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Uppin for votes....... Vote on this and drop a link.. Ill return the fav

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breakdown:

shady1132:

Da Army,sound like niggas who like cocks and shove their own in idiot box/
And the only weapons in that pitiful shit... is rocks and a old black fox/
^^bad opener good wordplay 6/10
They got dog collars made of cardboard,n uniforms made of bungee cords/
Da Army's one I'd never jump abaord,so poor they got tha world record/
^^2 thumbs down 3/10
My raps are so fuckin hard....... if u write it on paper,it'll never fold/
And white powder,only thing growing on that dick is bread mold/
^^lol good punch 8/10
See,I may be 14,and u about 18,but my rhymes are left unseen/
I'm better than anyone in dat crew full of queens,who dress like Halloween/
^^ another good punch and wordplay 7/10
And it's no suprise to why you call yourself WHITE POWDER/
Cause you always got a mustache made of MAN CHOWDER!!!!!/
^^thats original good closer 7/10

overall: 31/50

white powder:

This cat’s a wanna be shady
Fuck it hes more like a wanna be mike brady
^^ no comment 1/10
Hes fuckin 2 and eleven
This cat’s done right now.. he’d be better off in heaven
^^ok punch 3/10
Shady dog you should just quit
Cause in this game dog you ain’t gonna make it.
^^better than before 4/10
Yo fuckit imma roast this rookie
Imma engulf this cat like a fat kid with a cookie
^^good punch 6/10
Don’t mess with the powder yo
You gonna be hit with every punch I throw
^^just STOP 2/10
Dog you messin with an upcoming lyrical king
Now it’s time to let the punches swing
^^ok punch 5/10
Shady your name fits cause u be hidin
This dogs finished…start the dickriding
^^better 7/10
Cause that’s the only way you gonna win…
Cause imma drop this cat like the wall in berlin
^^ok punch a lil played 5/10
Like a Nazi this boy’s about to die
Every vote this cat gets hes gatta buy
^^good closer 6/10

overall: 39/90

vote:shady...overall better verse better wordplay and better punches

uppin for votes.......

Aight Aight//

Shady
Punches 4/10
Struture 7/10
Vocab (none)
Multi's 7/10
Flowz 5/10
Overall=24


White
Punches 6/10
Flowz 8/10
Struture 6/10
Vocab (none)
Multi's 6/10
Overall=26

Vote=white

Aight... thanks for the imput... Uppin for more votes....

shady.........you need to elevate my friend. work more on your vocab, punchlines, metaphors and delivery. you had a couple of decent ideas, but didnt make the best of them. also, some of your verse didnt make sense.........sorry bud.

powder.....you take this one. you need some work as well, but you came hard enough to win this battle........your verse was put together a little bit better and that was the key to your victory. also, good luck with your crew.

keep on keeping on fellas.....i hope to see big things from you both in the future. one.

s.v.