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Logic The Goonie 11-30-04 02:50 AM

HAHAHAHAHAHA.

No.

Triple_N 11-30-04 02:55 AM

ah'ight son..gimme some real feed on it

this was my victoious verse against Mike Hawk....

Your a fake thug be real...there's no chance in hell of u gettin a deal
Thats why he claps for his own posts in avatar cuz no one else will
Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"
Ya team called "brain matter" got weak "batters" cuz its poorly funded
U boast their elite but stats don't lie...ya rec suggets their below .500
Your constantly sayin' the name Tha Q even more than he himself do
So if he stays on the tip of your tongue what does that say about you?
You've got a better homo radar than any faggot alive on any given day
Cuz construction of ya being's like ya famous LL sayin.."every thread is gay"
Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch
.....Mike Hawk's a scientific marvel that can amass any man great wealth
Cuz he's the world's 1st A sexual human...in every battle he fucks himself
He views RV the way immigrants view the U.S......like its paved with gold
Its his lil slice of heaven cuz this is only place on earth his dick gets rode

Ancel 11-30-04 02:59 AM

anthing against mike hawk will win

lmao

Logic The Goonie 11-30-04 03:04 AM

Your a fake thug be real...there's no chance in hell of u gettin a deal
Thats why he claps for his own posts in avatar cuz no one else will
word
Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"
no
Ya team called "brain matter" got weak "batters" cuz its poorly funded
U boast their elite but stats don't lie...ya rec suggets their below .500
wooord
Your constantly sayin' the name Tha Q even more than he himself do
So if he stays on the tip of your tongue what does that say about you?
damn...concept stealer..but its dope
You've got a better homo radar than any faggot alive on any given day
Cuz construction of ya being's like ya famous LL sayin.."every thread is gay"
no
Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch
noooooooooo
.....Mike Hawk's a scientific marvel that can amass any man great wealth
Cuz he's the world's 1st A sexual human...in every battle he fucks himself
dope.....but you tried to hard to have good structure, wtf?
He views RV the way immigrants view the U.S......like its paved with gold
Its his lil slice of heaven cuz this is only place on earth his dick gets rode
get deeper for dopeness...this way=whack

You gotta stop trying so hard to have good structure. Try having relevant set-up's. Look at more supa-dupa-vet battles and find out whats played.

After that you will be unstoppable.

And BTW it's funny to give tips to someone who KO'd me =/

Ancel 11-30-04 03:07 AM

Your a fake thug be real...there's no chance in hell of u gettin a deal
Thats why he claps for his own posts in avatar cuz no one else will
not bad i liked the personal about the avy... 7/10
Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"
not bad okay wordplay 7.3/10
Ya team called "brain matter" got weak "batters" cuz its poorly funded
U boast their elite but stats don't lie...ya rec suggets their below .500
hahah funny personal and okay multi...7.5/10
Your constantly sayin' the name Tha Q even more than he himself do
So if he stays on the tip of your tongue what does that say about you?
OMG this had me cracking up...9/10
You've got a better homo radar than any faggot alive on any given day
Cuz construction of ya being's like ya famous LL sayin.."every thread is gay"
eh not that good 5/10
Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch
OMG anotha killa 9/10
.....Mike Hawk's a scientific marvel that can amass any man great wealth
Cuz he's the world's 1st A sexual human...in every battle he fucks himself
eh coulda been a good line but the set up wasnt great 6/10
He views RV the way immigrants view the U.S......like its paved with gold
Its his lil slice of heaven cuz this is only place on earth his dick gets rode
not a bad finisher8/10

all in all i would say not a bad verse... keep dropin shit man

Ancel 11-30-04 03:09 AM

soc you hoe....

Logic The Goonie 11-30-04 03:13 AM

I'm sorry I don't dr Triple. -_-

Logic The Goonie 11-30-04 03:14 AM

And BTW this is my thread.

NOT yours.

So don't judge in here.

Ancel 11-30-04 03:38 AM

umm i never said anyone DR's in here

but you used to DR me back in the day:thumbup:

when i ghosted for you

Ancel 11-30-04 03:39 AM

You hoe cake... I rule you

Logic The Goonie 11-30-04 03:44 AM

You ghosted for me?
LMFAO

Ancel 11-30-04 03:45 AM

yes i did twice

Logic The Goonie 11-30-04 03:53 AM

You killin me kid.
You never had anything to do with my verses.
Please don't try and score brownie points and start beef.
We're in the same crew on RB after all.
=/

Ancel 11-30-04 04:01 AM

oh yeah thats right... but that is RB this is RV lol

and i did... even if you didnt know it

YuNG TiLT 11-30-04 03:27 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
With a record that's as bad as Shaq's freethrow sheet....
Is that why u hide it now, kause u know you're weak??....
not a punch
Ima keep baggin on your record kause your rhyming is cheap....
When this battle is over, they'll find your remains in a garbage heap....
no....look into the concept you had in the set up ;)
Around my way i'm considered a heat champ....
Kause my flows light up blocks like street lamps....
never do self glorification....boooooooo!
You can't ground my supersonic even if you started trying....
You betta go somewheres else wit them EBAY rhymes u buyin....
almost a good concept needs better wording
Toxic or toxin, panic your logic wit bare knuckle boxin....
Combinin punches, kicks, & elbows jus to add extra props in....
i like for some reason

