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Lockdown 08-09-05 01:14 PM

YVonne wow look Your name it begins with YV
But after you face me its gonna end with an IV
Like pro athletes now im gonna get to bustin a sweat
Cause like the girl ur playin in ya sig u jus a fake threat
Im gonna say your wack because ill stick to my hunches
Like knockouts in round one youll stick to throwing no punches

MexicanGuy89 08-09-05 03:20 PM

Lockdown gettin the fuck smacked down,
Said he wanted dick to get the shit shoved down,
In his throat don't choke, I'll pull out quick, Quit,
Don't bite or I'll thrust harder, faster, so it hurts,
Machine gun style I will fucking cum in spurts,
And kill the shit out of ya tonsils and leave ya mouth disfigured,
Cuz my dick so big to imagine it think of a number followed by 20 figures,

Lockdown 08-09-05 05:35 PM

I would read your raps but it aint worth my time
Your rhyme scheme is stale even your status is OFF line
You are right you have a big dick but its up your ass hole
Talking all this sex game dickin other men are you a homo?
Well guess what Lock is a female with more skill than you
Come back when you improve your shit ill let you off coz ur new

ILL GEE 08-10-05 04:16 PM

that last line might work on MG but I'm far from a newbie
ain't never had a cunjugal visit but known to "Lockdown" a coochie
get ya rhymes right... you started off weak and ya ended weaker
"guess what? Lock is a female"... in desperate need of a teacher
It's obvious you don't know who I am so don't try to pretend to
I'll send you my calling card... Ill-Grammatix from Merk Central...

ehhh... i'll reclaim my rightful spot in here when i see some REAL comp

Lockdown 08-10-05 05:17 PM

do you need a lung transplant because your wasting time to breathe
Maybe da problem is verbal diarrhoea speaking shit on good emcees
I dont need your calling card because thats a number i wont dial
Butt as your a homo ill give it to my homeboy he aint had dick in a while
And you on about real comp son you need will need to up your game
People know who i am your like prince your all symbols and no name

X-tortion 08-10-05 10:30 PM

I always push death to authors..cause what was dealt is proper
White target shine marking after I drop her..from helicopters
Flows shock ya worse than..bein caught, pausin by surprize
Nothin I located dangerous in this mc..caution is advised
She might be spreadin lies..like her weekly routes tricking
Her skills like gwen stefani's group..no doubt it's missing
Intelligience..it's evident the only way she goes..to fall on knees
Even rapists won't take it..her face is ugly as..arsenio hall on D

PhreeNapdizzle 08-11-05 12:33 AM

If you offer caution.. then im ur death threat
ill scare ya ass away.. make ur dripping sweat set
and in ya best bet, you should probably flee the country
n tell ur mom to stop blocking.. Geeze! do something!!
Get off your ass. cuz noone's supportin X-tortion
your mom n dad should've filed for-an abbortion

#1 Prospect 08-11-05 01:46 AM

this nigga law jr got pictures of fifty cent/ your monkey lookin ass look like you belong in g-unit
nigga look at ya plain fitted/ thats da same way ya raps is ya get it
me i spit shit raw/ and i can make you not talk but then i be disobeyin da law
and you quotin to tell othas how to make money/ but why aint you makin money you fuckin dummy
thats ya best outfit cause ya clothes is bummy/ nigga you look african is you hungry

#1 Prospect 08-11-05 01:52 AM

fuck i was lookin on da wrong page but fuck it now

lyrical^murder 08-11-05 01:17 PM

my effect is perfect to infect a defect like number 1 prospect...
subject of an anal bisect..and want respect...what he expect
an erect dick inject and eject is all he gonna get
actin like a fukin millionaire whos disobeyin the law
his balls are not even a pair n getin turn ons wearing bra
now what should i do with this nigga....shouldi have it easy n pull the trigga
or should i use the chainsaw...and leave his genitals with a tragic flaw

noname 08-11-05 08:20 PM

talking about giving him anul bisest,when he doesn't mind
n look at your first bar,you saying shit cause it rhymes
you got nothing better to say than to hate on what he wears
and how is spittin in a cypher on the net like a millionare?
And that last bar,shit ain't rhyme,and it made no sense
and why ya want his genitals for?,ya got something with men?

