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~Lady Fiya~ 07-24-04 02:40 PM

ha rofl i guess this nigga thinks that his flows are too crazy
femcee serves ya 'til u face 'em positions like ya fuckin' "avi"
ill's an understatement cuz ur rhyme status is far under it
u think u tight when u battle newbies like the one u dissed
nigga reppin' navy like them lil' kiddie rhymes gonna waive ya
4 tha country> give up ya gun, surrender so Bush can "save" ya

my first cypher, damn not bad.. flow2crazy no offense.. just a cypher
ha ha ~wun~

Thumper 07-24-04 03:03 PM

Yo, i spit the furious language packed like a sandwich//
The only flow ya know that causes extensive damage//
Cerebral cranium have it injected into ya brain//
You can shove it up ya ass but its just not the same//
I get steamed like a locomotive but more explosive//
My temper tantrums have a habit of leavin' bodies floatin'//
My flow's Roller coastin', but thats just my way to vent//
Thats why when i drop, its an anticepated event//
Crazy to an extent, but it seems to me your more lazy//
Crazier than alley McBeal seein' transparent babys//
Your illusionary ass isn't capable of impossible feats//
Cause ya drops arn't breakin cement streets and concrete//
I'm glazed and diamond dusted, it appears ya flows rusted//
My occupation is slaughterin' bitches like Colonel Mustard//

~Lady Fiya~ 07-24-04 03:13 PM

this is not fa writtens nigga diss the one above you
this ya first post sry tha noob doesn't know whut 2 do
wow with a name like thumper reppin' disney cartoons
Bambi ain't shit that's y his ma was shot with harpoons
as were you, come to RB show ya skills in tha Battle
cyphers are a test of thought sumthin' u can't handle
no one gives a shit if ya crazy nigga i'm tha lunatic
talk bullshit, i spit flows while i hit the toilet and piss
so go stump sumwhere else, go gain a newbie belt
to duck my shit, ya betta wear bullet-proof stealth

ha ha ha lol
~wun~

Percept Shun 07-24-04 03:13 PM

I'd be punching him hard, but that'd be animal abuse to this baboon.
Still, how can I respect a guy, that named himself after a disney cartoon?
This is your first post, to bad its not your first whoring.
Your bars are like tylenol PM, leaves the audience snoring.
Thats why I'm popping you, cause your verse kept me laughing.
Not because its good, but because of your corny ass rapping.

Thumper 07-24-04 03:41 PM

Like every other nigga this man's one in the same//
He think i play games so he's tryin ta play off my name//
Com'mon dog its not like everyone hasn't done~it~b4//
But this is where i step~in, in order to even~the~score//
First post on this name, but my experience will out~brandish//
Your claimes of fame are fucked up and out~landish//
This mans' candid, keep messin' i'll leave this man stranded//
Im the deranged lunatic that labels niggas and keeps 'em branded//
Weak nigga, he'll never get his name in the stars//
Decided to drop lines cause he couldn't swing on da bars//
Ya fucked up now son, i'll make ya sorry ya came//
Thumps the sound of my foot stoppin' down on ya grave//

Yvonne 07-24-04 06:06 PM

gir,boy,who the fuck is you?...only 2 posts,bitch u already screwed
it says diss th person above you,buh u 2 dumb to do wut u spoded to
i flip this thing left and right,make you know RB is for the illest iight?
4k i see ya "name glorification" as a waist of time,i see it like blood driping down my knife
you wishin to rip niggaz and bitches/man 'fore u say a word i got ur mouth sealed wi stiches..
i came herre for a reason..and ima rip u for a season..till u creep and start bleeding..
stop dreaming to be the best..X gonna put ya chest to rest..all ya moma gon do is wash the blood of ya vest..
cos my name speakes for itself..danger & death is what gonna get to yaslef

M-Eazy 07-24-04 06:35 PM

i got nuthin to say, sounds like ^'s a basehead
been here a month longer than 'thumper', and talkn bout wut a waist he is
how dare u get on someone, dawg, u softer than tissue
but 'thumper's just as bad as u, cause he aint came bac to diss u
fuk it, u think u rated for adults only, puttn "XxX"?
i think 17's time for a part-time job, ya lazy meathead
but u sittn on a comp., thats how i know u broke
'bart simpson' told 'Krusty da Clown' that u nuthin but a joke

