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untouchablekilla 09-24-04 10:59 PM

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untouchablekilla 09-25-04 12:53 PM

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untouchablekilla 09-26-04 10:02 AM

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Adam 09-26-04 10:27 AM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

untouchablekilla...nice drop, you have a sweet opener, got me stoaked on reading your whole verse. i was also pumped on the midget asma line haha, good shit. overal you had good flow and a good structure, nice wordplay and allright vocab...some good punches in there, i give your verse a 7.5/10

Trojan - you set up your opener pretty good with the first line, but you followed up it pretty weak, you had some good punches in there, i like the PS2 line haha, overal you had a good flow, and struture, good wordplay, the vocab was allright, and punches were pretty solid...id give this verse a 7/10

close and good battle, but im gonna have to give it to....

v/untouchablekilla

drop an honest vote with GOOD FEEDBACK on this battle please as i have or done this for you, please good feedback i can't stand when votes get dq'd

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Immense 09-26-04 12:20 PM

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Compose 09-26-04 12:26 PM

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Artemis 09-26-04 12:51 PM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

This was a nice battle. Both of y'all came hard (65 replies wow lol)

Trojan, you had a pretty good verse. You had nice punches, but soom didn't hit all that hard. But they were still nice. Yo flow was aiight. It fell off in a few spots in my opinion though. But overall nice flow. You had an overall pretty nice verse. Nice shit, I like it.

Untouch, you had a nice verse. Yo punches were hittin' pretty hard throuhggout the verse. Nice personals. I liked it nice shit. YO flow was on point too. Fell off on a few parts, but still. Nice shit

Overall, I thonk you edged it out though. no hate. pc

C.C.C.P. 09-26-04 01:07 PM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

This is how it goes:
Trojon:
Opener: was bad not only did i not get the punch i also hate it as an opener.
Closer: it was worse than the opener
Flow: litle rough but okay
Style: i hate when people have to explain they raps but other than that it all good
Punches: there were some there but they didn't hit and were confusing
Personals: none
Mults: didn't see any
Vocab: not to complex

UNTAKA:
Opener: It was a starter but not hot but still good
Closer: i liked it but instead of words u shoulda said punches
Flow: it was real good i like it props
Style: i don't like hypelinks in battles
Punches: funny shit
Personals: al there
Mults: didn't see any
Vocab: nice u had it large words and everything

vote: UNTAKA

C.C.C.P. 09-26-04 01:11 PM

i shoulda known that this cat was another wack ass from N.O.K.

untouchablekilla 09-26-04 01:23 PM

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big GZ 09-26-04 01:43 PM

Voted For: Trojan

i give this win to Trojan. He packed more punchlines that made sense, his structure was alright, his flow was sorta off at times...but overall a pretty str8 verse.

untouchablekilla...u had punches (just not as much), your verse flowed a little better than trojan's...but overall trojan won it...but it was a good battle...i could tell both of y'all put some thought into it.

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*lyrical madnes* 09-26-04 04:59 PM

Voted For: Trojan

nice battle
trojan wins dis 1 close battle tho
i think he just took this 1 i lyked his verse better he had little harder punches nice battle
pz out

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untouchablekilla 09-27-04 06:13 PM

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blazinlilmami 09-28-04 09:11 AM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

wow man u stomped him...urs sounds hot...his dont..

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untouchablekilla 09-29-04 07:27 PM

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