You gotta look into what a punch is then you can start elevating cuz I see potential.


thanks mayne, im always open for new concepts and suggestions

Ancel 11-30-04 03:41 PM

^^wordizzle nizzle

~Luciano~ 11-30-04 04:34 PM

*Pisses on this whole forum*

and mike u didnt win cuz revokes vote is gettin Dq

Blah comin back bitches

headgames 11-30-04 05:05 PM

Ok so anyways, I was bored, I took out the 4 lines from my battle ya didn't like, and keyed up 4 others, what do you think now???

Troop rocks women's braclets, he's a homosexual for sure
Rv's first ever transvestite, so I guess he really is a troop'her'!
Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy
*troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money!
Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling
he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and
...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading!
Troops got a slow brain, what's up with only 8 lines?
Guess the "**" around his name represent the quality of his rhymes!

Aight, keystyle rate ho

Pop Lotty 11-30-04 05:17 PM

Troop rocks women's braclets, he's a homosexual for sure
Rv's first ever transvestite, so I guess he really is a troop'her'!
forced to death..wack
Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy
*troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money!
lol
Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling
he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and
...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading!
lmao...type stretched though
Troops got a slow brain, what's up with only 8 lines?
Guess the "**" around his name represent the quality of his rhymes!
ehh...

Don't use an opener like that ever again...other lines were iight tho.

Pop Lotty 11-30-04 05:20 PM

Your a fake thug be real...there's no chance in hell of u gettin a deal
Thats why he claps for his own posts in avatar cuz no one else will
This wasnt as played..when u used it..woulda been considered iight
Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"
type forced
Ya team called "brain matter" got weak "batters" cuz its poorly funded
U boast their elite but stats don't lie...ya rec suggets their below .500
ehhh.
Your constantly sayin' the name Tha Q even more than he himself do
So if he stays on the tip of your tongue what does that say about you?
lol...fag
You've got a better homo radar than any faggot alive on any given day
Cuz construction of ya being's like ya famous LL sayin.."every thread is gay"
wack to death, no punch
Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch
plizzayed
.....Mike Hawk's a scientific marvel that can amass any man great wealth
Cuz he's the world's 1st A sexual human...in every battle he fucks himself
ok
He views RV the way immigrants view the U.S......like its paved with gold
Its his lil slice of heaven cuz this is only place on earth his dick gets rode
blah..

Fucka YOU.

Logic The Goonie 11-30-04 09:36 PM

Ummm.

Back in business and led never ghosted for me. :D

Oh yeah,
*Poop* is a bitch.

headgames 11-30-04 09:46 PM

I didn't try at all but eh:

Tryin to get fame by battlin the game, damn shame
His name 'konvex', cuz skill wise, we all out of his 'range!'
Smoke this bitch like grass, he won't last, his lyrics are ass
He's original? hardly...had to bite his fuckin name from math!
Like 'JFK', I deliver lyrical 'assination', this bitch is gonna be dead
Thinks he dope, but like this kid's sig says
...'It's all in the head!'
You tried for the council, i'm the reason you aint in the crew
He's dope? nope, just uses superior methods to 'kon' you!
Think your immortal, well yeah, at being wack by far
Hit you hard and leave him mo' spun then his avatar!

line 2: Konvex lens is used for people who can't see things far away
line 3: Konvex and concave figures, learn about this in math
line 5&6: JFK was assinated by being shot in the head, his sig says "it's all in the head" so i'll assinate him like JFK, it's all in the head the bullets, you get it, and also cuz ya he thinks he's dope but it's all in the head
line 7&8: Kon like con, his name is 'kon'-vex, also his memeber title says immortal, and his avatar is a disc spinning

gunit101. 11-30-04 09:57 PM

The only line bordering on decency there is the out of range one. The rest is horrible.

Phantom 11-30-04 10:06 PM

^^You can help out if you want to sweet-cakes ;)

Tryin to get fame by battlin the game, damn shame
His name 'konvex', cuz skill wise, we all out of his 'range!'
word
Smoke this bitch like grass, he won't last, his lyrics are ass
He's original? hardly...had to bite his fuckin name from math!
almost
Like 'JFK', I deliver lyrical 'assination', this bitch is gonna be dead
Thinks he dope, but like this kid's sig says
...'It's all in the head!'
too simple
You tried for the council, i'm the reason you aint in the crew
He's dope? nope, just uses superior methods to 'kon' you!
wiggity whack
Think your immortal, well yeah, at being wack by far
Hit you hard and leave him mo' spun then his avatar!
wiggity whack x 2

Almost word at shad......I mean gunit

I've seen better.

headgames 11-30-04 10:08 PM

I didn't try :(

Phantom 11-30-04 10:13 PM

I think gunit should drop a verse.....a recent one.

