Voted For: NaRc-UzI

narc uzi:
This bitch is not gifted if he was crack not even a crack whore would be addicted
Lets be serious he has a lesser chance of beating me than a landlord getting evicted
^^^GOOD OPENER...I WAS FEELIN DA LIL MULTI AND DA PUNCH WAS COOL
Khaoz must be an Armless father cause he could never really seem to hold His Own
In his profile it says that Living Legends are his crew but he says that RAW is his home
^^LOL...GOOD PERSONAL
Homie im able to bring alot to the table while spitting fire like an erupting volcano
Khaoz is not a smart ass cuz he give alot of brain but he also demands alot of anul
^^^LMAOOOOOOOOO
Batteling me whats the purpose the only way youll win is if god switched the verses
Your like a gothic person praying in churches cause like his prayers you are worthless
^^^NAH
You dont have to fear me but when i come to RAWs forum and chat you better take it EASY
I would smack your ass if u come near me cause you bringing KHAOZ homie is just a THEROY
^^^EASY & THEORY DONT YHME FAM...DAT WAS FORCED

khaoz theory:
Dawg beatz on newbs, rec full ov ''smoking herbs'' lyke bob Marley
N.U iz gangsta?...he aint never ''ridin'' lyke wheelchair patients on a Harley
^^^LOL STEP YA RAP GAME UP...DIS WAS MADD WACK
yuh flowz cant harm-me, if u try ''droppin bombs''..i'll find a shelter
bitch nigga..........ya raps iz stinkin!....even blind men aint ''felt-ya''
^^^LOL NO....U TRYIN 2 HARD
nobody smelt-ya, ur rhymes iz slept on like a dirty matress
u can call me director da way i ''take shots'' @ diz actor
^^^MATRESS & ACTOR DONT RYHME....
i'll subtract-ya metahpours, brake 'em into two'z, u LOSE-G
Got diz Narc wannabe woozy when i clap with the UZI
^^^WHUST UP WITH YA VOCAB FAM...I KNOW ALL ABOUT SLANG BUT U TALKIN RETARDED
u need alot more than ur skill 2 move-me, I'm built lyke a lyrical rock
u'd think diz lame rhymerz a BIRD....Cuz ov da way he always gettin ''Mocked''
^^ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ....WHEN U GON SPIT A HOT LINE??
i'm prepeared for WAR, Got da real fam behind me, Leave u SORE
check ur profile..u love us so damn much, U STILL THINK UR REPPIN RAW!
^^^HE SAID A RAW LINE IN DA PROFILE LINE ALREADY..ITS PLAYED
Fuck diz i'ma go out Hardcore, while narc stayz catchin Nutz!
C'mon dawg..
Why u mad 4?...It aint my fault u aint RAW Enuff 2 avoid da cutz!
^^^C'MON DAWG & CUTZ DONT RYHME
lyrical slut, u step 2 any talent & ''back down'' quicker than Pole Dancers
if u ever got signed....
.........u'd prolly blow it all, & buy ghost writers wit ur advances
^^^BEST LINE U SPIT....LOL

NARC TAKES DIS EASILY...KHAOZ HAD TROUBLE MAKIN HIS WORDS RYHME...AND EVERYTHING U SAYIN AINT MAKIN NO SENSE OR ITS REAL WACK...NO IM NOT HATIN IM JUST SPEAKIN DA TRUTH

oh yeah and return da favor ya'll........

Vote//KhAoZ ThEoRy

both of you need to elevate alot. the structure was offset so it made the read a little harder and the flow blah. but overall the vocab was alright. the punches on both sides were decent. but i thought kt's made more sense neither of them hit as hard as they prolly should of .. i suggest you learn how ot set it up. but otherwise eh battle both of you need some work..

This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
 

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

Close battle here for real.

Flow-Both got tight flow here.But I think Khoaz had his better.Narc got better structure though.Khaoz...I don't like all those dots,bad spelling,and this(").If you had enough confidence in your verse...you wuldn't need that.

