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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
kin: Punches are Aim'd-To-Do-Harm & 'Run All Over City' like a police Chase-In-A-Car .. Only tracks u lace are Blazed-On-Ya-Arms So punches leave 'Big City Out Of Place' like Hicks Raised-On-The Farm!! (KO?) ^^DOPE OPENER...ITS KIND OF HARD 2 FOLLOW YA STRUCTURE BUT I DID DA NAME PLAYS WERE CRAZEE Ya this Newb-Is-Sick once i Spew-The-Shit & 'Hit Every City Corner' like my Crew-Be-Pimps! .. ya punches dont Move-Me-Bitch but mine 'Destroy The Big City' like day after tommorrow Movie-Clips!! ^^^^WOW....DA SECOND BAR WAS SICK Im Landing-Cuts-Demanding-Such a Commandin-Bluff while u just Rambling-Stuff! .. U prolly Planning-To-Duck cuz ill 'Quickly Put An End To Cit/Sit' like Standing-Up!! (ROFL!) ^^^^ANOTHER GOOD NAME PLAY.. Punches break ur Tooths-&-Ears & Bruise-Ya-Beard! .. Ill Have ya Crew-Get-Smeared & Punch Threw-They-Gear! Plus ill 'Flip & Shake The Big City' Like New York Snow Globe Sovenieurs!! (KO!) ^^^^LOL..YO I THOUGHT I WAS DA 1 DAT USES NAME PLAYS ALOT...DAT LAST LINE WAS SICK... big city: He couldn’t get sick wit a nasty germ That fact is ya structure crashed and burned like Mc hammers tax return ^^^I WAS FEELIN DA MULTI BUT DA HAMMER PUNCH WAS WACK Ya rhymes is shit son, its really showin in ya vowels U treat battles like washing machines, u always throwin in the towel ^^^I LIKE DIS SHIT...VERY ORIGINAL The demands’ll be final,… u and ya mans will b bridal Just like tha mage in ya sig,… your lil fantasy’s final ^^^WACK PERSONAL City comin thru, gunnin dudes, give him a hundred blues Can’t have illegitimate kids, so I’ll admit to Son’n YOU ^^NAH Listen dirt bag, I squirt mags, suffocate you with my jerk rag U aint hard just becuz it says, Triple X on ya shirt tag ^^^AGAIN YA MULTIS WERE BUT DA PUNCH WAS WEAK DAMN….After u, dog I’ve seen the worst How u gon b about kinetics when u can’t MOVE people to read ya verse ^^^GOOD PERSONAL I WOULDN'T OF GOT IT IF U AINT EXPLAIN IT okay...i gotta go with kin he was consistant thru out dis battle...even tho he had nothin but name plays he came real creative....city u were off n on fam and ya punches were real weak |
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uppin this ish , thanks for the honest feed marvjay.
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This was feedback posted for Kin*Ethic™
Kinethic you ripped this hoe
and Big City Why didnt You Checkin The battle? |
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Lmfao Thanks For The Feedback .. It Would Be Nice If You Actually Left A Vote Tho Lol .. :evilgrin: |
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end this already damn people .. this site sucks for voting ....
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This was feedback posted for Kin*Ethic™
blah blah checking polls...........................
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uppin this joint once again.............................
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
aight pretty decent battle here y'all... B.C: Pretty decent verse, the main thing i'ma fault is that you seem ta have a certain style with your flow that suites O.M's but dosent really have an effect in battles.....overall ya had some decent ideas, few nice bars with good wordplay, but ya personals an punches have ta stand out, an sorry but i cant really say ''oooh'' ta any of your lines, no hate...you know u my boy, an i dont like voting against my peoples, but i need ta get some votes on my shit lol Kin: good verse, structure is fuckin awful ........................ ....................... ....................... ....................... ^^^ each line seperated an not all bunched up, maybe you got the strucre from another site or somthin but anyway...ya had dope rhymes, good hard hittin creative punchlines that get u the win................. RTF Y'all http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186647 ^^ theres the link, hit me back |
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