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j_da_monsta 09-19-04 12:59 PM

Quote:
i beat my dick and bust up in your eye so you can see me cumming/


Stealing DMX's lines......only makes you a fuckin fool//
See your ignorance.......you "bite" harder than a pittbull//

Just warming up.

flow2crazy 09-19-04 01:43 PM

Only time your a "monster" is when your eating "cookies"~
All the emcees you beat were just some rookies~

Turnheads 09-19-04 02:36 PM

^
"Used garbage", like 'soiled diapers', ur shit wont make noise like 'oil'd pipers'
speak rhymes backwords like yoda, "starve u don't" cause u bite off 'spoiled writers'

Kawn Flixx 09-19-04 06:27 PM

ok this is to Turnheads:

you go false confidence,you let your skills go stray
you do turnheads, but there only turning away

:laugh:

any good?
crit please

Turnheads 09-19-04 06:48 PM

^
hahah..u got jokes..

"Proverse"
Never seen'PROfession in ya whole VERSE'damn it thats somethin 'to lie about'
Ur 'sig looks like cumstains',i guess i know what else besides rappin 'u tried out'

Kawn Flixx 09-19-04 06:58 PM

ha it do look ike a cum stain :laugh:

to TurnHeads:

your punchlines don't connect,they barely even hitstrait
be original nigga your names from a AND1 mxtape

ha
theres a ballplaya named turnheas :laugh:

crit next

shake-spear 09-20-04 12:23 AM

ya punches wont hit-me "sugar coated" like ya siggy/
and if proverses.::Rap Is Life::.his life must be shitty/

MsBoOtYpHaT4U69 09-21-04 10:56 AM

Mutha fuckas I'm back 2 spit a note of relief/
ya rhymes are more done than da Jay and Nas beef

Dirty Nigga 09-21-04 11:00 AM

Had A Sexual Relationship Wit Ya Mom n It Ended In ''S.T.D'z''..
Ya Rhymes Wouldnt ''Entertain The Black'' If U Was A ''Reg'' On 'B.E.T'

eph 09-23-04 01:15 AM

mama jokes have no affect, snap out of that 60's minute.
thinks hes fly, only pussy youve got also had the word tipsy in it.

Yvonne 09-23-04 11:33 AM

the only time u abuse is when the mic's put down ur throat (abuse)
u'ld be a head if u write..cos nb wanna hear a goat(write..opposite of verbal)

.Fatal Lyricist. 09-23-04 11:45 AM

i'll spit sum shyt lata

eXpLiCiT CoNtEnT 09-23-04 11:49 AM

ill be a "flame spitta" ill be banned "fo' bein too sick"
the only way you get votes is to be dick rydin "dicks"

cordless 09-23-04 02:22 PM

flow 2 crazy-
im busy like crosstown traffic and my name is jimi hendrix
run you so hard - you couldnt finish a sentence

thefranchise 09-23-04 04:03 PM

niggas fuck wit me and ill hit u wit the clip//
leave u niggas smaller than a chinese niggas dick//

Kawn Flixx 09-23-04 06:50 PM

^
yo that's mostly just a filler though

use some wordplay to make it better iight?

heres mine niggas:

you're not a "first round pick" you chosen dead last
you don't have "flow",you barely attempt even a "draft" :laugh:


get it nigga?

crit this please

peace

ill bing aka U.G 09-23-04 11:09 PM

oo thats iight check this

i slay emcee's more then blade slays vampires//
got you girl on my dick more then a baby on a pasaphire//

("i dont no if i spelled that right its the thing baby sucks on")

Pro. 09-25-04 07:21 PM

shit theirs no debate..with a record like Oh!! an 8//
Oh!!just wait.........................no need for a rhyme//
why?....cuz all he gonna do is recite an bite mine!!//
at night he's lookin for a gay plumber ta lay a pipe line//
he just lookin 4 tha right sign...leanin ta tha left //
every time he speaks he got Dick...beamin on his breath!!

flow2crazy 09-25-04 09:07 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by cordless
flow 2 crazy-
im busy like crosstown traffic and my name is jimi hendrix
run you so hard - you couldnt finish a sentence


Did i diss you or are you just jealous of my style~
Cuz your shit stinks like ol' dirty clothes in a pile~
^^no for real though u just dissed me outta the blue

The best 'chord' i heard outta u had 'less' sound~
The type where your words are nowhere to be found~

eph 09-26-04 04:33 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ProVerse
to TurnHeads:

your punchlines don't connect,they barely even hitstrait
be original nigga your names from a AND1 mxtape


diss to Proverse:
"im sick of this fagget".

ya droppin wack lines, maybe ILL cause ya spittin the flew.
dunk yo head in pussy, so ya ripe...n skip to my loo.

