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ill bing aka U.G 08-01-04 02:41 AM

contend him you tend nothin //you a pesnet spend your time// pretend how to rym //

this for gfx

MARVOLoUsJ1009 08-01-04 05:10 AM

^^^
shit i dont know y dis lame hype,dem bar's u spit was written they aint typed //
dis nigga should of been "left" rapverse look he cant even spell his name "right" //

i dont think ya rap's his hott,let's see u play dat thug shit when i flash da glock //
splash ya pops,oh u "wear makaveli boxer's" so now u think ya "ass is pac"??? //
dont!...all dem bar's you spittin dunny datz should stop!,ima be da last da flop //
everybody let's leave dis dude alone he like da "liter" so he got "trash da drop" //

oooooooh

Terumoto 08-01-04 05:32 AM

sup marv.. im prolly gonna be in ya crew soon :)


ima flatten you n' ya crew, wackin' this dude, till hes battered n' bruised
damn marv.. ya structure is herb.. aint anyone ever tell ya two slashes is noob?
whatever man, its you that its on, so you can do what ya want
fuck ya baseball bat, big leaguer, I make ya blood ooze with batons
Im regroupin' n' renderin' cells, spittin dope raps n' constantly sendin' out L's
I'd say im hot... but check the sig, brotha, sorry ya already said it ya self!!
wreckin' the shelves, im madd on audio, knockin albums in a promisin' way
kid, if youre the hottest on the site... then i guess it must be opposite day

MARVOLoUsJ1009 08-01-04 06:13 AM

u trash dont matter whut click u is,str8 keyed i aint gota diss u with pens-
u aint post da rest of whut i said which was "madd multis" aint gon get u a win-
(true dat is whut i said)

u "pussy" & u even got da scent,im gettin rap $ u could use my watch 4 rent-
look in ya sig beside's my me which wasn't wun no ill spitta gave u a complament-

ima send a army da u,like i give a fukk "marv im bout da b apart of ya crew"-
&??? dogg i dont know how da fukk u r state capitol must feel real sorry 4 u-

Terumoto 08-01-04 06:25 AM

no hate, no hate...

ya punches werent hittin' marv, sorry to say I ate ya words fa snacks
haha... yeah... quick keystyle, cats just say that in case they verse is wack
Dispursin' raps thats rockin' shit, frightening, I scare whores, flock n' rip
plenty of vets have given me props... im jus' wonderin.. wheres YOURE compliments?
Im delvin' it deep, dispellin' this creep, flipped n' stripped this fella is weak
ya vocabs wack man... spit like a baby... aint ya know 'to' and spelled with a D


one..

MARVOLoUsJ1009 08-01-04 06:42 AM

fed of my whole shit....

dogg u scared da battle me dont spit on here no more you a bitch wine-
it must be da person u battlin cuzz ur not known da have "lunatic lines"-

a vet? u got props from a kidd with about 20 wins dat happen da like ya-
but in real battle you take "L's" so now i get y u only rap in a "cypher"-

nigga i been pass ya flow,will wun of u vets pleez let dis bastard know-
dat goin 2 da studio is different from usin COOL EDIT or dat ACID PRO-

Terumoto 08-01-04 07:16 AM

its just a cypher.. dw bout feedin..


Yo, ima taint ya blood n' paint ya mug, watch as the flames brew
Im famed dude... quit dissin me on battles.. ur the one versin str8_hood
yeah you jus' passed my flow, i mastered it, man, ya writins beat
stifle beaks cos ya flappin ya mouth like ya stand a chance to rival me
that diss bout cyphers weak... I just come here when im goofin' around
If I was writin a real "cum-back".. id scrape it off the roof of ya mouth
I munch rhymes for lunch times, easy to see marvs shit cant crunch mine
Ya parents musta been jokin durin sex... cos 9 months later out comes a punchline
of course im a vet, to me this thang is just simple, I write amazing n' cripple
cant "thrill" or "beat" me, cos im "endin ya career in the game" like ya name was initials (in case ya slow...MJ... mike jordan n mike jackson)