KKbug 07-24-04 09:50 PM

man what happined to this motha f*cken site
and who told you to pick up the mic
you have an 8 line diss
thatz so small it mite as well not exist
okay i have a question ''dot''
have you been smokin a lil' to much pot
man by the way u rap u probbly blow
itz pretty bad when you can't even flow
go head and diss me back
but itz still gonna be bad , hello your on crack
you suck more dick then i do
get off the site get a clue
why can't you see,your the joke here
you can't scare me i have no fear
go ahead call me a whore, a ho, a skank, a slut
but when i say it back don't f*ckin start sayin what
your probbly only thirteen
walkin around dissin people like your the king
itz pretty bad when gurl don't even want you for a fling

Percept Shun 07-24-04 10:10 PM

By someone with 177 posts I'd expect something better.
But it seems you couldn't deliver lines sending a letter.
I'll tell you where your from and thats on the ground dieing.
Cause you couldn't drop flows if you were on your knees crying.
I can beat your whole verse by just saying - "FUCK YOU".
You've got people in your respect list but not one of them respects you.

Abraxas 07-24-04 10:23 PM

ha, i laugh at this kid, who probably lives the ways of Boondocks/
I can beat this guy in typnig text if my hands were handcuffed and locked
This guys a free agent cos he sucks, can't even get a crew/
doesn't bother trying out, cos he knew he'd get kicked out, with a "Fuck you"/
This wack man thought his rhymes were as hot as plasma and coal
But his rhymes were old, colder than cold, comes from the south pole

Thumper 07-24-04 11:28 PM

Set and ready, now my missions stated//
Fuck~up the bitches, and extinguish the hated//
I'll mail ya fam a gift so they'll know you never made it//
Be able to tell ya last reaction cause ya puples dilated//
Like a Crimson tide i sub~divide, and always the last~man~standin'//
Only time ya make impact is when your body landed//
Bet ya didn't know that ya flow was a little low//
Prolly explains why your speech is a little slow//
Pack up and go, just gave ya a warnin' ya ungrateful motherfucker//
Best take heed, or i'll have police claimin' your a jumper//

ProForm 07-24-04 11:43 PM

Disregarded your first 4 lines, cos that shit was filled.
Onslaught, yes, when you write, most of ya script is killed.
Reusing crap in your drop, why bag on dudes with no crew
When wack is abundant, and elevatin newbs are so few.
So I looked at ure post, and ure records discredited.
U proly won with dicked votes, plus that shit flow was edited.

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-25-04 05:38 AM

ya moms said my dick is so long,i guess datz y she been on my dick dick so long-
u nice? ya so wrong!,u a "rookie" cuzz ya bar's they dont come in a "pro's-from"-

u dont know me brother,my punches 2 sick cant get em u could only wonder-
u new but u aint gon rap no more now ya "posts" is gon reamin "kobe's number"-
(he got 8 post)

u gon merk sombody? well it cant be me,dem guns come in really handy b-
just know dat i could kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"-
(ooooooooh)

Terumoto 07-25-04 05:53 AM

for proform..... i couldnt resist.....

yo im bendin this phony, wack bitch.. ya punch efforts was faulty
but dont stop kid.. It was hilarious when you attempted a multi
wreckin' a bunch..eat cats like you for dinner, breakfast and lunch
ya vocab was fake.. but at least it wasnt as bad as that editing punch


marv:

sorry kid, but ya aint tight, ya came wack, so now its flame time
leave abbraised lines... ya inner woulda been good.. if it wasnt the same rhyme!?
yo, strippin ya frame.. no flow so i go for rippin this gay
since ya say ya so pro.. how didnt you know post disses are played?
flippin n slayin... im bestin' cores.. my rhymes more fresh than yours
ya crap son... what mc puts quotes round some words n calls it a metaphor..

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-25-04 06:05 AM

i mean dogg go 2 da studio and just regard dat text shit,u made dis vet flip-
& all dem dudes in ya sig aint ya friends dos da ppl ya moms had sex with-

dis fag waits me da spit in dis post i proved dis guy's sweatin me,let it be-
fukk ya "current battle" i could get u killed & make you lose ya "idenity"-

dis kidd's gon exspose ya ass,so just pm ya buddy's & get da low da talk ya trash-
dis kids flow gets all da laugh's,u not from "sandiego" u from "frisco" with all da fags-

might as well set up a battle dogg


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