Pro. 09-27-04 10:02 PM

Im just lookin at all these Rats around me..//
jus peep the words...he soft like a cat wrapped in downy//
see all these weak acts surround me..I must be exubirant//
my flows so pimpin...Ill have ur broad ride my dick an use my spit for a lubricant!!!


(i might've not spelled sum wurds rite,SO!!hah!!)

ella 09-28-04 07:42 PM

no punches targetted verbal, ya cant nail a diss.
how you expect to uphold ya 3-0 record, when ya failed at this.

Terumoto 09-29-04 05:32 AM

Hmm... this was a rough decision, but finally i decided to leave ya mucked n' stricken..
I was scared a ya.. But how you gon bring beef, ma... when ya just a chicken


iono... im sorry.. -_-

get on aim one time if ur still down for that collab

FataL AkshunZ 09-29-04 06:38 AM

niggas no i dont need a weed stack nutted in ya gurl eye so it's lazy like tmacs

Terumoto 09-29-04 06:41 AM


man i dont need to drop a punch to prove youre as wack as you are..
ya did it yaself.. TEXT and you still could make more than half of a bar

NewKid 09-29-04 11:41 AM

Once I Sitck Tha Pipe N Tha Chick She Gonna B Wifen Tha Dick..
Wiin Tha Beef Out I Knock Ya Teeth Out So U Cant B Bitin Ya Shit

$Rich.P$ 10-01-04 10:39 PM

I Already Hit Your Mans, Talk Shit You Can Get It Next/
Leave You Redman Like, You Was Hangin Wit Mef/

Platinum 10-01-04 10:44 PM

blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat
blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat blat

...Vela... 10-01-04 11:08 PM

i make you go blat
when i bust out my mack

Yvonne 10-02-04 09:55 AM

you still wouldnt be a man in a shiny suite if you were from rocc-a-fela
cos with the 29 dots dat ruin ya skill's look..u'ld only bling in wack-a-vela

^^do i have to xplain that the 29 dots = his posts + the dots in his name?...

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Ambient 10-02-04 10:08 AM

Performing Wack Punches For RV Money ... This Fights Bin Fixed
Must Be "Wonders" At Kids Birthdays .. Performin Silly Party Tricks

D-Crisis 10-03-04 06:19 PM

i aint no 50 cent, so dont call me skipper
but da way i bang hoes, u can call me da ripper.
my lyrics bring so much heat, niggaz pull fire alarm
and arsonal is on fire, so i neva fucking disarm

Tolerant Level 10-03-04 07:09 PM

be torturing bitches like Chinese wispers
i got two fist... one for each of yah Siemese sisters

Colobus 10-04-04 06:20 AM

My rhymes affect you and I can spit all day.
My raps turn you into a sissy like Craigs cousin Day-Day.

distilled 10-04-04 02:40 PM

This fat ass colosus got his name a letter wrong,
29 years old, tryna elevate, oyour time is way gone.

eph 10-04-04 04:36 PM

ya chance to survive slims 1/5th, ya safe until 5. (5/5)
unscrambled ya name to find ya not my target. but ya still died. ( di - still - ed )

Colobus 10-05-04 05:15 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by distilled
This fat ass colosus got his name a letter wrong,
29 years old, tryna elevate, oyour time is way gone.


Didn't spell it wrong it's Colobus
It's a species of Monkey as if you don't know this.
Look beyond borders, this is a unique name.
Not some common shit everyone reuses in the rap game.

MsBoOtYpHaT4U69 10-05-04 09:19 PM

Lil mama got some thing dat will leave niggas unable 2 speak
my bullets like puzzi, leave u wit a hole dat leaks

John Gotti 10-08-04 09:31 AM

To the bitches that like to run-they-mouth-
My right & left hand reesond when I pull the gun-way-out=

Bust shots at em & break Escalades down like melting icecapades-
Yeah I'm young & yeah I raid and chestize grown niggihz analyzin-they-afraid=

John Gotti 10-08-04 09:32 AM

To the bitches that like to run-they-mouth-
My right & left hand reesond when I pull the gun-way-out=

Bust shots at em & break Escalades down like melting icecapades-
Yeah I'm young & yeah I raid and chestize grown niggihz analyzin-they-afraid=


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