota get a gun...shooting plastic bb's aint ever hurt noone
go bite off d12 some more.....mayb that way you'll get a battle actually won
done merkin this easy mc, best be testin the rest, get better then step to me
especially kids who got no flow, blowed this boy out the water exceptionally

Godz Angel 11-04-04 04:42 PM

Your Verse is one big stntance, Thats a run on Bitch,
WHen you typed out Bite Ounch # 3, Your computer had a glitch,
You were stuck with your mind , to waste all your time,
Instead of other peoples shit That You add to ya lines.
It send shivers down ya spine. to know that You will finally get merked.
Well... I fouy were rich, you could have abought a computer that works,

Jack Da Rip 11-04-04 05:33 PM

"Logistic" must not have spell check or either he's illiterate.
Trying to ask for respect but cuz you ain't gettin it.
Especially not from me. So why even try it?
You can be from "hell" but I just don't buy it.
You ain't no "Ill Emcee" so quit yo fibbin.
Guess why I got da name, cuz it's you that I'm Rippin.

Holla at yo boy.
Jack Da Rip.

BestRapper 11-04-04 06:23 PM

jack da rip what kind of name is that
talk shit boy ill leave u on ur face or ur back
boy u still will get clapped damn u cant even rap
amatter a fact (pause)
i aint even goin to blast u
im a let my crew handle u
they probably would stomp a blood puddle through the side of u
and when they done im a let my little cousin clap u

Fuck Jack Da Rip your fuckin whack dont even think about tryin to come back at me PUSSY


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