Voted For: E.C


learn english, when u type you make peoples eyes go dreary,
hense your name, coz your text will always be khaoz in theory,
nice
your the illest? funny coz khaoz's wordplay is always fake,
punches are weak and being fat is the only time ur a heavyweight,
aight
ill cut up your torso and serve in restaurents for sushi dishes,
throw u in the tank so you can say you sleep wit the fishes,
nice
as i go on to murk this whore.....and you've herd this before,
i asked do u want beef? and he replied "no imma
herbivore",
nice
you got shit on lock ye only when your whacking... cause,
coz giving brain is the only time you'll be cracking jaws,
nice

overall-a good verse wit some nice punches

E.C?????? Only tyme u involved in ''EXplicit'' iz typin da : hump :
Intrested in ''basketball''?...Dumass, we all kno ''white men cant jump''*
weak
ur skillz in a slump, an wen it comes 2 da court..U n da ball got a Divorce
put u on ''skates'' & u fell off, so yuh get ''shot down'' lyke a HORSE**
nice
we on a collison corse, u can feel da force BITCH..llyke ur ''skywalker''
juz a shit talker, u stay on tephlonz dick & in our forum lyke ur a RAW Stalker
nice
i''ll juz ''pork-ya'' wita smoked ham, cuz i know how much u lyke beef
u & da ''establishment'' dont mix, lyke 2 dicks without a trick...im styll in disbelief
aight
if u culd, u'd b a rap thief, teeth markz on each on ov mah verses
last tyme sumbody said ''Yo ur SICK!''...
..................Diz dumb dick went & got a flu shot frum da Nurses
aight

overall-aight verse but the punches werent that hard and your verse lacked flow

vote-EC

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return the favor and vote on my battles..........................................

dats a damn hate vote i aint retuurnin shyt nigga, wen u wuz in raw u said i won diz battle wateva nigga uppin diz

i never seen this battle before i thought it was new battle cause ya were beffin earlier LOL

ight thats 2-1 im gettin that uva vote removed..... uppin for more

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Voted For: E.C

Khaoz Theory

E.C?????? Only tyme u involved in ''EXplicit'' iz typin da : hump :
Intrested in ''basketball''?...Dumass, we all kno ''white men cant jump''*

No..this was weak. To simple of a concept and not complex enough.

ur skillz in a slump, an wen it comes 2 da court..U n da ball got a Divorce
put u on ''skates'' & u fell off, so yuh get ''shot down'' lyke a HORSE**

Uhh, again. This was wack and dint hit hard as a punch. You needed to be more creative here and complex.

we on a collison corse, u can feel da force BITCH..llyke ur ''skywalker''
juz a shit talker, u stay on tephlonz dick & in our forum lyke ur a RAW Stalker

No. You attempted to be creative here and it didnt work out well at all. Just too basic and this didnt really hit at all as a punch what so ever.

i''ll juz ''pork-ya'' wita smoked ham, cuz i know how much u lyke beef
u & da ''establishment'' dont mix, lyke 2 dicks without a trick...im styll in disbelief

Uhh, no lol. This was just dumb. Plus, again the concepts were too basic. Need to be more complex with ya punches.

if u culd, u'd b a rap thief, teeth markz on each on ov mah verses
last tyme sumbody said ''Yo ur SICK!''...
..................Diz dumb dick went & got a flu shot frum da Nurses

Played..this was weak. Not the way you wanted to end ya verse.

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EC

learn english, when u type you make peoples eyes go dreary,
hense your name, coz your text will always be khaoz in theory,

This was OK I guess. Didnt hit all that hard but it wasnt bad either. Turned out to be an OK punch. Alright opener.

your the illest? funny coz khaoz's wordplay is always fake,
punches are weak and being fat is the only time ur a heavyweight,

No..this was played. I heard that shit a million times.

ill cut up your torso and serve in restaurents for sushi dishes,
throw u in the tank so you can say you sleep wit the fishes,

Again, played. This has been said many times. Should have came more original here.

as i go on to murk this whore.....and you've herd this before,
i asked do u want beef? and he replied "no imma herbivore",

..Lol this was funny but didnt really hit hard. Pretty average.

you got shit on lock ye only when your whacking... cause,
coz giving brain is the only time you'll be cracking jaws,

LOL! This was OK. Funny. Alright finisher.

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EC took this. Neither came all that dope but his lines that were alright killed Khaoz's weak/played lines. Both of you need to be a little more creative and more original. Work on that and elevate. Stay up.

