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Voted For: final

final won, better imagery, approach, basically every category. Personify was cool too but I really wasn't feeling the fact that I had to go back and read the verse again once you revealed what you were talking about -_- Final also had better vocab IMO. Both of you need to stop with all the extra bullshit like bolding and centering and explaining. Write the verse and let it speak for itself. OK battle but not too hot.

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