Punches-Narc.While Khaoz had flow..he really lacked punches.Khaoz had some filler in his verse too while Narc was on-point.

Personals-Narc.Both had the same type of personals about RAw and shit.But I liked Narc's nameplay.

Multis-Both try to elevate here.You guys had a couple here and there...but nothing special.That one syllable rhyming has went out of style in the days of Eric B. and Rakim.

Originality-Khaoz had some played lines about strippers and wheelchairs and stuff

Tight battle

Vote-Narc(vote in link below)

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

the battle was good. it was a close battle, but it wasn't hard to pick my man narc as da winner.

Punchlines- both were satisfactory, but narc won that battle.

Flow- Narc again, Khoaz joint was to hard to follow while Narc joint was well written for the viewers.

Tips- none, any dude on here battlin don't need no tips, just come hard everytime.

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

Dawg beatz on newbs, rec full ov ''smoking herbs'' lyke bob Marley
N.U iz gangsta?...he aint never ''ridin'' lyke wheelchair patients on a Harley
a played concept but u couldve worded it better
yuh flowz cant harm-me, if u try ''droppin bombs''..i'll find a shelter
bitch nigga..........ya raps iz stinkin!....even blind men aint ''felt-ya''
now this is played =\...gotta start bringin that fire man
nobody smelt-ya, ur rhymes iz slept on like a dirty matress
u can call me director da way i ''take shots'' @ diz actor
again not bad...but wording still needs work!
i'll subtract-ya metahpours, brake 'em into two'z, u LOSE-G
Got diz Narc wannabe woozy when i clap with the UZI
good at all
u need alot more than ur skill 2 move-me, I'm built lyke a lyrical rock
u'd think diz lame rhymerz a BIRD....Cuz ov da way he always gettin ''Mocked''
i liked it
i'm prepeared for WAR, Got da real fam behind me, Leave u SORE
check ur profile..u love us so damn much, U STILL THINK UR REPPIN RAW!
okay personal..not worded well though
Fuck diz i'ma go out Hardcore, while narc stayz catchin Nutz!
C'mon dawg..
Why u mad 4?...It aint my fault u aint RAW Enuff 2 avoid da cutz!
self glorifying..not good
lyrical slut, u step 2 any talent & ''back down'' quicker than Pole Dancers
if u ever got signed....
.........u'd prolly blow it all, & buy ghost writers wit ur advances!
noooo. bad closer man

Kaoz - Your verse wasnt horrible like some of the verses in FL. You had some cool concepts but you need to work on wording them better. A couple of yor punches hit hard and that got you some points. Flow was alright, a little stretched sometimes though. So keep working on it, not a bad verse.

This bitch is not gifted if he was crack not even a crack whore would be addicted
Lets be serious he has a lesser chance of beating me than a landlord getting evicted
not a bad meta. good line
Khaoz must be an Armless father cause he could never really seem to hold His Own
In his profile it says that Living Legends are his crew but he says that RAW is his home
not a punch...t'was a statement!
Homie im able to bring alot to the table while spitting fire like an erupting volcano
Khaoz is not a smart ass cuz he give alot of brain but he also demands alot of anul
lol wordplay was nice. impressed me here
Batteling me whats the purpose the only way youll win is if god switched the verses
Your like a gothic person praying in churches cause like his prayers you are worthless
na, bad metaphore.
You dont have to fear me but when i come to RAWs forum and chat you better take it EASY
I would smack your ass if u come near me cause you bringing KHAOZ homie is just a THEROY
coo nameplay. original in my eyes

Narc - You had a semi-consistant verse here. That smart ass wordplay impressed me. You had some nice punches. Flow was good. I thought you came just a tad bit harder then Kaoz in this one. An evenly matched battle. Good job guys. Keep battling and keep getting better!!

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