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~Luciano~ 07-30-05 01:42 AM

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~Luciano~ 08-02-05 02:32 AM

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~Luciano~ 08-12-05 03:21 AM

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noname 08-17-05 10:01 PM

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

oooooooooooops....my fault man....................

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Abraxas 08-18-05 09:54 PM

This was feedback posted for (Jimmy Pocketz)
 
TROOP!
Had better verse...
fucking computer slow.. cant write nuff to vote

Dickard. 08-18-05 11:48 PM

This was feedback posted for Kein Witz
 
nice battle both ya'll but its to close to vote ..

13th. 08-29-05 10:07 AM

This was feedback posted for Kein Witz
 
checkin pollz............................................. ..

Deranged 09-05-05 04:14 PM

This was feedback posted for (Jimmy Pocketz)
 
polls....this shit been open forever...just tell strobe to close it....

~Luciano~ 09-11-05 04:18 PM

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Pzykotik~Mindz 11-12-05 12:14 PM

This was feedback posted for (Jimmy Pocketz)
 
Checkity pollz.....................................

H.D. 02-09-06 02:38 PM

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

Not very impressed that you guys couldn't come up with anything other than a cops life sucks might as well kill yourself... While police do have a high suicide rate... most do not kill them selves... Neither one of your verses really stuck the topic of a cop on patrol... T.R.O.O.P. did a better job... but it not being 1st person kinda hurt it... emotionally both of these verse were lacking... Crazy Hades' verse was rather okwardly worded and didn't flow very well...

Both T.r.O.O.P.'s piece was slightly better he carried the topic better and flowed better... there was also better imagery in his... Hades jumped around from thought to thought more with no smooth transitions..

Vote: T.R.O.O.P.

Crazy Hades 02-12-06 08:25 PM

...Yeah, cuz flow matters a whole lot in topicals.


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