ok u shut the hell up......lets just battle and stop arguin thats all you know how to do.....just stop and battle and say uppin and stuff....no need to hate on each otha aight

ok good verses from both people...ill u had a couple flaws which were...your lack of structure...some lines are short and the 2nd line is triple the length...makes it a harder read...your punches were good hard hitting and i think better than borns...and personals ill merked born...born u didnt really say anything personal about him...but ill was using personals and punches flow and wordplay in the same bars which made it more complex but an interesting read...born u had perfect structure and flow and strong punches and wordplay...

best bar in battle:

my flows 'disasterous', and you cant 'handle this'//
nigga, fuck this 'rappin shit', i'll strap ya back wit explosive 'packages'//

worst bar in battle:

this is probably one of the most played lines ever just u reworded it

bitch why am I wastin my time on you or even bother//
You couldn't drop knowledge even if Einstein was your father//

vote: ill...i think the personals won this battle for him and personals always hit harder than punches...born u had some good shyt too but not good enough to win this battle..i think u had a couple played punches but other than that and lack of personals u got madd skill...a remtach would be good

~!1!~

godd damn nice battle but in the end im feelin ILL.....
ILL's flow was jus directed at ill so much that born culdnt come back
jus look at these lines man

You not learnin nothing from beating newbs theres nothing your gainin.....
But this bitch is gey...He gets more dick than J'lo in trainin....... hahah

Born2spitt you chose to battle me I thats your dicision.....
You think you was born2spitt..Bitch you was born to fix my television....


it was gangsta i was feelin it

but born did come back wit dis line

Nigga i'll slap ya silly, what ya gonna do//
You a Dominican in America repping a Canadian crew//

damn hott battle yall.....but in the end i prefer...... ILL

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Born2spitt you chose to battle me I thats your dicision.....
You think you was born2spitt..Bitch you was born to fix my television....

^^^^ decent opener...but, it could've been worded better

hes a homo,O yea yall didnt know he takes it up the butt....
He wants pussy so bad he stay up at 3'o clock (am) watching BET uncut...

^^^ how can he be both a homo and want pussy? don't get it...!!?!!

I dont know what bars is I think you mean 10 lines but I think im doin fine..
But since you said 10 bars I helped you and ended it with a 20th line....

^^^ closer was not strong man...

1...work on your line length...the flow is off from too many damn syllables...if you're gonna do that, then increase internal rhyming by 75%...


um...
Hold your head high nigga, lean backwards and relax//
don't let me shock you, paramedics in casualty'll do that//

^^..that's hot...not funny...not that hard hitting...but slick...decent opener

You a Dominican in America repping a Canadian crew//
this kid makin me boil up, this boy is just a flamboyant fuck//


^^^ nice personal...but, it coulda hit harder...i was waiting for the knockout blow with the set-up...but, youi didn't deliver it

You couldn't drop knowledge even if Einstein was your father//
and i see why u dont do topicals...u write verses so poorly//
That a drama still wouldn't be good even wit a "twist" in the story//

^^^^ decent closer...better than I'lls...but, not quite the knockout punch I thought you would bring...


Flow: Born
Rhymes: Born
Punches: Born



Vote: Born