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Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 04:47 PM.

Voted For: Unregistered

Vote= unregistered

Theirs no point in breaking this down because it was such a weak battle, ya both had weak punches n shitty flow, you both need to elevate a great deal as well, no hate. Anyway im giving to unreg coz someones gotta win. LOL

^lol at least we dont bite uppppppppppppppppppppppp

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this battle is fuckin old as vote cuntssssssssssssssss

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This was feedback posted for Unregistered
 

your rap wasnt bad...end kinda got confusing though

This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
 

polllllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss s

Voted For: Unregistered

-This is an LFS Review-

Umm yea let's GO!

Lawless

to hell-wit-this-trick... L-be-the-shit/
I'm bout to break this bitch like a elderly hip/

Wack

no named no fame.... so I might as well remove-his-print/
I got a 9 that will slap this hoe like an abusive pimp/

Wack

I grab the switchblade.... jus in case I need to slice em/
I'll shatter ya ribcage.... u know I'm untouchable like a museum items/

Wack

after I'm done.. hell spit lawless shit for 3 days/
cause he knows his flow was truly artificially made/

Wack

I got the 45 pattin' em on the back like he's un~able to belch/
Rv think you got 'imaginary friends' cause you always 'play wit yaself'/

Wack...but almost decent

Overall that verse...sucked...badly....let's GO!

Unregistered

Repping 50 in ya signature like a muthafuckin disgrace
You’ve been misplaced G-unit dot COM is this way ------>

Wack

You dumb shit, I’ll son you worse than your mom did
Your brains more empty than eminems gun clip

Wack

I’ll leave you looking small like 50 without the steroids
Ya whole crews like Michael Jackson’s children… scared boys

Wack

You’re wack as fuck so read my verse and take notes
The only ways you’ll ever get a win is no shows and hate votes

Played....HEY SOMETHING NOT WACK! wait it was

This battle is too simple plus this guys a queer
When confronted with beef he runs faster than diarrhoea

Wack

Overall: This battle was...you guessed it.........wack... Unregistered had the ONE personal so he gets the win...RETURN THE FAVOR OR I WILL NEVER LEAVE FEED ON YOUR SHIT.....EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Yo good punchlines. Sum of the better ones i've actually seen on this site. Lawless gets my vote for the whole battle.

to hell-wit-this-trick... L-be-the-shit/
I'm bout to break this bitch like a elderly hip/

no named no fame.... so I might as well remove-his-print/
I got a 9 that will slap this hoe like an abusive pimp/

I grab the switchblade.... jus in case I need to slice em/
I'll shatter ya ribcage.... u know I'm untouchable like a museum items/

after I'm done.. hell spit lawless shit for 3 days/
cause he knows his flow was truly artificially made/

I got the 45 pattin' em on the back like he's un~able to belch/
Rv think you got 'imaginary friends' cause you always 'play wit yaself'/
about a 8.5/10. So good battle man

This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
 

chhheeeeeccking pols...............................

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Started off with some decent mulites, props for that cause i dont see much of that here, but then you slacked off with them towards the end. You had aight metas and decent punchlines. Unregistered just came too simple so that's why my vote goes Lawless

Vote: Lawless (Hs)