:)

Master Minded 11-30-04 10:16 PM

I feel bad merkin you after L.I. just fucked yo ass up
Way you get beat, is like you wear to much make up (whored.... clowned)
Didnt see this merkin comin, like I murdered you in stealth
I dont like insultin you, but "for$aken" you do it to yourself
You can ask you crew for salvation, but there laughing to
And I'd tell you to pray to god, but he has already 'forsaken' you
Tryin to battle an mc like me, why'd you even think to bother
Battle is lookin like starwars "For$aken I am your father" (sonned)
My rhymes are like hot sauce, they leave you 'shakin'
Your physcick, saw ahead of time and named yourself For$aken

lmao ya, first battle on this account, way before I elevated, n e ways rate

Phantom 11-30-04 10:24 PM

I feel bad merkin you after L.I. just fucked yo ass up
Way you get beat, is like you wear to much make up (whored.... clowned)
nope
Didnt see this merkin comin, like I murdered you in stealth
I dont like insultin you, but "for$aken" you do it to yourself
nope
You can ask you crew for salvation, but there laughing to
And I'd tell you to pray to god, but he has already 'forsaken' you
noooooooo
Tryin to battle an mc like me, why'd you even think to bother
Battle is lookin like starwars "For$aken I am your father" (sonned)
oh lord jesus no
My rhymes are like hot sauce, they leave you 'shakin'
Your physcick, saw ahead of time and named yourself For$aken
*throws up*

...............................

.Fatal Lyricist. 11-30-04 10:24 PM

fuck is dis american idol are ya mods? r ya recordz perfect? no losses? den ya shoodnt b talkin shyt about otha niggas smell me cuz ya also lostat least once smell me 1

Phantom 11-30-04 10:31 PM

No I don't smell you fortunatly for me. :)

But we are some of the best on the site and have been screwed out of wins.

Plus, they respect our opinion's enough to drop a verse.

Soooooooooooooooooo, STFU.

headgames 11-30-04 10:32 PM

^^lmao at this kid^^ your an idiot, these guys are of the few who know what they are talking about.... I wanna rate to, I know how to rate a verse :)

headgames 11-30-04 10:47 PM

Am taking over for Mike...... let's get this poppin, me and phantom

headgames 11-30-04 11:01 PM

Bored so..... 4fil verse vs. Sabotage

This verse took me a while... but I didn’t flee rapverse
Takes thought preparing lines, all about you wackness
too simple man
He’s flowing electricity, but if he has power I doubt it
He raps so shocking;. he could cause a power outage
wack
He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich
Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch
pre school shit
“Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see
Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me
wack
Most kids got an alter ego but this kids got an ultra ego
“The building blocks of life” his blocks are just plain Lego
Getting closer
Another council member… must be their worst employee
Sabotage your whole operation, at trying to dickride me
gay
Hes to elusive, cause he rhymes wack so hes unnoticed
The council, their laws to be wack, so this is my protest
wack wack

Your trying to hard with the structure, your putting to much focus in it, take a look at some of the sites legends and how they battle, try to elevate from there, your coming too simple

Pop Lotty 11-30-04 11:14 PM

No you not..... =)

headgames 11-30-04 11:17 PM

Damn he's back *gives spot back to mike, begs for a spot also and gets slapped* damn, Mike your overall rec is as bad as mine :) We gotta be the dopest on the site who have wack recs :)

gunit101. 12-01-04 12:28 AM

Fine then. This is the last verse I dropped (the link is to the pic...), his name is pulse:

Quote:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v..._edge/pulse.jpg

thought this would be dope, but what's winning matter...
when they put me up against the retarded jimmy fallon?
got a rare habit, confused by the cam you just stare at it
and try pointing to ya homies for help...
but theres no one there, faggot
& you gotta be prepared, thought i warned you hos
cuz it seems like the curve life threw you, went & formed your nose
got a missing tooth there, & i was wondering why
but i found out it just up and ran for the hills, found under ya eyes
ya face's peaks and valley's, i'll tell ya how its looking, son
that ya cheek's sprouting another nose, to make up for ya crooked one
your site's a bad omen, i dont take it light dude
and i just hope posting that pic... won't crash this site too
watch this kid fall, with my fists' impact ya chin's mauled
cuz see, shadow's will leave pulsate, with no contracting involved
see, shadows edge is deadly, you'll never best me
cuz its clearly spelled out...
that the end of pulse, is always SE

YuNG TiLT 12-01-04 12:56 AM

^^damn 0-4 :nono:
15 char.

gunit101. 12-01-04 01:05 AM

damn... you suck.

Know-Gimix 12-01-04 01:07 AM

Iight I know Im the dopest text head ever... Peep Game

Im so ill, that I make kids catch colds
.... word, thats all.... peep the fuckin wordplay in that shit- So dope its non existant.

YuNG TiLT 12-01-04 01:09 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by gunit101.
damn... you suck.


:nono: :nono: :nono:
dont........lmao............
dont try, dont start......


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