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You suck, i dont care how all the big heads in hip hop write, its not how you write, and yes you dumb shit you are being fake, you said before ' I write using big words like jay-z", right there your already jocking him and any other name you mentioned, so just stfu, you suck end of topic, closing statement
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^happy 1000th post.
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What you're doing is copying what he's saying by trying to make your own personal style.
I would have helped you if you had come to me because I've been rapping since you were listening to it, and I just turned 17. I have 6 years on me already and I make music. Good luck on being yourself in a group of millions of others that are rapping trying to be theirselves. |
wat i meant by lyrical mineral... a mineral is a vitamin... which u need vitamins to live... and im sure everyone listens to music and would be lost with out it... so im saying that u need me to survive... get it?
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You'd be one less person in the world before you'd be a loss to music.
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dude its a fucking EXPRESSION. STOP TAKIN IT LITERALLY AND LIKE IM ALREADY TOP OF THE GAME... jesus fucking christ.
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Yeah, it's called slant rhyming... But mineral/potential is still a bad rhyme. The flow in the last few bars was basically non-existent. A few rhymes here and there doesn't mean it flows. It's good that you think that way, but personally I don't think you can pull off having a unique style at the level you're at. You need to learn the rules, then you can break them skillfully. |
derek heres a tip.
if u have to give a lengthy explanation for one of ur lines. ur better of not using it. cuz if u cant get to ur point in ur lines. then ur point just isnt worth getting to ya dig? and using big words=shit...making sense and opening up peoples ears=goldmine. dont just use big words becuz other people do... if u want ur own style, u gotta find wut ur good at...u gotta find how u can express ur self with music and make sense. u cant just use big words and be like....yo hocus pocus my rhymes be like supercalafragalisticexpaladocious |
do u guys understand wat i meant by lyrical mineral now?
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Call me your royal highness, if I ever come light, you're the lightest,
My words so fucking BIG they had to shorten the words used to describe it |
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Yeah man your shits hard as a rock we get it we get it. |
i asked if u understand it... ok w.e ima start my 3rd verse and take ur advice
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lol 2v's such a fucking dickhead..
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Since this thread has become somewhat of a cypher -_- lol..
ya not lifting ya game bitch, stop hitting the same tip, must be constipated yo, cause no kidding you aint shit.. ya flows skittled 'n basic, you're a little bit gay kid. I'd give you the mic but this lyrical mineral's brittle 'n breaks quick, Unique? you're a ghost writing phantom child, just a sucker with ya flow biting random styles, Kid, you must be sick, cause damn you don't sound good, you're wack, your raps sadder than an emo's outlook, son my tone is lethal, lax, bro ya flow is fecal.. Your spit's stink up the streets like they were homeless people, |
and aphil is secretly madly in love with me.
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