MARVOLoUsJ1009 08-01-04 07:31 AM

damm my badd i had da drink some coffee ya bar's had noddin off da sleep-
u not da "king" so if u gota "crown" on u must gota "problems with ya teeth"-

pleez stop it with ya hurt jokes,u just hatin u been seen me merk folks-
its sad 6 of ya wins came from a person with da title "this is my first post"-

dude happy runnin round sayin i got me a mean crew,im cocky n seem rude-
"switch ya name up" if strobe was da "ban(d)-one-man" it probly a be u-

if its a cpyher u shouldn't have da feed dogg

Terumoto 08-01-04 07:50 AM



Curse n' retreat, merkin' wit heat, my words will defeat, bring it
I dunno if ya ill or not... so before ya rap try learnin ta speak english
I aint battlin first posters? it might seem that way cos of hoow bad they get ripped apart
sorry man... but its a known fact that fake personals just dont hit as hard


id make it longer but im busy... on the phone and writin a battle verse

MARVOLoUsJ1009 08-01-04 08:04 AM

u dont really want beef cuzz u soft u know da type da just tattle-
at least u told da truth but really who had da write 4 a battle???-

just open ya eyes bumm,ya moms look like 708 she just make da guy's run-
and ya ryhme scheme ya words is more forced than "nicky parker" in a size 1-

soon i'll be goin on tour 4 money,but u know whut dogg all dis funny-
cuzz u gay i mean who would take picture's of they recordin buddy's-

Kayem 08-01-04 12:06 PM

Yo this dude got only 1, his self in his band... its cozno1 likes you/
This clown is soft......even with a blunt knife you'd be easy to cut through/
He's so useless he cook a dinner and give you stomach flu/
My skillz are duplicate to tha terminator....they can't be stopped/
Your flow is decrepit..........you should find a new style to adopt/
You try and sell a record and wonder why it flopped/
Tha police got involved and you got yo' ass shopped/
Doin time in tha slammer...i guess yo didn't realise tha rules of grammer/
Yo' shits old ya need to upgrade....Its ancient, all decayed/
I hope yall no first aid...coz imma carve yah up in ma copters rotor blades/
Yo bin on here a while i'd expect you ta know tha concept of rap/
One snap...... brake this fools back....../
Yall need tha begginers guide it be right round tha corner, i draw yah a map/

Thumper 08-01-04 08:07 PM

Haha, check this man out. lol

Im like Hey!...

I'd think he'd know by now... that his style ain't botox, not raisin' brows//
Seem's ya mom's stayed~home raisin'~clowns,... cause ya can't spit~shit, only makin' sounds//
Ya specialize with mouth, but the down~side,... got more things goin' in than out//
I'll simply lay you out, professional, i do it where they can't hear you shout//
A surf~fanatical? Quit sayin' "Dude" dog, that shit ain't "Radi~call"//
Wonderin' why ya fuckin' up,... errors purely grammatical//
This man's Co-lateral, just 'uh terminater wannabe searchin' for groupies//
I'll leave you chopped.. shot.. and dropped.. like in all three movies//
Need ta pick up the wind dog... cause ya flow ain't flowin', only suckin',.. no blowin'//
Just mowin' and mowin' and droppin' ya boys to my feet//
Taken' they life, left to right as if i held down delete//

Ill-Grammatix 08-01-04 08:48 PM

You say that "errors purely grammatical"... well I take offense to that/
don't ever use my name in vain; you kats is way too dense to rap/
ya fascination with felatio's beyond my mental cap/
ya whole verse's about smoking the sausage... i'm starting to think YOU into that!/
You think that faggot shyt is cute?... oh , I forgot... ya name is Thumper/
It's no wonder... you're a fruit yaself... who likes to play the plumber!/
just for the record... ain't nothing wrong with laying pipe... if you's a brother/
just make sure that it's a female... if it ain't... stay undercover! (fuckin' homos!)

GFX. 08-01-04 10:57 PM

Nice. Finally, some other skill! Now I have to kill you! LOL.

Go back and edit that post just hit backspace and apologize//
I'll just have an admin remove when it was last modified//
All you have is multis, cuz all of your punches were lame//
You talk about him saying gay shit, but you still saying the same//
So what are the rest of us here supposed to say?//
Since You saying the same shit and dissing him for being gay//
Come out of the closet.

-Rated R- 08-02-04 12:18 AM

Im sick n im a pimp So im like A Flu 2 Screw....
Imma give u sum 'Skill' n take da S away n dats wut imma do 2 u....
u aint an emcee i'll butter da Mic so u cant even grab it...
I aint banks but 'if u so gangsta' let dis 'Warrior' 'Work magic'....
if u put socks on gangstaz u still couldnt 'DeFeet' dis 'Thug'...
Dis aint fear factor, but imma make u eat 10 slugs.....
i can get u killt in 2 seconds i jus gotta make a deposit...
When u dead i'll hang u up, now who should come out da Closet.... \


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