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Voted For: Natural killa


Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
^^weak
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
^^^ight
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
^^^Weak
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
^^^Ight
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"...
^^good closer


just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
^^^Good personal in the opener
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
^^^lol good
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
^^^Good personal
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
^^^ight
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse
^^^good closer

V/nK.....this was an ight battle....but g u camee unconsistent in ur punchs an personals...no hate....nk u came wit some good witty fresh punchs an good wordplay u get my vote V/nk
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Damn battle of the killas ...

I vote for Killa but im not gunna vote im just checking the polls and uppin this for you guys...

Nice battle 2 both NK just had more personals... even though his opener was played like fuck

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Natural Killa
Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
Bad punch.
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
Oreo wasn't that bad, punch concept was blah.
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
Not feeling this punch.
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
No punch.
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse
Punch was blah.

Your punches aren't that strong in this verse. Your concepts are the thing that holds you back mostly. You base them after who he loses to, and just overall played concepts.

GKillaz05
Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
No real punch.
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
Haha, this made me smile. Concept is played, but the punch is ok.
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
Not feeling this punch.
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
Not feeling this punch. Concept is weak. I remember Furby, God I hated those things.
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"...
Not feeling this punch either.

Overall, you only had 1 punch that kinda connected. You need to keep elevating, and re word your punches so they connect better. Work on better concepts too.
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Overall both of you need to work on your concepts, because without a good concept, the punch will suck no matter what. I vote for GKillaz for that one punch. Cuz they went back and forth on punches, but GK had one punch that was ok.

v- GKillaz05

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