Pro. 08-11-05 09:00 PM

Blah,Blah...Blah!....Wack,Wack...Wack!
Rah,Rah...RAH!!!....Smack that slack jack rap!
Jack Black?.....Naw,He like Colt .45..sippin on cosmo's!
Lah-zo,What?....I dont know ur name like why?
I write shit that hits hard...stupid fuck,Head stay in tha sky.
Who....or what is it Im textin..
............................................got it lookin like a crash in a inner-section!
May-B its wack...(yep!)...but it still tops ur dinner selection.

^^^Dope!!!!


I know...Yall think Im the greatest! :thumbup:

noname 08-11-05 09:14 PM

your nothing but an unimpressive clown,sole holder of the unpreccended crown
in this,you better of not making a sound,and killin you,it's not even taking a round
Blah-Blah-Blah?,don't front,it's your best,while you know you bit the rest
I'm hosting the cypher,and I just hit the guests,for spitten shit,makin my house a mess
All I see is feces,in my screen,that whackness could sin your dreams
it's obvious your a teen with female genes,based on the way you screamed

Pro. 08-11-05 10:16 PM

Me take you serious.......Naw not likely!
Fight me?...trash talkin just tah spite me..you might be...
Tha next ta swallow a round,and I aint talkin bout liqour!
Im tha black hitler evadin ur space......
.................................................. ...erasin ur face!
Hey,This cypher here!.....is just for Brags!
Unlike you fags....ridin dick wit ur mug jus for gags! :spit:

^^^ :laugh:

noname 08-12-05 01:52 AM

that shit is gibberesh,4-1 record just tells me you a lucky hoe
n your shit made no sense(cents),like beggers in tuxedo's
Riding dick with ur mugs jus for gags?
................................................th at sopposed to mean something?
n you flappin your lips,dat ain't metas,nah,that shit means one-thing
Or actually,on 2nd thought,it doesn't mean anything,
cuz u a empty fridge,wit nutin on the table to bring
that verse neva get age though,because it's one em neva go-old rhymes
N it must suck bad when ya put a laughin smilie at ur own rhymes

-=Paradox=- 08-12-05 08:37 AM

Stunna..Rape-Blunders-and-Rip-they-Crew, no multis...and your posts numba-EIGHT-HOUNDRED-AND-FIF-TAY-TWO???!!!! WTF

no onez Scared-of-u-yappin..Me?? imma Character-assassin....I'm 'over this bitch'.. don't Care-for-her-flappin..u rhyme like ur home...a fukkn Trash-Bin!!!.....True Story...

You've gotta the WACCIST-SPIT, fucc all ya craftless-shyt I'll make sure ya casket-fits
I'm brash-with-fits spin ya like Gymnastic-flips... I got 10 posts..but my skill?? You got less than HALF-OF-IT!!!!!

SEIK 08-12-05 02:50 PM

Paradox is raps savior, thats the perfect paradox based on ya behavior-
your rhymes so bitter i cant savor, your distasteful and foul flavor
your never gonna win just change ya name to MC Ralph Nader
dot dot, a capital dash, space paragraph, space dot dash
you so worried about the decoration your rhymes a laugh
i couldn't understand a sentence your rhymes make even less sence
then bush discussin how attackin Iraq was strictly for our defences
so far everything Ive seen you dispense is, worthless like three foot fences

noname 08-12-05 08:35 PM

why you drop that for?,you shoulda kept that to crunch at home
in that whole verse up here^^,there's not one punch thrown
All I hear from you,is "blah-blah-blah",u don't even know what u doin
but you outta quit,cause you whack now,and ya elevation't not moving
talking about decoration and shit,when it has nutin to do with dissing
and if you had punches,well damn homie,all of them are missing

¤ÐÅž¤ 08-12-05 09:23 PM

damn, n i thought the dude way before you was wack
you didnt hafta follow suit... your the fuckin track
your wordings ass, even talking outta your right cheeks
this killas a holy veg.. n his skills still dont fuckin leek
dude im trashing ya spits to quick, so kick ya pityful shit
cuz with skill you dieing, so you really are naturally killin it

noname 08-12-05 09:35 PM

that verse is like the goverment branches,with divisions descrete
ur verses,like ya name,seems to wanna say something,but it's incomplete
u think you can step to me,clapin worthy,when ya can't be a menase to herbs
look at your name..."DAZ"....what?..you don't wanna finish the word
or maybe,it's cause you don't know how it's spelled,thicker than raw bone
2 Z's(sleep) and 1 L,n while ur name may lack it,your verses sure don't

