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Oz™ 01-07-05 03:16 PM

uppin............................................. ....

Insight. 01-07-05 04:19 PM

Voted For: MeN-Iz

ok battle

punches- Ill, nice punches. Harder hittin and more creative. Ol, not very creative punches, most played, and most weak.
personals- Ill, you got this, mostly for havin em. Aight personals, not that hard hitting, but still aight. Ol, no real personals. Use them.
multis- Ol, ok multis. Not great, not bad. Ill, no multis.
metas- Ill, ok metas. Not the best, but not the worst. Ol, decent metas. Many are played though.
wordplay- Ill, ok wordplay. Some witty, some not. Ol, not a lot of good wordplay. You need to use that.
humor- Ill, had me laughin. Ol, I smiled.
structure- Ol, not many stretched lines and it was easy to read. Ill, too many stretched lines overall.
flow- Ill, ok flow. Last line fell off, but other than that good. Ol, fell off too much. Auquariums, virgin line, etc...

Ill, good verse overall. Try some multis, only thing I can say really.

Ol, work on personals and wordplay. Punches are ok, but personals help win.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/ Ill.Logic

px

Insight. 01-07-05 04:21 PM

Oh I forgot, leave an honest vote on my battle vs. final, or at least leave feedback. Thanks.

Oz™ 01-07-05 11:19 PM

uppin.............................................

Still Motion 01-08-05 12:45 AM

This was feedback posted for MeN-Iz
 
Yo the other guy had more punches. You were doing alright, just try and put a few more punches. your flow was alrite. Try and put in some multis.

MaRVJay 01-08-05 01:05 AM

Voted For: Infector Mindz

64 reply's....4 pages wow....if ya niggaz was 2 vote on battles maybe ppl would of vote on dis shit...but aneway i thought ill had it till infector's verse lol dat shit was hott...

opener-inf
structure-ill
punchlines-inf
wordplay-nun
multis-inf
creativity-inf
personals-ill...da last bar
finisher-umm ill..inf dat line was hott but it was mad stretched..
enjoyed-inf.....i guess maybe cuzz he spit more but i liked his verse betta...ill u had about 2 hott bars datz it ya first bar didn't even ryhme..nuff said

LINKS R IN DA SIG RETURN IT...

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50hater_killer 01-08-05 12:41 PM

hey I voted so can ya return the fav in my link peace.

Oz™ 01-08-05 01:30 PM

Uppin............................................. ......

Kordozar 01-08-05 02:27 PM

Voted For: MeN-Iz

Wow Realli Ta Me Neitha 1 Of Them Made Sence.......

Openor=Ill He Had A Good Punch And Wordplay
Strukture=Tie Both Wass Easy Ta Read
Punches=Tie,Hard Ta Understand But They Both Wass Hittin
Wordplay=Ill He Had Wordplay Through out Some Bars Not All
Personals=Ill He Had Better Punches,Otha Kid None
Closer=Ill,He Had A Good Diss,And Punch Good Closer
Vokab=Ill,Not Through Tha Whole Verse But He Had Some

Ill Got This Cus His Punches Wass Hittin Hard,Good Personals And Strukture..........Rtf.................

/V Ill-Logic............


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Oz™ 01-19-05 07:15 PM

damn......u really are a lil bitch...re-openin this shit and removin all my votes.......hoe

uppin

Oz™ 02-18-05 03:40 PM

uppin dis shit......................................

Red Stroke 03-02-05 09:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Infector Mindz
 
Upping............................................ .....................

Lyriclesolja 03-06-05 02:06 AM

Voted For: Infector Mindz

headache
good verse kid had some nice punches i was diggin here, your vocabulry was good man, i like your wordplay man one thing you need to work on his structure that about it, your had some decent personals in here i was digging it most hit hard some came weak but over all your wordplay took up for that, and punches was good man

murcinal
cool verse dawg you had some aiight punches i wasn't diggin the personals though but they was creative man for real most creative battle right here i can dig it, your vocabulary wasn't all that mostly the basics man, your structure whoa! work on that man both of you need to work on that fo sho

vote-headache
no hate one vote one win

Parallel 03-06-05 02:13 AM

Voted For: Infector Mindz

Murcina:
the stucture you had made my eyes bleed and the punches were real weak all you really had were dope multis and still that wasnt good enough trying be more creative with punches well i seen a few there was this oen dope line the branding steel line that was dope but the rest was played and weak, pz

Headache
way better stucture nice puncheslines better flow i was just feelin your punches alot more the creativty was there and shit i was just feeling the disses you gave him and the personals you used pretty nice job keep it up, no hate to anyone here pz

RTF in my battle wit Final links in the sig

*Nice* 03-18-05 12:05 PM

Voted For: Infector Mindz

Infector Mindz
got this 4sho...
Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse....9/10


MuRcInAl
l, ya structure was everywhere too
dont seperate bars like that man
gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use
Overall 6/10



no hate, just be more creative

im got this for the overrall better verse

RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever

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