RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=63)
-   -   Crazy Hades vs Natural killa (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212726)

rexless 11-26-05 06:56 PM

Voted For: Crazy Hades

why spit dope?..when it don't take much to have u obliberated 'n bruised
I mean damn,ya weak.....Fluffy is more intimadting than you!!
u trying to put lines together when ya talent is too mini to bond
just listen to your own audio..wat non-nerd rap 'bout jimmy nuetron?
Crazy Hades whole verse..?..yea..something about a belt at my back*
he collabed with -UNF-......as if he needed more help at being whack
your shit's annoying to bee called nice and it's got our ears buzzin through
u wuz a daemon keyin wits..but now even u realize it wuzn't true(kein witz)
like a priests converting to atheism...you simply lose your graces
cuz really..your skills is slacking worse than loose shoelaces


i think you had a good flow with some good rhyme i mean your punches was good and your personal's in there was ok a real good verse in my eyes





K-Trini's other side is still ugly...just makes his mom beating him another ugly feature..*
Death is the price for your lameness, but you probably can't afford that either.
This will be too fucking easy man...dude, I'll just finish you, soon or just now,
You're over others and eye.. only when we talk about Trinidads girls' unibrows.
What the fuck at this bitch running his gums...bitch is only stuck to my shoe..
Probably don't have new pics...If I was you, I'd have stopped a long time ago too.
Trini, you're fucking greedy...lazy...haven't done shit lately except throw fits,
only time your dumbass is inclined to do something, is when raised by fork lifts.


And the finisher...

You must have our logo on your turban cause RV's always on your head...
K-Trini's a needle in a haystack..wait, that's just another thing in his bed.


i think you had a good flow and some good rhymes to i think you had more focus in each line and bar i thought you hit harder with punches and i thought you took this battle

my vote: crazy head

Pzykotik~Mindz 11-26-05 08:26 PM

Voted For: Crazy Hades

This Was An Ok Battle....I Think In The Most Part Hades Got This.....I Dont Think Having A Seprate Place For Ur Closer Is Neccasary But Wateva......Punches Were Kind Weak........But Both Ur Flo Was Ok.....And Personalz Were To Basic.....

How Do U Use Ur Rapper?

SINISTER 11-26-05 08:37 PM

This was feedback posted for Crazy Hades
 
Checkin pollz............................................. ..............

noname 12-01-05 04:18 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 12-02-05 08:40 AM

uppin.............................................

noname 12-03-05 01:38 PM

Damn..........this needs to get closed............

Crazy Hades 12-03-05 02:49 PM

..................................................

Young_law 12-05-05 03:06 PM

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 
u gay lol

noname 12-08-05 01:11 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 12-09-05 05:18 PM

uppin.............................................

Sobe. 12-09-05 08:57 PM

Voted For: Natural killa

Natural killa had some pretty decent lines.. that kein witz one was ok, along with some of thos personals.. his weak bars were the opener and closer. Overall, his verse was solid.

crazy hades verse was too statementish IMO.. his closer was the best one.. and the personal in the opener he tried was too forced

v/ natural killa

Crazy Hades 12-09-05 09:11 PM

...too...forced...k. I swear, some voters are stupid.

uppin.

Sobe. 12-09-05 09:29 PM

Fuck you

i meant too forced because you tried to give 2 personals in one line and it was just gay. your saying that since his mom beats him, he makes a thumbsup face.

happy now, fuckface?

King Solo 12-10-05 11:28 AM

Voted For: Natural killa

why spit dope?..when it don't take much to have u obliterated 'n bruised
I mean damn,ya weak.....Fluffy is more intimadting than you!!
kind of a personal, not strong though..
u trying to put lines together when ya talent is too mini to bond
just listen to your own audio..wat non-nerd rap 'bout jimmy nuetron?
Lol, jimmy neutron...good shit..
Crazy Hades whole verse..?..yea..something about a belt at my back*
he collabed with -UNF-......as if he needed more help at being whack
played, real weak..
your shit's annoying to bee called nice and it's got our ears buzzin through
u wuz a daemon keyin wits..but now even u realize it wuzn't true(kein witz)
ok nameplays, cud've been better..
like a priests converting to atheism...you simply lose your graces
cuz really..your skills is slacking worse than loose shoelaces
ok wordplay, good closer..

Wow, you really sucked in this battle NK. You brought some fucked up weak lines that are far below the level I've seen you perform at. The closer was aight, ok wordplay and you had like one decent personal with the nameplays. The Fluffy personal was wack as hell, and the UNF line was gay as fuck to, real played and basic. Overall, I think you thought Hades was topical so he would be wack at text and so you just dropped some half-assed bullshit. OVERALL: 5/10



K-Trini's other side is still ugly...just makes his mom beating him another ugly feature..*
Death is the price for your lameness, but you probably can't afford that either.
ok opener, personal to so yeah, good..
This will be too fucking easy man...dude, I'll just finish you, soon or just now,
You're over others and eye.. only when we talk about Trinidads girls' unibrows.
Lol, this was a decent line..
What the fuck at this bitch running his gums...bitch is only stuck to my shoe..
Probably don't have new pics...If I was you, I'd have stopped a long time ago too.
Huh, this is a statement really, weak..
Trini, you're fucking greedy...lazy...haven't done shit lately except throw fits,
only time your dumbass is inclined to do something, is when raised by fork lifts.
ok, this was more gayer than the previous bar..
You must have our logo on your turban cause RV's always on your head...
K-Trini's a needle in a haystack..wait, that's just another thing in his bed.
i get the joke, not funny though..

Wow, you sucked ass to here, I think you should stick to topicals or work on your text and elevate. You started strong with a decent opener and that funny bar that followed. Everything after that was just basic and retarded though, especially the closer....I get the joke you were shooting for but it was weak and not funny, also the crappy wording of it didn't help much either. OVERALL: 4.5/10


Right, at first look I saw NK's verse and thought it was total shit really, no hate that's just how I saw it and I know you can do better. I thought he was going to lose but NO, Crazy Hades came with an even worse verse with some retarded fucking lines that had no affect at all and that is why he loses this battle. I get why it is so close because both came gay as fuck, but in the end NK snatches this one.

V/ - NK

RTF fucka on either my battle against Daubs, or my battle against PunchLine :)


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:48 PM.