¤ÐÅž¤ 08-13-05 09:38 AM

this dudes a bitch.. no really i think this dames a scrub,
cuz this killa's skill 'rolls bear' like his name was 'j-cub',
fuck this assinine, aint no1 ever gonna treasure your shit,
cuz stretching ya lines, dont increase the measure of ya wit,
5-1..? well proofs in the rec.. even herbs have you out gunned
i mean if ya gave me a full moon, eyes still wouldnt be sonned,

DJ BANANAZ 08-13-05 01:44 PM

if this dude went to jail i bet his ass whole would be ringing bells....
i stuff ya ass like a pancake like andy milanokis .....dont diss me killa
its like michale jackson and this bitch is the triller

6 Line Minimum

-Ysd@-

noname 08-13-05 05:44 PM

As for bananas faggot...I ain't even gonna bother with you
couldn't even spit 10 lines,shit,who the fuck is you?
Yeah bitch,I rhymed the same words twice,still better than that^^
Cause u didn't even rhyme at all,so you stay cool,and lay on the mat

As for Daz.....
say I ain't no killa then decide to run at sight like a sub-rat
& J-cub?,that sopposed to be a punch?,nah,more like a love tap
you a liar,making shit up that don't exist,another lame person to fall
only stretched lines is the marks on ya belly,y u makin fake personals for?
stuck like conspitation,how ya gonna shoot,when I plastered the gun?
n the only wreck(rec.) you got to show,is ya face after I'm done

Germ 08-16-05 12:33 AM

now settle down bitch, think before you run your mouth
called this lame duck out for pink slip...but he had already flown south
but seriously, take off with your shit, just take the hint bro
we're all sick of your rhymes....so they flu out the window
6-1 eh, well try battling someone good, until then, can it
talking about rex? i'll wipe yours out faster than meteors hitting the planet

noname 08-16-05 01:02 AM

hiding ya rec.,ashamed,might as well be bitin ya neck
I'l trow ya inside the decks,n nobody'd buy ya text
you got ya hands cut off in the punchline cypher,y come here?
cuz u leavin the docks is how u get liked by your peirs/peers
I ain't fly south,I set the battle up,and then I saw you started to run
tellin me to battle someone good,hmm,ya right,esspecially this one

Germ 08-16-05 01:18 AM

lol, how to i back off from telling you to battle me pink slip

you're caught up in your ego dude, but you were definately bailing
nothing but a son of a beach, for shore...so ima give you a whaleing
thats real clever, using a pier punch, when its been used all week
natural a-mountain to anything? look, you're not even worth a peak
breaking this tool..... screw it, i'll drive this bitch right to the ground
cause like undiscovered fossils....his skill has yet to be found...

meh @ the last line, im tired and going to bed.

noname 08-16-05 01:23 AM

sayin my peir punch is played when ya got no link to show?
bitch don't front,ya skill ain't thigh to nothing,like legless hoes
so here's a tip,use a punch,but it's won't help ya,u blind mice
cause your verse wouldn't be terrorizin,with clever add-vice
sayin ya goin to bed,cuz you ain't got no punches left,n no talent
u talkin on the net,with a bucket on ya head still have u IM-Balanced

Germ 08-16-05 01:33 AM

lmlo @ you having to edit everything you post in cyphers, haha

nah, genuinely need some sleep, i'll get back at ya tomorrow :shoot:

noname 08-16-05 01:37 AM

I edited my post for the italic's.....

X-tortion 08-16-05 08:30 PM

In complete denial..ya release styles tryin to update actual fillers
You're a harmless test tube..why ya even named natural killa
Like richard..gere in unfaithful lyrics..I easily replace that bull
Don't need mafia interest of debts..so ya torture's paid in full
Ya hardly a nuisense..so sharp..have ya main arteries oozing
Only Eric B you listened to..just beginnin to sing R&B music
Prepare to shine?..Shut ya down..ya blocks won't resale a dime
If he stole at lexus car lots..he still not able to detail a crime

noname 08-20-05 05:40 PM

that verse is all over the place,like you a juggler
your rhymes are stretched out like a muther fucker
I'm beatin this,shit,you ain;t doubting,u know I'm real as shit
Cuz you dropped more than the minumim lines
.................................................. ...............but you didn't even diss!!
All I heard was blah-blah-blah,no wonder you neva battles
cuz you'll get diss-owned e-xortion n it ain't worth the tattle