Vote- EC

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

learn english, when u type you make peoples eyes go dreary,
hense your name, coz your text will always be khaoz in theory,
^^^OK.......kinda basic nameplay though
your the illest? funny coz khaoz's wordplay is always fake,
punches are weak and being fat is the only time ur a heavyweight,
^^^NO!!!........
ill cut up your torso and serve in restaurents for sushi dishes,
throw u in the tank so you can say you sleep wit the fishes,
^^^BAsic and lame...not a punch
as i go on to murk this whore.....and you've herd this before,
i asked do u want beef? and he replied "no imma herbivore",
^^OK I guess...........
you got shit on lock ye only when your whacking... cause,
coz giving brain is the only time you'll be cracking jaws,
^^^NO....

U had some really lame punches.First bar was just a basic nameplay.That heavyweight line was basic too.It was just as uncreative as uncreative gets.There was a whole bar about sushi/sleep fishes that didn't diss.Herbivore line was uncreative and weak.

E.C?????? Only tyme u involved in ''EXplicit'' iz typin da : hump :
Intrested in ''basketball''?...Dumass, we all kno ''white men cant jump''*
^^^This was stupuid...there's white guys in NBA
ur skillz in a slump, an wen it comes 2 da court..U n da ball got a Divorce
put u on ''skates'' & u fell off, so yuh get ''shot down'' lyke a HORSE**
^^well....OK...creative
we on a collison corse, u can feel da force BITCH..llyke ur ''skywalker''
juz a shit talker, u stay on tephlonz dick & in our forum lyke ur a RAW Stalker
^^^Nice......
i''ll juz ''pork-ya'' wita smoked ham, cuz i know how much u lyke beef
u & da ''establishment'' dont mix, lyke 2 dicks without a trick...im styll in disbelief
^^^OK........
if u culd, u'd b a rap thief, teeth markz on each on ov mah verses
last tyme sumbody said ''Yo ur SICK!''...
..................Diz dumb dick went & got a flu shot frum da Nurses
^^OK..

Not all that hard.Just OK.Need some more personals like ripping on name ans shit.Stop with the ('').E.C had better flow but he just lacked punches.U showed signs of creativity too with the skateboarding thing..

Vote-Khaoz theory


Vote removed.. K-trini's alias, who had already voted
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uppin this.............................................. ...

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

learn english, when u type you make peoples eyes go dreary,
hense your name, coz your text will always be khaoz in theory,
OK...
your the illest? funny coz khaoz's wordplay is always fake,
punches are weak and being fat is the only time ur a heavyweight,
UM...NOT REALLY
ill cut up your torso and serve in restaurents for sushi dishes,
throw u in the tank so you can say you sleep wit the fishes,
UM..NOT REALLY
as i go on to murk this whore.....and you've herd this before,
i asked do u want beef? and he replied "no imma herbivore",
OK I SEE YOU
you got shit on lock ye only when your whacking... cause,
coz giving brain is the only time you'll be cracking jaws,
OK


BREAKDOWN-VERSE COULD HAVE BEEN A LOT BETTER...SOME BARS WERE OK THEN SOME BARS WERE SHITTIER THEN A DAWGS TONGUE...YOU SHOULD TRY A LIL MORE COMPLEXITY IN YOUR VERSES TO SPICE IT UP...AND PUT MORE THOUGHT INTO YOUR LINES



E.C?????? Only tyme u involved in ''EXplicit'' iz typin da : hump :
Intrested in ''basketball''?...Dumass, we all kno ''white men cant jump''*
HAHA...OK
ur skillz in a slump, an wen it comes 2 da court..U n da ball got a Divorce
put u on ''skates'' & u fell off, so yuh get ''shot down'' lyke a HORSE**
OK WIT EXPLANATION
we on a collison corse, u can feel da force BITCH..llyke ur ''skywalker''
juz a shit talker, u stay on tephlonz dick & in our forum lyke ur a RAW Stalker
OK
i''ll juz ''pork-ya'' wita smoked ham, cuz i know how much u lyke beef
u & da ''establishment'' dont mix, lyke 2 dicks without a trick...im styll in disbelief
EHHH...
if u culd, u'd b a rap thief, teeth markz on each on ov mah verses
last tyme sumbody said ''Yo ur SICK!''...
..................Diz dumb dick went & got a flu shot frum da Nurses
HAHA OK


BREAKDOWN-PRETTY GOOD VERSE..WASN'T NOTHING THAT I WAS OUT OF MY SEAT FOR BUT NICE ENUFF TO BEAT THIS GUY...I LIKE DAT NURSES LINE...

dang look at diz battle wid da voters, ok 3-2 uppin uppin & awaaaay

lol its 2-2 that vote is k-trini n is a hate vote....

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