MEh..w/e

MexicanGuy89 08-21-05 11:03 PM

This nigga up in here trying to rap, Says he's a "Natural Killa",
But his raps full of shit like McDonalds food...Hambuger Filla,
Nigga I try to Pass the Punch but you didn't leave a line,
Another broke muthafucka got his hopes up think he can rhyme,
Try something else nigga, Like cleaning up shit,
White owned places hire negros who are physically fit,
That shit aint changed, Just now you don't come over here on ships,
You and me, One negro, And one god damn spic,
Kick up dust try our hardest trying to spit,
At each other, but we should help each other cuz we supposedly hated,
White muthafuckas call you niggers and my kind dont got papers,
But fuck that you fucking stupid..... holla at ya black ass laters,

noname 08-23-05 12:13 AM

hamburgers?..bitch if u wanna do that gay shit then just go to lunch
but over here...do us a favor,just stop droppin trash n throw a punch
funny u mention ships,when my shit saled n you the first to cop it
and i did pass the punch,but sadly,some bitch like you dropped it
talkin bout white this,black this,is being malcolm your next mission?
like persistant invokers,your mexican ass is full of only re-petition

X-tortion 08-23-05 02:22 PM

Natural embarrassment..how ya sig holds the book of life
& you a crook that slice crackrocks..before cooking pipes
Don't battle..cause in moments cops tackle..you squealin bitch
Dog feces on ya slide shows..the reason you're reel as shit
Which is practically fake..don't fuck around til ya anatomy raped
Can't tell me no names of the dames..that you actually date
RapVerse implies you're more gay..than rich simmons spandex
So what else is it fruity..that ya mind's engine planned next?

noname 08-23-05 04:30 PM

i got the spandex boi?,nah,n you the 1st to feel the belt
wanna rip on my sig?,well how's bout gettin one yaself
this a cypher for rappers,so tell me why you come bargin
u got more hose rejectin u,like broken down gardens
anotomy raped ain't a punch ,u scopin whackness primal
& u speakin for RV?
....bitch take a look at your user title

X-tortion 08-23-05 07:47 PM

Ya styles a force?..I molest young flows..like pedophiles of course
Feedin off me so frequent..ya mom gives checks 4 child support
It's not natural killing wit fillers..so ya best leave the lectures
Dial the corps...to help ya ship support to ya meager efforts
Sequence similar to God..as ya body left bleedin on the yard
Leakin pitiful flows to harm..ya glass jaw's beat into shards
Tired of weaklings that see things..like they're invincible to all
Inspirin dreams..petty games who's size too miniscule & falls
Deeper than abyss..arms & legs buckle from sleeper hold bitch
Don't ever say ya handle dopeness..palms never keep a dosage
Bleed wit clean punch..like hippies during war..you seek for peace
Crucify ya though..you'll never be Jesus..you always be a thief

noname 08-23-05 08:39 PM

get it str8,big words don't make you nice,you hear?
u tryna hide the whackness,like it was coverin a bear
streched like shit,damn,complexity isn't just long lines
what you even doin here?,read the tutorials before tryna rhyme
this ain't open mic so why focus so highly on vocabulary?
like sad untenisals wrote that,cuz u should be in the pen-i-teary


Goining above the line minumim just for me?...WOW..I'm that dope then :cool:

Sik Wit It 08-24-05 04:15 AM

kid's go no brains.. plus his so called "skills".. is lame
so i'll give this kid two L's.. like just like damn username
i'll leave this fish strangled on the net.. kid's a waste of time
claims he's a killa..
..but he cant kill anyone with his weakass rhymes
we know ur K-Trini.. so i'll throw him on the rack like a coat
11-1? please.. u only winnin battles.. cus yo ass AIM's for votes

noname 08-24-05 06:24 PM

editing ur post to attempt to futily deprive whackness?,well ur wrong
'fuck what you heard' is what we say after seein listenin to ur songs
i'm k-trini bitch,i don't matter,all the beef,n bitches like u get the hate
rape ur family persistantly solely for the honor for them to die-late (dilate)
your shit don't flow faggot,it's whack,like kindergardeners sewn
before tryna hate on my record,at least get something on your own

Pro. 08-24-05 07:30 PM

This mans wack..HIs virus is air born.."ERY'BODY STAND BACK!"
Talkin bout throwin punches...He's a sissy he only lands Slaps!
Ur rhymes are throw backs.....I feel what rap was like in tha past!
This mans garbage...ery'verse is like he recycled tha trash.
K-trini?...I guess ur records kind'ah deceiving..
Now I guess ur retreating...Cuz I know ur u got ur wins from relying on cheating!

What up ole'skool!


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